Mortal Immortals, from Humble Beginnings to Immortality

From scratch to something, from humble beginnings to rise, the pace is slower. It's not like taking just one or two steps and all kinds of opportunities will hit you. The author is cautious and doesn't supervise. The only shortcoming is that there are too few and it's not enough to watch [crying]

This book is one of the best family cultivation novels on Tomato. Only those who have read other books will know how fragrant this book is. It has golden fingers, but it is not wide open. In fact, it arranges various opportunities to improve. The family portraits are also well written, and many characters are flesh and blood. I have saved more than 60 chapters and haven't read them yet, and I plan to save more. When I read them, I stayed up late at night and read them, which made me dizzy. In fact, I have never rated or written a review. The reason why I want to review it today is because I read a novel today and it was also a family fairy tale. It was a piece of shit and made me sick. So I came here to remind everyone that it is the one on the list in the past two days that has space and can copy resources, lightning protection.

It's still pretty good, it looks pretty, I feel like it could be faster if it's a little slower.

I would like to call it the first family novel of Tomato. Although each character cannot be called flesh and blood, they are very vivid. The passing of every old character can make me sad for a while. The protagonist has a very low sense of presence, and the depiction of the world of immortality is very realistic. The system of immortality is very interesting and related to Taoism. It's just that the plot is a bit shabby, and with more than 3 million words, there may only be a few interesting moments here and there, but the protagonist is about to gain access to the mysteries and can usher in a small climax. The combat power system is very stable, after all, there are only a few realms, the world view is very complete, and the sense of crisis given to readers is just right. A very nice book I'm really at my wits' end. It's true that I felt depressed and frustrated in the early stage, and it was very slow to warm up, but the author's ability to deal with details really needs to be strengthened. There is nothing exciting now, at least there is no water added. The plot has been advancing in earnest and it should be completed by the end of next year. I don't know how the final setting will be fulfilled.

A very good book, with a slow pace and very suitable for ordinary people to cultivate immortality.

It's good-looking, it develops farming, it's a reasonable golden finger, the character creation is 80%, and the plot is relaxed and relaxed. It's better than other Tomato families, and it's not in the style of the Xuanjian Clan. According to the Tomato score, I would give it a 9.3, But he seems to be only 8.8?

Personally, I think this is the most beautiful family portrait novel currently. The world view is set perfectly. There is no other novel where cultivation is as simple as drinking water. The protagonist's three-dimensional IQ is online. A family grows from weak to strong step by step. It has a sense of substitution. Many characters are well portrayed. I didn't know why this book had such a low rating, but after reading through the reviews I found out that most of them were people who were persuaded to quit by the first few chapters and those who like to read cool novels. Anyway, this is the only novel I'm following at the moment, and I personally think it's very good.

It's quite good-looking. Although it's a bit slow, it's written in a realistic way. It's not like a mindless novel where there are many difficulties blocking the development of the protagonist's family, but this way we can better understand how difficult it is for the protagonist's family to develop. With such a low score, this book is really a grievance. [Anger]

It's a refreshing article with details, logic and no brainer. The plot is reasonable and the pace is very comfortable. The plot level dropped very low after persisting for so many words. The only flaw is that there are very few spells and techniques in the worldview setting, which results in the protagonist's lack of means. Every time he breaks through a big realm, he is looking forward to the protagonist's new means, the colorful and powerful means of high realms, but there are none. The description of the supporting characters is very good and innovative, but in the later stage, each shot still only has a description of the scene, without the names of the means and spells, which loses a lot of the excitement. For example, the description of the scene in the scene will look more impressive. At present, the ceiling of the Tomato family's fairy tales is four million words, but it is still readable and there is no inexplicable hydrology.

Congratulations to Lao Zhou for ascending to the throne of Tongxuan Tianjun [top post] The division of realms and combat power in the book are very reasonable and self-contained, and the various settings are also very immersive. Under the leadership of Lao Zhou, watching a small family grow and develop into a Tongxuan Immortal Kingdom, people are increasingly looking forward to the development of the subsequent story and the revelation of the mystery of the system/the mystery of heaven [Learned]

It's a very good chronicle of a cultivating immortal family. It has the shadow of Xuanjian, but it doesn't have the darkness of Xuanjian. The family has taken an upright and bright path. The slow pace in the early stage is very suitable, and the author's update speed is also guaranteed. It's great! Looking forward to the follow-up plot

After reading two volumes, I feel a little tired and will put it aside for now. There is too much competition for profit, and there are too many descriptions of secular power. On the contrary, the writing on immortality, family ties, friendship, and exploration are squeezed out. There are very few small climaxes, and there are almost no big climaxes. That's why I say I'm tired. A novel must have something interesting to keep people interested. I hope the author can balance it and not just flatten and suppress it. The author has a lot of thoughts, some deep thoughts, and a comprehensive perspective. The setting of the level of cultivation is both stable and innovative. The character creation is not very deep, and not many can be remembered. The more impressive ones are Zhou Xisheng, Zhou Chengming, and Zhou Chengyang, who have relatively distinctive personalities.

