Crossing the Wild Waters

The front is particularly nice, but the back is a bit bland. Overall good.

Super pretty! When she was a child, Zhou Zhou was a strong and clingy chatterbox, so cute! I really like my brother, they are just two of us, no problem (bushi).

The writing is very good [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] but why do I feel that the times are a bit uneven [what] [what] [what]

Not bad. The overall progress of the article feels the same as the narrative. The emotional progress will be slower in the front, but it will be okay later.