Reborn in America: Falling in Love with the Fairy Sister at the Same Table

You can look like a girl, a little bit smarter

Not good, really not good. Your assistant wrote the most speechless thing.

It looks good now, but the emotional aspect is not well written, it is too monotonous. The main thing is that the way of getting along with Liu Yifei is too expressive. It's okay to eat each other's saliva. After all, they are a couple, but you wrote it as if you can't eat without each other's saliva. I don't know if others can understand it. I feel a little nauseous. Except for the poor handling of the emotional line, everything else can be considered excellent. Keep up the good work.

It's really good, but not enough.

It's so well written. What a narrative. The kindergarten class is currently short of students.

Great, cheers code

Well written, keep it up!

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