Establish Shushan and Become Famous in the Heavens

You can watch it. I hope you don't abuse the protagonist and don't collapse in combat power. You still need to make an outline and polish it. Write whatever comes to mind, then it will definitely be cool. The subject matter is good.

Immortal Sword Three Shushan is so deeply rooted in the hearts of the people. There are a lot of things in it that are missing from this book. Some can be added.

It's well written, I like to read it. I also wrote a book, so I'll check it out and give my comments if I have nothing to do.

The current rhythm is okay in all aspects

This book is really good

I have been fooled by 5 stars a lot, and I have developed a good habit. No matter how ugly or rubbish I am, I will give 5 stars. As an old bookworm, although I am immune to all poisons, I cannot try poison alone. There is you, there is me, there is everyone. Let's all drink together!

It's cool, but not that cool. The main problem is the plot setting, which leads to the protagonist being entangled in conspiracies and intrigues. The protagonist should just hack all the enemies to death.

A bit self-righteous

The slogan must be shouted in Shushan: The heavens are mighty, my Taoist sun is prosperous! ! !

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

You can come on now

It's really good-looking, and the logic is very good. As an eighteen-year old bookworm, it's still a good recommendation, but it's just not enough.

It looks good, but why is it only rated seven points? Not enough to watch at all

As an old bookworm, this is a good book. I hope the author will continue his work and make more exciting books in the future.

Roll, roll, roll, hahahahahahahahahahaha

I quite like this type

Good book, worth reading

Overall well written

Not bad, not bad, not bad.

It is said that it is the development of Shushan, but in fact it is the protagonist Gao Guang throughout the whole process, who has been recruiting apprentices.

Your layout is quite big, the plot is good, and it's nice to watch.

It looks okay, but those who are not well versed in reading can take a look.

Some details are often written wrong, but overall it's pretty good, and the ending is okay too.

Worth tasting, super recommended, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

The plot is good, you can read it when you are short of books.

The overall plot rhythm is good, step by step to the top, not exaggerated, the writing is also good, it is a bit unreasonable to score such a low score, thumbs up [Thoughts]

This book is really good. The more I read, the more I want to read it. There's just not enough to read [laughter]

A very good book, I really like reading it Very beautiful, wonderful book

Good to read, other similar novels are just rotten fish and shrimps

This book is good. When I first read it, I felt that many people gave up on the book in the comment section. I also wanted to give up, but when I read the second part, it was really good. [Start][Start][Start]