(Dragon Ball + Hot Blood + No System + Funny + Decisive Killing)
Once he traveled through time, he didn't expect to travel to the Dragon Ball world and become a newborn Saiyan baby.
What's even more unfortunate is that Frieza is about to destroy Planet Vegeta, but fortunately he is sent to a lower planet in advance to save a small life.
After developing in a wretched way, he finally broke through to Super Saiyan IV, but suddenly found that the style of painting in this world was somewhat different from his own. Saiyan God? Super blue? The ultimate freedom of mind?
Reader comments
It's quite good. Is there a female protagonist? If so, it must not be an original female protagonist, and there shouldn't be original characters. Finally, I hope it doesn't end in a more unfinished version. Good luck to the author! ! !
(Bottom middle) Green-•Advanced (Level 0)/7.0 Points, mark...
Sense of substitution B, plug-in C, setting C, writing style B, rhythm D, imagination C, character design C, main line C, logic D.
Extra points: none
Personal feelings: The standard Dragon Ball novel is considered to be at a mid-level level, without much innovation, but the understanding of Dragon Ball is very correct, and the expansion of the plot is not outstanding.
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#Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself.
1. Evaluation of the novel
(1) Taking "Four-Star Green - Advanced (Level 0)/7.0 Points" as the dividing line, additional points may be deducted for other items based on the first nine evaluations.
(2) Recommendation grade evaluation criteria: Excellent S (+4), Excellent A (+2), Good B (+1), Average C (0), Poor D (-1), Extremely Poor E (-3), Unknown X (0).
(3) Sense of immersion: interlocking, rapid resonance, and immersion
(4) Plug-in: cheat settings
(5) Setting: World background, training system...
(6) Writing style and detailed description: standardized and smooth, with appropriate style
(7) Rhythm·Overall description: Relaxation and suspense setting
(8) Imagination·Plot expansion: Surprisingly innovative and self-consistent logic
(9) Character design•Main characters: three-dimensional and full, growing and changing
(10) Main line • Close to the center: clear and attractive
(11) Logic: plot logic, detail logic
(12) Extra deduction points: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge...
2. Rating of the novel
(1) Shangshang (a sacred book that meets the public's taste, unexpectedly excellent)─Five-star red •Super legend (level 24)/10.0 Points+.
(2) Superior (interlocking high-scoring online articles that make people addicted to it) - ① Five-star orange + • Legend (level 22) / 10 points; ② Five-star orange • Legend (level 20) / 9.5 Points +; ③ Five-star orange - • Legend (level 18) / 9.5 Points.
(3) Shangxia (a fine book in the traditional sense, a fine book with a strange style and excellent writing) - ① Five-star purple + • Legend (level 16) / 9 points; ② Five-star purple + legend (level 14) / 8.5 Points +; ③ Five-star purple - • Legend (level 12) / 8.5 Points.
(4) Upper-middle (standard online text with mature subject matter and self-consistent logic) - ① Five-star blue + • Excellent (level 10) / 8.0 Points +; ② Five-star blue • Excellent (level 8) / 8.0 Points; ③ Five-star blue - • Excellent (level 6) / 7.5 Points +; ④ Five-star green + • Standard (level 4) / 7.5 Points.
(5) Middle to lower (standard web articles with average performance and no major problems) - ①Four-star green·Advanced (level 2)/7.0 Points+; ②Four-star green-·Advanced (level 0)/7.0 Points; ③Four-star white+·Standard (-1 level)/6. 5 Points; ④Samsung white·standard (-2 level)/6.0 Points; ⑤Samsung gray+·low level (-3 level)/5.5 Points; ⑥Samsung gray·low level (-4 level)/5.0 Points; ⑦Samsung gray -·qualified (-5 level)/4.5 Points.
(6) Xia Shang (novels with major flaws are missed) - ① Three-star unqualified (-7 levels) / 4 points; ② Three-star poor (-9 levels) / 3 points; ③ One-star poor (-11 levels) / 2 points; ④ One-star extremely poor (-13 levels) / 1 point.
(7) Xiaxia (disagreement in three views, having special hobbies, seriously affecting the reading experience, and making people physically uncomfortable) - ① Discord in three views (-15 levels)/-1 point; ② Special hobbies (-17 levels)/-3 points; ③ Slight malice (-19 levels)/-6 points; ④Malicious (-21 levels)/-7 points; ⑤Significant malice (-23 levels)/-8 points; ⑥Extreme maliciousness (-25 levels)/-9 points; ⑦Unknown (-27 levels)/-10 points.
(8) Medium (standard online article that I have no interest in at all, no evaluation) Three stars unknown/x points.
(9) Inferior (female videos mixed in, non-standard online writing) 2 stars unknown/0 points.
──Sixth edition revised evaluation, 1200 words
First of all, full marks for my shamelessness.
Secondly, I wish all readers good health, good luck and prosperity, and everything goes well!
