Forbidden Land: Play as the God Brother at the Beginning

This book is the only good book I have read in the Tomb Raiders fandom for so long. The character of the protagonist has not collapsed. The plot is fascinating and has many doubts, but it also leaves a lot of room for the reader's imagination. The plot is fast-paced and interlocking. It has both ordinary daily life and exciting adventures. In the exploration of the situation, there are both dangerous journeys, hilarious moments, and tearful scenes. The author will probably continue to develop in this way. The rating of this book will definitely be high and not low. As long as the characters and plot don't collapse first, and don't be like the original work written by a stolen pen. The more I write, the more I write, the more I will follow. Come on, the author, work hard to update, it's not enough (big, hungry, rice [knock on the bowl])

The author writes so well, the innocent fat guy and the little brother, the characters are not broken, I like it so much. Found a treasure, the author will update quickly [love][love][love][like][like][like]

Those who like to steal the Iron Triangle of Pens can be fooled! The current character of the actor is neither OOC nor Long Aotian! Wu Xie and Fatty are not just camera decorations, the three of them get along very naturally. The Zhang family is not evil inside! Remember! I don't hate the Zhang family, I don't like the Zhang family's selective viewing! It's just a bit lacking. QAQ recommends reading the first chapter before starting the game! The author still needs a lot of support. The highest rating will be given first, and the rating will be suppressed if there are other ratings)

It's so good, but not enough. The author will update it soon. If you like it｡ﾟﾟ･｡･ﾟﾟ｡ ﾟ. ｡ﾟ ﾟ･｡･ﾟ ( ╲ / / ╲ ╲/ / ╲ ╲ / ╭ ͡ ╲ ╲ ╭ ͡ ╲ ╲ ﾉ ╭ ͡ ╲ ╲ ╱ ╲

The newly found Pirates of Pen fanfic is quite interesting. I haven't seen any surprises yet. It has elements of forbidden areas and stolen pens. The original plot is also good. The male protagonist is not just playing the role of a younger brother. He is more like the person who reappeared after losing his memory.

It's good-looking, the little Zhangs are crazy and a little cute. They are gathered together not because of the head of the Zhang family, but because of Zhang Qiling. They are impressed by Zhang Qiling's personal charm. Zhang Qiling is the belief of the Zhang family, the rope that holds the sanity of the little Zhangs. Without Zhang Qiling, the Zhang family would not be called the Zhang family.

It's not brainless or bloody, and the characters are played very thoroughly. It's really unfolded from the perspective of the protagonist. It's not objectively incorporating the tombs in the tomb robbing notes, but using familiar locations to write the plot in different ways, thereby enriching the character image. Everyone has flesh and blood and their own story. The protagonist is the actor, who plays the role of the brother. However, as the plot gets deeper and deeper, he feels that the protagonist is the brother. From the moment the protagonist starts traveling through the system, he is clearly told that they are companions, comrades, and never enemies.

1. The content is entirely written by the author himself, and there is no adventure process exactly the same as "Notes on Digging a Pit" 2. Forbidden land, live broadcast (to satisfy most people's tastes) 3. Have brains! Have a brain! Have a brain! Say important things three times! The setting of this book has a certain logic! 4. Very restorative, not OOC! (Especially my brother) 5. Updates are relatively stable, but a bit sparse. Come on Duck! The author, please don't give up! Please! (Personal opinion, please don't make excuses, my parents are still alive)

Very good. I personally feel that there is no poisonous point at the moment, there is no OOC, there is no weird stuff, and there really is no heroine. The current logic is OK.

It's well written. Apart from the themes of the forbidden area, the original ancient tombs are very well written and make people get deeper into the situation. There are also the complicated relationships between the Nine Gates, the Wang Family, and the Zhang Family, which make people want to continue reading.

This book is so well written and has great ideas. The characters are three-dimensional, the plot is sketchy, and the plot has ups and downs. The little brother's petty writing at certain times is also very good. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It looks good~ I can accept it if I don't take CP, just brotherly love. It turns out that little Zhangs are the Zhang family controlled by the patriarch. Yes, yes, the little brother has changed from a chess piece to a chess player.

It's very interesting. The characters are not ruined. The characters are described in detail. It is different from other fan fiction. The content is novel. It seems that the characters in the original work live different lives and experience some different stories, but they are still the same people. I am looking forward to it. I am very optimistic about this book. I will give you a lot of support from the author. ٩(๑•̀ω•́๑)۶

In fact, I strangely like this kind of article where the Zhang family is the backer, and I think the image of the younger brother is actually strangely restored. The author's literary talent is amazing. (I think) But no matter what, overall this book is highly recommended, it's great! ! !

Hmm, nice looking. I like the ups and downs of the plot, especially the well-written battles. I'm happy. Hope you can stick to it until the end.

I didn't have high expectations at first, but as I read it, I was actually surprised. Very well written. The article flows smoothly and doesn't feel abrupt or anything. All in all, it looks great! ! ! ! ٩(๑^O^๑)۶

This book is one of the best among all the books I have read about little brother. First of all, this guy is not OOC, and then Audio-Technica is also very good! The plot is also nice! There are no superfluous characters to steal the show, in short, they are some of the super good-looking ones among my fellow fans! The little brother with the big description is really cute! ! There is also a group of little Zhangs and Da Zhangs who care about me. They are so cute that it makes my face bleed! ! !

Before I clicked on it, I thought it was some kind of role-playing novel, and it might be written along the lines of the original Tomb Raiders. I have read this book, and I don't want to read the same plot, for example, adding an extra person or something. I thought it was monotonous at the beginning, so I wanted to skip reading. But if I continue reading, I will find that it is very interesting. Unlike other fan fiction, the plot is very clever, but there is no ending.

It looks good, but updates are too slow. What's good about him is that he doesn't have a bad character. It's not like some novels where the little brother has collapsed into something unknown. You can take a look. It's good-looking.

Not bloody. There are no messy emotional lines. There is also a small plot of persecuting the third uncle. The method of dealing with the old 9 gates is also very nice, Xiao Zhang. The description of the madness of the patriarch also touched my heart very much. It's so addictive, I keep wanting to watch it, but the updates are a bit slow. A very good book worth reading.

The writing is very good, keep up the good work, there is no OOC, you can read it smoothly! ! ! @ This book is very good, do you read it?

It's really super good-looking. The back part is really, really good-looking. Please don't stop updating it~ Please don't stop updating it [crying]

Looks good, nothing particularly surprising The characters are not OOC and their actions are logical. Fluent writing

Author, please don't stop updating. This book is really good. It's understandable if you have something to deal with, but you must not stop updating.

Very good-looking, I also like this guy very much

I really like this book, it fits my feelings so well. This is one of the few novels I have read, and it is my favorite among them. The plot is also very interesting, so the author please update me [smile][smile][smile]

Thumbs up, no OOC, the plot is great, the author will update soon

Damn, you don't have OOC, the setting is great, there are no excessive emotional lines, you are original and have connotation. Come on, I'm waiting for you to come back! !

Come on, author! Looking forward to your next update, more please! !

I like my character design, it's so vivid and relevant! I hope the author will post 200 updates a day