Naruto: Tears-Burning Editing, Naruto Breaks Through the Entire Ninja World

The setting is okay, and the overall writing is good. However, a lot of passionate and important parts were missing from the broadcast content (for example, Granny Shima said that the child of the prophecy is you, etc.) In addition, the characters' reactions felt a bit underwritten and flat. I feel like I could write more about this part. I feel like the author is in a bit of a hurry and the pace is too fast. It would be better if the pace is slower, and there are more touching scene descriptions, passionate scene descriptions, and character reaction descriptions and characterizations. The overall feeling is 4 points, but I would like to give you 5 points for encouragement. Come on, the author, stop being a eunuch! [Laughing] Brother, it's not right for you to keep playing. Isn't it a daily routine to finish watching part of the video without adding some points? At least there should be a few days between each movie viewing. Otherwise, what's the point?

The content is very good and can be improved further. Thank you to the author!

I met a 30-year-old young woman online and we chatted for more than half a year We all had a good chat. Today she asked to meet. I hesitated and said You have a family and it doesn't feel good, but she said it's okay and just do normal things Friend, so I agreed and asked her for a photo. She looked pretty. Liang, she is not far from my city. We made an appointment to meet at a milk tea shop. I didn't choose to go somewhere else for fear of meeting an acquaintance. I arrived first that day. Yes, because she had to drive for several hours. While waiting, she looked at the photos and thought Another "rollover scene" Most mobile phones have beauty functions, but she When I got out of the Mercedes-Benz, I recognized her immediately. Person ratio The photos are much prettier, and they are my favorite type, and she also recognizes them. I didn't know what to say. In order to break the embarrassment, she suggested hugging me. Come on, I said yes, she smelled so good, I banged Jump, we sat at the milk tea shop for a while and we went to eat, but she basically didn't eat. How much? The whole process was spent peeling shrimps, picking fish bones, and finishing the meal. When we walked out of the hotel, she held my hand and I didn't break away, she said. Take me home, I said I would take a taxi back, but she insisted on taking me back. When I got home, I found that she had put a note in her bag, which said: Update Ten new chapters will unlock subsequent content

Not bad, keep up the good work! In Gaara's part, mobilization before the war is still necessary! You actually skipped it!

It's quite good. It is recommended that every time a short video clip appears on the screen, when a key moment, key event or key person appears, the corresponding person or someone you know in the ninja world will react. This is what resonates. Come on!

It's okay, can we write a double Kamui Kakashi in the future?

Not surprisingly, it should be finished. It has been in the works for so long, and it either ends badly or ends suddenly. I can only say that the reward is not bad. It is broadcast live throughout the city and there are no random rewards. Compared with other live broadcasts, it is not bad.

It's okay, just like watching the original plot. Sasuke: My little peanut.

I have to say, it's a great match to watch Minzu's Battle in the Valley of the End 글쎄 (I Don't Know) (Maybe) The climax of this song, of course, is Hinata's confession by Sen Ming. I read several Naruto fan novels such as Light Screen. The one that excites me the most is the Battle of the Valley of the End. Even if Sasuke wants to break the bond, there will still be someone chasing him. From the realization that there is always one person who has Sasuke in his heart in the Battle of the Valley of the End, even if the whole world does not agree with Sasuke, he will still not look back. Sometimes I don't understand the relationship between Sasuke and Naruto, what is it, a bond? Like? It may be caused by the reincarnation of Asura and Indra's chakra, but the fateful battle between Naruto and Sasuke is different from Shuin and Hashira Madara. They are each other's only one. If they don't have great love in their hearts like the previous two lives, even brother Apocalypse can't ignore others because of them. Sasuke and Naruto are special. I understand that many people think that Naruto's unrepentant love for Sasuke is a gay. Some people are disgusted with gays and feel that they have ruined the atmosphere of Hokage, but there are still many, such as rivals. There is no need to create barriers between people because of which side they occupy. Haha, I'm sorry to write so many other things in the review, but this article is good anyway. I don't know how to review a book. I don't care about some unreasonable things in it. Even if I feel disgusted with it, it will only pass after a while. We cannot expect that the full text of the fanfic in Tomato will not have any poisonous points and that anyone will praise it. We just see that the plots we like are written by other authors, or the tragedy is changed. This is my original intention of reading fanfic.

I've got a bean. Even the donkeys in the production team don't have such a rest like you. Come on, get up and do ten chapters a day. This is so wow, so beautiful.

This novel is like a colorful picture, perfectly integrating wonderful stories, vivid characters and profound thoughts, making people immersed in it and unable to extricate themselves. This is a classic novel. With its unique charm, it attracts readers' attention, touches their heartstrings, and makes people fascinated. This novel is like a bright pearl, shining in the ocean of literature. Its wonderful plot and delicate emotions are all amazing.

It's one of the few Naruto fanfics I've read that doesn't talk about conspiracy theories and is full of the purest will of fire. The writing is also good. It would be better if some of the content could be streamlined. It is indeed a bit more streamlined than at the beginning, but some important content has been omitted, such as Gaara's pre-war mobilization, and the order should be more reasonable. At present, it seems that the writing may be confusing due to improper order arrangement, and the title of this article is to refresh the video, but as of now It's just one video, and one video is a bit too long. There should be several more different videos. For example, the first one shows the daily life of Kushina and Minato, the next one shows the chaos of the Nine-Tails, and it can even be connected with a confrontation between Obito and Naruto. This not only has the effect of the program, but is also easy to write. In short, when watching videos, the focus should be on watching different videos, rather than one video taking up a huge space like this. The writing should be fast and refreshing. This is just my personal humble opinion. No matter what, I still like this work very much. Come on, author!

This book is what I like to watch. There are no dead people trying to make up the word count, and there are no OOC characters in the original books. There are no bonus Q&A barrage chats, everything is about the original characters watching, thinking and responding.

The writing is okay, but there are only two chapters per day, but the description of the specific plot is too detailed. I have reviewed it and reviewed it. Have I not read the original work? I think the dialogue and description of specific scenes can be appropriately streamlined, some content can be skipped appropriately, and more exciting and tearful chapters can be written. However, it is not unacceptable for the author to be able to update two chapters a day [smile] [smile]

Author, please update. I want to see the scene where Kyuubi and Naruto reconcile and become Kyuubi for the first time.

It's pretty good, please update it soon. I cried a few times while watching it, even though I was wearing this avatar [covering my face]

Woohoo, come on, author, it's really beautiful. I cried when I saw it. [I almost cried] [I almost cried] [I almost cried]

Well written. Keep up the good work!

The writing is really good

Is this a review?

Very good, just a little lacking

When I first read it, I thought it was fan fiction, but when I looked at it again, it was still fan fiction. After reading it for a long time, I realized that this is the original text.

Let's have some exciting and shocking scenes, similar to the fight between the Kazekage and Gaara, the reincarnation of the Earth, and the words of mother's protection of Gaara. Itachi and Sasuke's final battle. Seeing Madara between the dirty soil pillars, Madara's funny scene [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

Very interesting book, don't give up! Support!

To be honest, I think this movie theater is really beautiful! But I don't know why this rating is like this. I've watched a lot of movies and this one is the only one I've been following. Others would give up after a while.

Well written, keep it up

Very well written. Come on😊

Not bad, okay, come on!

Not bad, but a lot of important plots were deleted Too watery, keep dragging

Although it's a little overheated, the feeling of buying it is still good