It's pretty good. My favorite fairy tale. The pace is slow and the plot is exciting (so far). However, I feel that the next plot will become more and more difficult to write. I hope the author can work harder! (The author's attitude is still very good)

This is the real world of cultivating immortals. How can any genius become an immortal in less than ten years? If it were so easy to become an immortal, there would be billionaires everywhere [laughter] Still good-looking, okay? [Laughs evilly]

I like it very much. It is exactly the same as I imagined the world of immortality. It fully describes the difficulties of the people at the bottom of the world. Only through hard work can one go upstream. There is no golden finger that is too powerful. Most of the opportunities are calculated by one's own hard work. He works step by step, walking on thin ice, and quietly develops to amaze everyone. Great👍🏻

It's very good. It's almost the same as the introduction. It's a combination of Gou Dao and family literature. Don't be dissuaded because of the system in the introduction. It may be a bit confusing in the early stage, but the more you read, the more exciting it becomes. Although I finished it in two days, but according to the comments, the author's updates are quite stable. In fact, the most important thing is the characterization of details. However, I feel that I was a little out of rhythm by the early comment area and lacked a lot of psychological portrayal of the characters. There are many, but it may be due to the increase in characters. The family is inevitable. The best thing is that it is not a breeding pig, and the frequency of distribution of spiritual roots is very reasonable. The big poisonous points of family stories are avoided, and the most favorite thing is that the description of the supporting characters' experiences is very sufficient. This is rare, like Zhou Liang, but I feel a little led by the rhythm. I hope I can maintain my own style.

It's very beautiful. In the early stage, when the male protagonist was relatively weak, he hid in the mountains to practice. That part is very, very true. At the beginning, it felt a little difficult to read, but later it became really fun.

It's a good-looking movie. The protagonist is weak and weak. Although the opponent is a mortal, he is not careless, but slowly figures it out. It got a little messed up later. As a modern time traveler, the protagonist didn't show the advantages of being a time traveler. In other words, it would be better to just write about the indigenous people. Weirdly poisonous means that the Zhou family has become a climate, and there are many jealous people. One of the maids wanted to be the protagonist's mother, so she took away the protagonist's biological father, and she became pregnant with a son. This place is actually broken. The protagonist as a time traveler is dealt with in the same way as the family patriarch in the villain novel. He killed the maid after the maid gave birth to a child. It may be a fluke. The maid died, and no one told the reason. However, many people knew about it, so they couldn't hide it... Slightly poisonous, look again

It's good-looking, it's the type I like to read. It's not like some books that are too ridiculous. It's a breath of fresh air. Come on, I'm optimistic about you [Chigua]

I am used to reading fast-paced Immortal Cultivation Style (Shuangwen), but this book is rare. I have the patience to read it carefully, with smooth logic and good details (but it is too slow). Moreover, family flow is a process of ordinary accumulation. In the world of immortal cultivation, there are so many people who get rich in one fell swoop. Even if they do, it will be in vain if they don't have enough matching strength. So the pace of this book is pretty good so far, focusing on a slow development.

It's a bit like the training system of the Xuanjian Immortal Clan. I personally like this training system very much, and the characters are more vividly drawn and the world background is relatively large. I hope the author can expand more branch plots [please update]

The book is not bad, some flaws are innocuous, but there are two problems 1. Some readers have bad interests and don't want to be affected, so they need to comment less. I think how the author writes is the author's business. Just read if you like it, and leave if you don't like it. There are always some selfish readers in the comment area. After reading some comment areas, I found that this kind of people have some characteristics: "high-minded but low-handed", "god's perspective", "pursuing quick results" and "ignoring people's hearts". They are afraid of being affected. Those who like to discuss, be careful. 2. The author sometimes writes unnecessary plots in pursuit of quick results and enjoyable writing, so stay away from this book. Slowness, discomfort, caution, and the pursuit of a certain logic are the characteristics of this book. Some plots appear to avoid such things from happening in the future. These are my views and opinions. I hope it can give you some useful understanding.

This novel is undoubtedly an outstanding literary masterpiece. It deeply attracted me with its unique writing style, profound emotions and exquisite plot construction. The author's words seem to have magic power, leading readers to travel through time and space and experience every scene and every emotional fluctuation immersively. From the perspective of characterization, each character is vivid and three-dimensional. They have their own personality traits and growth trajectories, as if they are living around us, making people empathize with them. The author's insight into human nature makes the interactions between characters full of reality and depth, allowing people to savor their stories and gain a deeper understanding of human nature. In terms of plot design, the novel is rigorously laid out and interlocking. It has both tense and thrilling climaxes as well as delicate and gentle emotional expressions. During the reading process, people sometimes feel their hearts beat faster and sometimes they are moved to tears. The author's control of the rhythm is just right, which not only maintains the coherence of the story, but also makes reading interesting. In addition, the language style of the novel is unique, with both poetic romance and philosophical profundity. While enjoying the beauty of the text, it can also trigger profound thinking about life and the world. The author's depiction of details is even more ingenious. Every detail is like an exquisite picture, making people immersed in it and lingering over it. In short, this novel is not only a masterpiece worth reading again and again, but also a literary masterpiece that can touch people's hearts and make people think deeply. With its unique charm, it allowed me to find my spiritual home in the ocean of words, and also gave me a deeper understanding and appreciation of the charm of literature.

