I Spoke with the Ancients, and the Secret of My Immortality Was Exposed

A very good book so far

Color!!! The writing style is a bit immature, but it's innocuous. There are no particularly big poisonous points. It is a pity that some important time points are not described in depth (such as the moment when you leave the dreamland, when you and Ji Dian massacre the entire clan and then return to the dreamland. More words can be spent here to deepen empathy). @ (Let me tell you first that I am very optimistic about your book, so I would like to give you some sincere suggestions). I suggest you read "Raising All Humans" and don't watch anything else. Just watch the battles between heroes and the rise and fall of dynasties. The author may not be very good at writing handovers, but his ability to empathize is indeed very good. Every time he writes about the loneliness of the dynasty or the battle, there is always an epic feeling when the hero is lonely.

What a strange way of writing. It's not a noob. It skips some small details and uses big history as a canvas. It saves a lot of poisonous points, boring and similar processes. The writing style uses this historical narrative technique. It's very good. I'm looking forward to the follow-up.

I have read chapter eighty-five so far. This book is very interesting. Although it is a live broadcast, it does not have the poisonous points of a live broadcast. Most of the comments from the audience are useful and can help readers better understand this article. The time in the front is not specific and there are too many comments from the audience, but the author is obedient and there are almost no such problems later. In reality, except for Pan Qing and the expedition team who were frozen into ice sculptures, there is not much description. Pan Qing was only described a little at the beginning, but nothing later. It's great to know the priorities. It looks better after leaving the Dream Realm, but it's just a little less. The author has consulted the books and the grand background view, and there is a high probability that it will not be updated. Come on! Aim for five chapters a day! (I always feel like the author has a side job)

From Chapter 1 to Chapter 41, the subject matter is novel and the writing is good. However, the comments from netizens are a bit watery. They can be improved. Two or three comments will suffice. There are very few comments from netizens later. Most of them are the author's reflections and interpretations of what he has learned. Those who are smart about reading can take a look at it. However, some parts are a little dull and boring. I have reached Chapter 406.

The author's ideas are novel, integrating mythology and stories, and he has his own creative ideas, which are not obtrusive and have reasonable support. Very nice. According to me, a 15-year-old bookworm, it is pretty good among tomatoes. You can read it, but the content is too little. I only want to read the finished novel.

This is the first time I have seen this kind of book. It is very novel. Overall, it is quite ordinary (you can probably guess it) and has a slow pace. As far as I can tell, this book is probably a long one and not too toxic. Overall, it is quite comfortable to read. It is good to be ordinary.

Girls. . Hey-hey. So many beautiful girls. . I consulted many literature and classics, which gave me a sense of déjà vu. Of course, this is a compliment. I haven't seen such a thick online article in a long time. The last time I read it was in A Weird Fairy. Overall, it is a novel worth reading, and the author must have put a lot of effort into it. Very good novel, love comes from Dahao.

Well, not bad, it looks good. Don't forget me, author. I am the first one to give you five stars.

Excellent work, but the rating is a bit low. The group portraits are very well written, and basically everyone has their highlight moment. I personally think it can be rated 9 points or higher. If it can maintain this level in the future, it will definitely be a masterpiece.