I Miss Home So Much in Ancient Egypt

The writing is very good, and the characters are very well created. There is a small part of the content where you can see that the author's writing style has improved, but most of it is well written and the writing is smooth. Most importantly, the character setting and plot are relatively novel. Anyway, I have never seen this type of novel on Tomato.

I have not finished reading this book yet, and have only read about twenty chapters. From the perspective of the character setting, it is quite novel, but the plot of the story of a sweet love story between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, with the god Ra in ancient Egyptian myths and legends, is indeed a bit embarrassing. In fact, it might be better to reformulate a dynasty mythological figure. In some aspects, in the conversation between Ra God and the heroine, Ra God's words have a more modern meaning, and some words can only be spoken by modern people, which leads to a bit of drama. Maybe the heroine is a silly and sweet persona, but from the perspective of my readers, how can I put it, she is more delicate? It feels whimsical... I could use some more practice on characterization. Perhaps because it is a short story, there is no time to deepen the plot. Overall, it is a bit rushed and some parts are a bit inexplicable. Ra is a very important god in Egyptian mythology. Do you fall in love with the heroine because of some stupid things about the heroine (for example, walking in a daze, often bumping into La Shen, and speaking bluntly) or because she is brave, courageous, and at the same time a little simple and loyal, and she behaves slightly stupidly? I'm noncommittal. In my mind, this is not consistent with the actions of a powerful and noble god who has supreme power and has lived for thousands of years to see the rise and fall of mankind. This is also a contradiction. In terms of writing style, I guess it may be due to the author's first novel. The writing style is a bit childish and there is not much description. It is more like narrative or exposition, which makes the article a bit boring and plain. However, this is still worthy of praise. It is already very good. If you improve it a little bit, it will definitely become popular 💕💕💕. Overall, it's pretty good. I hope the author will continue to work hard [top post]

It's very interesting and makes you want to read on. I really like the interaction between the male and female protagonists. The settings of the male and female protagonists are also very unique. You can learn some knowledge while reading. It's a very good book. I hope the author will continue to work hard! 💕

Nice! The language is poor... In some places, I can feel the residual epilepsy of some senior high school students. