I Built Heaven in Ancient Times and Was Discovered by Modern People

A very good book so far

Color!!! The writing style is a bit immature, but it's innocuous. There are no particularly big poisonous points. It is a pity that some important time points are not described in depth (such as the moment when you leave the dreamland, when you and Ji Dian massacre the entire clan and then return to the dreamland. More words can be spent here to deepen empathy). @ (Let me tell you first that I am very optimistic about your book, so I would like to give you some sincere suggestions). I suggest you read "Raising All Humans" and don't watch anything else. Just watch the battles between heroes and the rise and fall of dynasties. The author may not be very good at writing handovers, but his ability to empathize is indeed very good. Every time he writes about the loneliness of the dynasty or the battle, there is always an epic feeling when the hero is lonely.

What a strange way of writing. It's not a noob. It skips some small details and uses big history as a canvas. It saves a lot of poisonous points, boring and similar processes. The writing style uses this historical narrative technique. It's very good. I'm looking forward to the follow-up.

I have read chapter eighty-five so far. This book is very interesting. Although it is a live broadcast, it does not have the poisonous points of a live broadcast. Most of the comments from the audience are useful and can help readers better understand this article. The time in the front is not specific and there are too many comments from the audience, but the author is obedient and there are almost no such problems later. In reality, except for Pan Qing and the expedition team who were frozen into ice sculptures, there is not much description. Pan Qing was only described a little at the beginning, but nothing later. It's great to know the priorities. It looks better after leaving the Dream Realm, but it's just a little less. The author has consulted the books and the grand background view, and there is a high probability that it will not be updated. Come on! Aim for five chapters a day! (I always feel like the author has a side job)

From Chapter 1 to Chapter 41, the subject matter is novel and the writing is good. However, the comments from netizens are a bit watery. They can be improved. Two or three comments will suffice. There are very few comments from netizens later. Most of them are the author's reflections and interpretations of what he has learned. Those who are smart about reading can take a look at it. However, some parts are a little dull and boring. I have reached Chapter 406.

This is the first time I have seen this kind of book. It is very novel. Overall, it is quite ordinary (you can probably guess it) and has a slow pace. As far as I can tell, this book is probably a long one and not too toxic. Overall, it is quite comfortable to read. It is good to be ordinary.

The author's ideas are novel, integrating mythology and stories, and he has his own creative ideas, which are not obtrusive and have reasonable support. Very nice. According to me, a 15-year-old bookworm, it is pretty good among tomatoes. You can read it, but the content is too little. I only want to read the finished novel.

Girls. . Hey-hey. So many beautiful girls. . I consulted many literature and classics, which gave me a sense of déjà vu. Of course, this is a compliment. I haven't seen such a thick online article in a long time. The last time I read it was in A Weird Fairy. Overall, it is a novel worth reading, and the author must have put a lot of effort into it. Very good novel, love comes from Dahao.

Well, not bad, it looks good. Don't forget me, author. I am the first one to give you five stars.

Yes, the author's literary quality is quite high, which is rare in Tomato. The plot is also okay. The advance of the previous plot is a bit slow, but it still feels quite good after reading it. The quality of this book is quite high so far.

Excellent work, but the rating is a bit low. The group portraits are very well written, and basically everyone has their highlight moment. I personally think it can be rated 9 points or higher. If it can maintain this level in the future, it will definitely be a masterpiece.

I already know the plot of this book. Defeat the gods and create a fairyland. Like Haotian before, the foreshadowing has already been laid. Although the plot can be seen at a glance, I hope these words will inspire the author. Let the author develop a more novel path instead of the same old path. This should be an upgrade stream, a semi-cool article, and this career. I hope there will be opportunities to change careers in the future, otherwise most people will have given up on that career. It can be seen that the author wants to write a brain-burning fantasy masterpiece, but the author's strength is there. I suggest that if you can't write it, don't force it, otherwise it will only ruin the book. I have seen too many such cases. All in all, I hope this book will get better and better [Like]

I have read the latest chapters in one go. It can be said that it ranks among the top novels I have read. The world view is also quite grand, with few flaws. It is slow to gain traction, but this slow build-up is an advantage. You will find it very interesting in the process. Come on, I hope the back looks as good as the front.

The subject matter is novel, clean and full, and the five stars are well deserved. The only shortcoming is that if this book is to be completed without ending, it will have to be more than 1,000 chapters later. It takes too long, and what I personally want to see is when it comes into contact with modern people, so I'm sorry [face covering]

This is the most shocking novel I have ever read! That's right, it's shocking! I can't find any other adjectives. It abandons all writing techniques I have ever seen and creates an unprecedented novel writing angle. I've read a lot of Tomato novels, and I wouldn't touch any of them if it scored below nine, but if it scored above nine, I'd still be looking forward to this book. I have seen, but not limited to, high-scoring male-video masterpieces such as "The End of Days", "The God of Play", "Beheading the God", "Strong", "Zhuang Sheng's Dream of Butterflies", "Ember of the Immortal", "Sequence: Ascending the Gods", "The Lost City", etc., But I have never seen anything as extraordinary as this work. The book adopts a double-line interspersion, with the main line of the world of mountains and seas supplemented by the modern timeline. It is also advanced through changes in the third-person perspective and the first-person perspective, both from the perspective of the protagonist Zhang Liang and from the perspective of the protagonist in each small chapter. Often a short chapter runs through the life of the protagonist. The life of the protagonist in each small chapter is used to implement the development history of Zhang Liang or Taihao Kingdom. I would like to call this novel a virtual history, a fictional world history that uses the structure of the Prehistoric Classics but transcends the structure of the Prehistoric Classics. The author is too weak, or maybe I am a little impatient and can't stand slow-paced novels. But if you are used to reading slow-paced novels, you can give it a try. This work is quite enjoyable.

This book is really awesome. Friends, don't think the score is a bit low. Just look at the number of people watching. You will know it. The subject matter is novel, and the author's writing style is also good. He is especially knowledgeable and covers a wide range of topics! Watching the protagonist and human beings progress step by step really makes me want to stop reading. Now, only a few dozen chapters have been viewed by hundreds of thousands. Yesterday and today, I found that the number of viewers increased by more than 10,000, which is scary! I hope that the author will maintain his standard and continue writing. I also recommend everyone to read it. It is worth your time to read. If you continue to keep up, it will definitely become a hit. If it becomes popular in the future, I look forward to you coming to check in with me [laughs]

Okay, I admit it, I think, for me, I like it, I really, I love reading this book! Okay, it's a little cool, a little short, a little brainy, look. Well, I don't know, I don't know, I have to, I won't no, book!

The writing is very good, there are no logic bugs in the whole film, but there are some parts that are obviously written well, and the problem is not big. In the early stage, it gave me the feeling that I am a god, a novel of this type, four stars. I have a few problems here. One is that it lacks a part of the epic feeling. Of course, everyone has their own ambitions, and some people may feel that the problem is not big. Comparative comments are subjective. The second is that the title of the book has not yet been revealed. 200 Chapters is not too many, not too few, and part of the book may be finished quickly. Not to mention the exposure of immortality, the dialogue through eternity has not been shown. In the early stage, it was said that you can use devices to talk to people in the past. The ancients would feel like they were in a dream, but this setting has not appeared yet.

Before Chapter 40, this book was considered to be a book with a relatively novel subject matter and relatively good content writing! But after Chapter 40, I inevitably followed the same path as other books! Upgrade, fight monsters, build a kingdom, create heaven, and become a god step by step! It looks like the past history of the earth! In fact, the writing is more like the kind of thing about the imperial court of cultivating immortals in another world! Beat the little monsters, and then the old monsters! How to say it? It's like cultivating immortality in another world, and then after completing your cultivation in the human world, you start to practice fighting monsters again in the heaven! Finally, defeat the boss and save the world in its entirety! It's around Chapter 40. Anyway, the book is quite interesting. You can take a look at the content after that. In fact, you can see the ending at a glance without even looking at it! At most, it's just that the author is different from what other authors wrote! Well, that's why I didn't read it later. If there's anything strange or novel, please give me a review and I'll take another look!

The level is very high, but the first volume has just finished. Let's see how it goes in the future. It's a rare work in Tomatoes that doesn't skip chapters.

It's a magical book. It's a pity that the name and introduction are not right. The plot is fast but very detailed! The first five-star review book. The last time I read such a good novel was "Raising All Humans", which was also delayed by the name.

It's so beautiful, but I just can't get enough of it. Although I'm short on words, I still have to say that I like the creativity very much. I really like this book. Good luck to the author. It's hard to describe what the heroine said. The protagonist feels like he has no feelings for his wife at all, like a ruthless stallion. It's quite cool to change his wife, and he won't be sad even if he dies.

Give it four stars to support it. The author's outline seems to depict a very magnificent world view, but the plot is too slow. I skipped it while watching it. It was boring to watch because I didn't appreciate the excitement, which made it difficult for me to stick to it.

Don't look at his title, his text is still very good. ①The subject matter is relatively novel, and the specific characteristics of the characters are not so prominent, but it gives people a particularly smooth feeling. ② In terms of plot, there are ideas to attract readers, but it does not feel that ups and downs, and there is a lack of some foreshadowing. Of course, it is also possible that too little has been written and has not been revealed. ③ It can only be said to be a rare novel. The quality of Tomato's recent new books has dropped a lot. It is basically considered a rare and relatively promising new book. Suggested areas for improvement by the author: ① There is some delay in some places. When writing about things experienced in the past, it intersects with the current live broadcast. First of all, it is not discernible enough, allowing readers to distort his original meaning and confuse the past and the present. Secondly, there are a lot of overlaps in some aspects, which makes it awkward for readers to read, and it looks a bit watery. It is recommended that the author focus on writing about the past time, and about what happened in the present, he can briefly mention it, and at the same time, he can create some foreshadowing in the present. For example, people may mention it casually, but the past situation is the same as this column. ② In terms of characterization, you can focus on narrating some people, and portray his character from his appearance, language and behavior, which may be more prominent. ③The author can be bolder when writing, and the past and reality can be more intertwined. Didn't you also say that it should be carried out on two lines? You can mainly focus on one side, but the other side also needs a little dramatic conflict. ④I hope you will be more skillful when writing those straightforward words! ! ! Don't be blocked😱

It's very interesting to read, and the plot is good, but the title of the book feels too popular. Ahhhhh, author, can you hurry up? It's so uncomfortable [crying][crying][crying][crying]

The sky is falling. Originally, I didn't have any desire to read. I just wanted to read this book because it was good-looking, and I wanted to read it long enough. I had already finished reading the previous ones, but when I was halfway through it, suddenly, I discovered that he had stopped updating.

It is the best interspersed series among the mythological books that I have seen. It connects multiple mythological stories almost perfectly, and it makes me understand why many mythological stories are done the way they are. This is the biggest highlight of this book, looking at the development of a civilization and the development of mythology, which is something that most other novels cannot do. However, what I personally feel is not good is that women appear too frequently... Especially in the later perspectives, which almost always feature a new female protagonist... The emotional aspects of the protagonist are written very immaturely, and are completely written in a one-to-one way like those who write mythological and civilized stories [eating melon]. But this is harmless. After all, there are many people who like to watch seductive plots. This is probably what attracts this group of people.

Nice! ! ! I just feel that the time span between the first and second volumes is too short. I hope that the third volume can span thousands or tens of thousands of years, turning history into myth and directly surprising modern voyeurs.

The plot is novel and enjoyable enough. I started reading books in junior high school. I read almost all types of books in college. It's been three years since I graduated. It's been a long, long time since I've read such an attractive book. I feel like I'm back to the time when I first read the novel and saw the dawn [crying]

It's very interesting, not too exciting, but not tiring either. The main characters in this period of history are well portrayed, the plot has ups and downs, the author's thinking is clear, and the writing is okay. I haven't found the book I want to read for more than half a month, until this one I felt was quite good.