1960S: as Plain as Her

The plot content is very good, but the dialogue always feels awkward and the words feel childish, especially the military part. The description of actions and language cannot reflect the temperament of a soldier. The author can read more dialogue between characters. I think dialogue can also enrich the character's image, rather than just dialogue for the sake of dialogue.

The author wrote the book with great care. I felt sincerity and wanted to say something sincerely. That big pumpkin suddenly reminded me a lot. When I was a child, my grandmother's vegetable patch also had delicious vegetables. At that time, I just thought they looked good. Later, when I read Xiao Hong's "The Story of Hulan River", I suddenly felt the beauty of childhood and words. The author is a person with a loving heart and a deep love for life. The heroine took care of the yard in an orderly manner, down to the details of which crops or flowers were on which side of the land. There is no simple description of the scene, it will be mixed with your own emotions to give people a sense of vividness. The author said on the homepage: "Mediocre people write mediocre things." I hope to see the different sides and growth of the characters in the following chapters. Although they are ordinary people, they can still become round characters! In some words and phrases, I think it could be better and more relevant to life, so it can really be called a literary work. Looking forward to the next update, thank the author for allowing me to return to my childhood in such a fast-paced environment. Come on!

It's a very plain and heart-warming novel. It's quite comfortable to read. I personally don't like the military wife who didn't buy anything because she bargained for a price, but it's a bit scary to be slapped directly. The crime is not punishable by death. I can tolerate the kind of stuff that makes people uncomfortable when they say bad things.

It's warm and nice, but there are too many daily routines of other people in the family home.

It's a very refreshing and comfortable book. I hope it can be finished soon.

It's so healing. The male and female protagonists are sweet, and there aren't too many bloody plots. It's very comfortable to read. It's a very healing article. Unfortunately, it's too short. I hope the author will work hard to update it.

It's more everyday, realistic style, I personally think it's pretty good

Good looking, fresh story, pastoral style

Good looking, super good looking

I really like this kind of unpretentious writing. It's not as comfortable as the best.

A steady trickle of water is fine. If there is no time travel, it will be a cool novel. If there is a big heroine, it will be a pastoral novel, and it will be a daily novel for children in the later period.

If you don't take it seriously, it's pretty good. Some chapters are relatively trivial and can be skipped.

I like this kind of ordinary daily life, and most like to read the growth stories of children in the later stages, ⛽️more!

I really like this kind of bland story, not too many great things, and the heroine and hero are also very sweet.

The writing is delicate, especially the interaction between the brother and the younger brother at the end. The interaction between the younger brother and his father is very vivid. I look forward to more updates from the author.

Very well written and highly recommended

An ordinary life, but quite beautiful

I really like this kind of copywriting, it's plain and simple

A very detailed account of ordinary life, real and not exaggerated. Keep updating. I really like reading it. You have to keep working hard to write it well and don't stop updating.

It's good-looking and very everyday, but it makes people feel that they love life very much, and it makes my heart warm after watching it.

First update and second update. One chapter is too short. I feel like the author has a lot of chapters to make up for it.