Bring a Little Pokémon Shock to the World of Card Beasts

The setting is very good and the idea is very good. I like this setting very much. However, the writing is indeed a bit too monotonous. The problem is that the settings are introduced in a running account style. Then in the later stages, the level of Pokémon became higher, and it became uninteresting and I couldn't watch anymore... I really hope I can fix it. I feel like it would be great to fix it and adjust the rhythm. Many settings don't need to be so verbose. But it's up to the author himself. After all, it's great to be able to write it, and the idea is so exciting w

Mature authors will give themselves the title of five-star general on the first day of their debut [shy]

It describes Pokémon in a relatively restorative way, and the plot is a typical urban novel, which is okay. It's not good anymore, it's completely turned into an ordinary urban novel. Pokémon is like a condiment like chopped green onion. The absence of Pokémon doesn't affect the novel at all.

Nice! In fact, the title of the book is a bit misleading. Don't treat this book as a beast-taming or card text. The core of this book is actually about farming. The protagonist has been slowly developing and running his own shop. It's just that cards are forms, and beast control is more like entertainment, copying Pokémon settings that don't exist in other worlds and using them as cheats. So to sum up, the plot is a bit like a "farming" article in the form of entertainment. The setting is to use cards to describe the birth of the first-generation Pokémon and first-generation items. So if you want to see a lot of beast-control battles or competitions, there are relatively few. So far, only a handful of large-scale battles have taken place.

The subject matter is very interesting, and the setting is also very good. I have read more than 20 chapters so far, and most of them are about the setting, as if I were reading a manual. The plot is very sparse, and it is just a summary. I hope that I can focus on the plot.

Card-type beast-controlling type, but the protagonist uses Pokémon. There are many unpopular Pokémon made, but not necessarily all are used by the protagonist himself. I hope this book can continue to be written and not be unfinished. I won't praise it. After all, as we all know, poisonous milk will violate heaven's rules.

It describes many uncommon Pokemon, all of which are quite unique. I got to know a lot of things that I didn't know before, but the protagonist doesn't seem to have any social interactions with other colleagues in the world [laughing]

Stay steady and don't collapse, write more and make cards, sell cards and love to read I hope to develop more functional cards, such as elves and people living together, making human life better.

It's not bad, but it's not really a beast-control article, it's more like a Pokémon science article. It changes from a worldview that has never been exposed to Pokémon to a worldview that has been exposed to all kinds of strange beast-controllers. It is more accepting of Pokémon and removes one thing I personally don't like about Pokémon science – the conflict between humans and Pokémon. Card production and contract backlash can also be regarded as solving some attitude problems towards Pokémon. The production cost is much higher than simply using Poké Balls to catch Pokémon. There will be no problem of abusing Pokémon, and you will not feel uncomfortable if something happens to you.

Suddenly I came up with the idea that every time I make a Pokémon, I can insert a picture of the Pokémon.

Doesn't the author have a powerful Pokémon as a trump card? Even if you are not a mythical beast, you can still make a quasi-god, such as Bangira, Round-horned Land Shark, Kuailosaurus, etc. Even if you are not a quasi-god, you can still make a fire-breathing dragon. How domineering.

There are a lot of minor flaws, but overall it's okay. The writing on the back is messed up.

The writing is relatively clean and has no obvious poisonous points. Although the plot is full of plots that are too taken for granted and unreasonable, overall it is still watchable.

At present, it seems that some water has filled in the settings in the first dozen chapters, but some of them are confusing and may not be understood. There are many chapters that use the protagonist's Pokémon creations from other people's perspectives to show how cute the protagonist is, such as Big Tongue and Yo-Yo. There should be many similar chapters in the future. I quite like articles written like this.

I've only read a few chapters, but fortunately this book doesn't have a bad start with Pichu, Pidgeot, and Spearow. I hope that the author will not write too much about the settings and other people's narrations later on, and will appropriately add more descriptions of the protagonist's process of making cards and fighting monsters. It's really easy to lose sight of it if you don't advance the main plot all the time. But so far, the plot seems to be reasonable and reasonable, and there are no mythical beasts from the beginning.

It's pretty good. It doesn't start with those popular Pokémon that are so bad on the street. I hope the author writes more Pokémon cards. Does anyone recommend something similar? Why isn't this the final article? ! !

A very good setting, but there were some poisonous points at the time. The level issue and whether the protagonist could enter the mirror world were not clearly explained. There were also logic problems in some places.

I read this book easily during the holiday. It is really comfortable and the pacing is well controlled. It can be considered a slow-burn novel, and the elements are well integrated. It seems really enjoyable for Pokémon fans. It contains certain group portraits and popular science. Some people find it verbose, but you must know that not everyone understands that Pokémon likes a fast pace. Summary: Don't force yourself if you are impatient. If you like to relax and slow down, you must give it a try [send heart] [send heart] Reading this book gives me a relaxing and lonely feeling of admiring the beautiful sunset while a boat floats on the sea.

Do you know why Zimmer is so invincible? Because invincibility is so lonely (Zimmer).

Haokang🤓👍The front pave the way for the Haokang behind. The protagonist is also like this👍. The author is this 👍. Readers are even more like this 👍

@ Su Ran Qingkong The subject matter and other aspects are quite good, and there is nothing to complain about. I gave it five stars, but there are a few words that could be omitted. Generally speaking, it looks good. I hope the author will not be disconnected. [I understand]

This novel is really good. I have been chasing it for a few days and I have tied it. The combination of card maker, beast master, and Pokémon is really good, and there is also a mirror world and other settings. It is the first time I have seen it, but it is a pity that it is not finished. I have to catch up every day, and now I have to wait for breeding to increase the number. There are still too few cards made by the protagonist, and props are slowly appearing.

The subject matter is not bad, but the writing is not very satisfactory and there is no sense of subjectivity.

I can't say it's not good, I can only say it's mediocre. So far, I've only watched one of the more intense battles, and the rest are just mediocre. The whole text mainly focuses on card making, and most of the plot and illustrations of Pokémon cards are written from the group portraits. Overall, it's okay.

It's not bad, but there are some problems in some places, but the flaws are not outweighed. Some things in Pokémon, it is best to have the conditions to obtain them in reality, such as water stones, which require evolution.

If the level of the mythical beast is higher, I have an idea to abandon the traditional way of killing monsters to upgrade, and instead perform priestly duties to increase the level or conform to the authority. This process can also produce some specialties from the Pokémon world. See if there's anything going on @ Su Ran Qingkong Looking forward to reply

A novice writer, a lot of nonsense, but good ideas,

Very good. Come on, author. Other similar articles are all about stones plus monkeys equaling Sun Wukong. They are too sloppy. The author's design is very good. It is obvious that he has put his heart into it. All the details are in place.

It's okay, very good, I like it. Pokémon stories include traditional time travel stories, travel adventures, encounters with Pokémon, and encounters with all the mythical beasts. There is also a popular science fairy article that became popular for a certain period of time. Maybe there are similar books to this one, but this one is the first one I saw and I think it's very good.

Yes, it is good to combine the beasts with Pokémon. Although some details are a bit flawed, overall, it is much higher than the tomato average.