The third is that some people read it and said it was about cultivating immortals. Let me explain here. Originally, the Qi cultivated in Dragon Ball has the characteristics of Eastern fantasy. It is not an exaggeration to say that it can be borrowed. In one episode, Kame Sennin seemed to transform into Jackie Chan and fight against Goku.
Fourth, the protagonist of this book does not have system plug-ins, but if he is not given a few small things, cultivating qi is more in line with the original work. If there are no such things, why should the protagonist fight Sun Wukong and the others? Better than them?
Just imagine if you really travel to Dragon Ball, who without plug-ins can really be better than the protagonist and them? The reason why it is called the protagonist is because of the aura of the protagonist.
So what if you know the original work well?
So without the author adding a little bug, how can it stand out?
This novel is well written.
At first, it was wrong to say that 50 combat power is a low-level warrior. The official data is that single-digit combat is a low-level warrior. Double digits are mid-level warriors. More than 100 combat power is a high-level warrior. When Vegeta was born, his combat power was 2000.
It's the classic Tomato Dragon Ball story of traveling through time and space, but it's normal. After all, Dragon Ball is all about fighting. After finishing fighting in this time and space, you have to go to other time and space to fight. If you play more, it will still be fun.
The character design is very stable and has its own philosophy and goals, or it has its own way. Without those fun, Rendihua will play out (the character design cannot play out) Tomato still has some jokes, but I don't know if there is Super Saiyan VI. I like to see the Saiyan blood system.
Hahaha ꉂꉂ(ᵔᗜᵔ*) I'll kill myself as a time traveler
The best Dragon Ball novel I have found so far
Not bad, just a little missing
This book is amazing. The more I read it, the more I enjoy it.
The writing is quite reasonable.
The protagonist should prepare a medicine for heart disease because drinking super magic water may cause heart disease.
Overall, it's pretty good. It seems that the heroine is not Bulma. I still like that the heroine is Bulma. Come on, author.
I give you five stars. I hope you can keep writing and don't want to be a eunuch.
I'm not good at words, so everything is 5 stars.
The update speed is a bit slow, but the content inside is quite exciting. If some of the memory contents of the protagonist can be slightly deleted and fine-tuned, the entire article will be improved to a higher level.
Yes, if you have the confidence to surpass yourself, you should read two more chapters. There are too few chapters to read.
The plot is compact and the writing is much more than that of the AI author. It's okay to see this kind of thing on Tomato.
This book is good, and the plot is well connected. Why is the rating so low? [What]
Very cool, just a bit lacking
Pretty good, come on
It's okay, but don't be a monk
Come on! I'm optimistic about you [you taste it carefully]
It's quite good. Is there a female protagonist? If so, it must not be an original female protagonist, and there shouldn't be original characters. Finally, I hope it doesn't end in a more unfinished version. Good luck to the author! ! !
(Bottom middle) Green-•Advanced (Level 0)/7.0 Points, mark... Sense of substitution B, plug-in C, setting C, writing style B, rhythm D, imagination C, character design C, main line C, logic D. Extra points: none Personal feelings: The standard Dragon Ball novel is considered to be at a mid-level level, without much innovation, but the understanding of Dragon Ball is very correct, and the expansion of the plot is not outstanding. ─────────────────── #Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. 1. Evaluation of the novel (1) Taking "Four-Star Green - Advanced (Level 0)/7.0 Points" as the dividing line, additional points may be deducted for other items based on the first nine evaluations. (2) Recommendation grade evaluation criteria: Excellent S (+4), Excellent A (+2), Good B (+1), Average C (0), Poor D (-1), Extremely Poor E (-3), Unknown X (0). (3) Sense of immersion: interlocking, rapid resonance, and immersion (4) Plug-in: cheat settings (5) Setting: World background, training system... (6) Writing style and detailed description: standardized and smooth, with appropriate style (7) Rhythm·Overall description: Relaxation and suspense setting (8) Imagination·Plot expansion: Surprisingly innovative and self-consistent logic (9) Character design•Main characters: three-dimensional and full, growing and changing (10) Main line • Close to the center: clear and attractive (11) Logic: plot logic, detail logic (12) Extra deduction points: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... 