Kinomoto Sakura and Daidoji Tomoyo

I have read a fifth of it, not much. Let's be objective. The content is actually very exciting, the inspiration is wonderful, the ideas are interesting, and the writing style needs to be improved. If the writing style is improved, it can be regarded as a rare resource, and the control of the article must also be improved. After all, the protagonist of this book is "I", but I have been writing from the perspective of Sakura and Tomoyo, "I" The perspective needs to be given more weight. If you want to write about the really beautiful feeling between girls, it can pave the way for the relationship between the two to heat up. I haven't actually watched Cardcaptor Sakura that much, and I can't determine the timeline with the current amount of cards. It's hard to say where the relationship between the two has reached. You can use the new settings. Enemies, or the original Clow card, to increase the relationship between two people, it is too bland to rely solely on daily life to increase their affection. Although eating, drinking, having fun every day is very relaxing and happy, you still need to promote the main line. If the main line is not crooked and the branch lines are rich, you can write well. Finally, I suggest you improve your writing skills. If you are in school, you can write Give your Chinese teacher some novels about emotional description, scenery description, character description, etc. To read. They will give you some guidance on your description ability. If you are outside school, you can write some short stories and send them to some small groups for friends to comment. It will always be helpful. If you have a new book, I will give it five stars to encourage you. Come on.

The cover is cute and the writing is smooth and sweet. Later on, the witch Elen appears. The author knows how to write emotional dramas, all of which are sweet love affairs.

One word is good, two words are good-looking, three words are good-looking, and four words are super good-looking.