It's pretty good. Although the development is slow, it's very interesting. The protagonist's scenes are less and it's a group portrait. I've read Chapter 241 of the second volume. The protagonist has no harem and only one wife. She is a mortal. The protagonist will be alone and beautiful in the future. There will be no chaos. This book is very systematic. Although the development of Pig's Feet is slow, the book is self-contained. I feel that the development of his family is too slow. There are more than 600 chapters. There are only a dozen people in his family who are qualified to cultivate immortals. However, the protagonist's character is very cautious here, otherwise he would not have lived this long. All in all, the book is fascinating and I was very immersed in it. I hope the author writes 30 million words. I like long novels.

It's a good book. The protagonist can tie up as many qualified people as possible in the Zhou family's chariot, marry the women as concubines, and recruit the men as son-in-laws. The qualified foreign surnames who tie the Zhou family's chariot selectively recruit one or two qualified offspring to strengthen the relationship and reduce the proportion of qualified Zhou family members.

Although this book is not quite to my liking. But the narrative doesn't drag. The characters' emotions are clearly expressed. And the author also wrote some of the reality into the book. All I can say is cowhide. I can only say that I wish the author better and better.

Five stars for encouragement, it's still good, but the biggest drawback is the slow pace. I had put it aside and saved for a long time, and suddenly it felt good. I don't plan to catch up on it. It's too slow. The author can finish this book and then explore the rhythm. If you keep this pace with this book, it will cost you at least 10,000 a day to be honest. I just read the fifth chapter, which talks about recruiting a son-in-law, and then I pulled some more, gave a recipe, divided the feudal lords, and then ended with the male protagonist coming out of seclusion. I am also chasing the book at 7 o'clock. In that book, if you finish this in two chapters at most, otherwise you will be scolded. It's a bit shabby, and I obviously don't have any experience with long-form novels, so I still have to drag it out.

This book is not bad. It has a family development perspective and is a group portrait. Each character has his or her own story background. It is not the kind of book where the protagonist levels up all the way and then accepts a girl who is as beautiful as a fairy, and then no more scenes for her. This kind of family-centered series, the story and development of each character is very interesting. It's the same type as Xuan She, which means you have to save many chapters to watch it. There are too few updates, and I stopped reading it after reading it. I can't remember the plot again [face covering]. It's hard to feel good even once [cover face][cover face][cover face] So what, can we have a fun plot? I couldn't stand it anymore, so I saved it for three days and then finished it. But it's not that satisfying [crying] Who are the seven oddities? Which platform is a small or medium god? Or is it the author's book-writing partner? [Sinister smile]

Sit back and wait for updates. Before reaching the foundation stage, what I saw was really thrilling and I couldn't stop. Although this is a fantasy world, if such a world existed, it would be like this. The weak eat the strong, and dogs and flies camp. Very true. The stories about cultivating immortals generally follow the same pattern. Most of the protagonists have five spiritual roots, useless spiritual roots, pseudo-spiritual roots, etc., And they successfully counterattack and slap everyone in the face. No need to think about it, just feel good. The male protagonist in this book is not qualified, so he follows a bad path. Hard work and solitary achievement, all kinds of plots. Grow your family slowly. Come to think of it, it must have been this difficult for those ancient aristocratic families from the beginning. All the powerful and powerful people have a humble and inconspicuous beginning, and they all have a beginning like Zhou Ping. After several generations of management, they have five surnames and seven hopes. Sometimes, you really can't be aggrieved. Your ancestors didn't work hard. Why should you be jealous of others driving luxury cars? If you start working hard yourself, you can make others jealous of your juniors.

It is a very interesting slow-paced article about cultivating immortals. In the era when tomato-based novels are popular, this article about developing and strengthening a family step by step and increasing strength is undoubtedly a breath of fresh air. The content is fresh and refined, the rhythm develops steadily, and the storyline is not as cliche as traditional cool novels. The characters are vividly and vividly drawn, and you can see the author's intentions. To be honest, just two words, beautiful. I wish this book to become the number one in the Family Building Series [Like] @ I hope the author can draw an outline in advance and make an overall content plan so that the family can develop in an orderly manner. The storyline must not be cliche. I also hope that the author can pay more attention to readers' comments and improve it in time. In some follow-up processes (without affecting the outline of the book), maybe you can ask readers what they think [Note]