2. Rating of the novel (1) Shangshang (a sacred book that meets the public's taste, unexpectedly excellent)─Five-star red •Super legend (level 24)/10.0 Points+. (2) Superior (interlocking high-scoring online articles that make people addicted to it) - ① Five-star orange + • Legend (level 22) / 10 points; ② Five-star orange • Legend (level 20) / 9.5 Points +; ③ Five-star orange - • Legend (level 18) / 9.5 Points. (3) Shangxia (a fine book in the traditional sense, a fine book with a strange style and excellent writing) - ① Five-star purple + • Legend (level 16) / 9 points; ② Five-star purple + legend (level 14) / 8.5 Points +; ③ Five-star purple - • Legend (level 12) / 8.5 Points. (4) Upper-middle (standard online text with mature subject matter and self-consistent logic) - ① Five-star blue + • Excellent (level 10) / 8.0 Points +; ② Five-star blue • Excellent (level 8) / 8.0 Points; ③ Five-star blue - • Excellent (level 6) / 7.5 Points +; ④ Five-star green + • Standard (level 4) / 7.5 Points. (5) Middle to lower (standard web articles with average performance and no major problems) - ①Four-star green·Advanced (level 2)/7.0 Points+; ②Four-star green-·Advanced (level 0)/7.0 Points; ③Four-star white+·Standard (-1 level)/6. 5 Points; ④Samsung white·standard (-2 level)/6.0 Points; ⑤Samsung gray+·low level (-3 level)/5.5 Points; ⑥Samsung gray·low level (-4 level)/5.0 Points; ⑦Samsung gray -·qualified (-5 level)/4.5 Points. (6) Xia Shang (novels with major flaws are missed) - ① Three-star unqualified (-7 levels) / 4 points; ② Three-star poor (-9 levels) / 3 points; ③ One-star poor (-11 levels) / 2 points; ④ One-star extremely poor (-13 levels) / 1 point. (7) Xiaxia (disagreement in three views, having special hobbies, seriously affecting the reading experience, and making people physically uncomfortable) - ① Discord in three views (-15 levels)/-1 point; ② Special hobbies (-17 levels)/-3 points; ③ Slight malice (-19 levels)/-6 points; ④Malicious (-21 levels)/-7 points; ⑤Significant malice (-23 levels)/-8 points; ⑥Extreme maliciousness (-25 levels)/-9 points; ⑦Unknown (-27 levels)/-10 points. (8) Medium (standard online article that I have no interest in at all, no evaluation) Three stars unknown/x points. (9) Inferior (female videos mixed in, non-standard online writing) 2 stars unknown/0 points. ──Sixth edition revised evaluation, 1200 words
First of all, full marks for my shamelessness. Secondly, I wish all readers good health, good luck and prosperity, and everything goes well! The third is that some people read it and said it was about cultivating immortals. Let me explain here. Originally, the Qi cultivated in Dragon Ball has the characteristics of Eastern fantasy. It is not an exaggeration to say that it can be borrowed. In one episode, Kame Sennin seemed to transform into Jackie Chan and fight against Goku. Fourth, the protagonist of this book does not have system plug-ins, but if he is not given a few small things, cultivating qi is more in line with the original work. If there are no such things, why should the protagonist fight Sun Wukong and the others? Better than them? Just imagine if you really travel to Dragon Ball, who without plug-ins can really be better than the protagonist and them? The reason why it is called the protagonist is because of the aura of the protagonist. So what if you know the original work well? So without the author adding a little bug, how can it stand out?
This novel is well written.
At first, it was wrong to say that 50 combat power is a low-level warrior. The official data is that single-digit combat is a low-level warrior. Double digits are mid-level warriors. More than 100 combat power is a high-level warrior. When Vegeta was born, his combat power was 2000.
It's the classic Tomato Dragon Ball story of traveling through time and space, but it's normal. After all, Dragon Ball is all about fighting. After finishing fighting in this time and space, you have to go to other time and space to fight. If you play more, it will still be fun.
The character design is very stable and has its own philosophy and goals, or it has its own way. Without those fun, Rendihua will play out (the character design cannot play out) Tomato still has some jokes, but I don't know if there is Super Saiyan VI. I like to see the Saiyan blood system.
Hahaha ꉂꉂ(ᵔᗜᵔ*) I'll kill myself as a time traveler
The best Dragon Ball novel I have found so far
Not bad, just a little missing
This book is amazing. The more I read it, the more I enjoy it.
The writing is quite reasonable.
The protagonist should prepare a medicine for heart disease because drinking super magic water may cause heart disease.
Overall, it's pretty good. It seems that the heroine is not Bulma. I still like that the heroine is Bulma. Come on, author.
I give you five stars. I hope you can keep writing and don't want to be a eunuch.
I'm not good at words, so everything is 5 stars.
The update speed is a bit slow, but the content inside is quite exciting. If some of the memory contents of the protagonist can be slightly deleted and fine-tuned, the entire article will be improved to a higher level.
Yes, if you have the confidence to surpass yourself, you should read two more chapters. There are too few chapters to read.
The plot is compact and the writing is much more than that of the AI author. It's okay to see this kind of thing on Tomato.
This book is good, and the plot is well connected. Why is the rating so low? [What]
Very cool, just a bit lacking
Pretty good, come on
It's okay, but don't be a monk
Come on! I'm optimistic about you [you taste it carefully]
For sentimental reasons
Very interesting, good luck to the author.
Come on, come on, come on
Not bad, quite interesting
So far so good
Authors who like to read, cheers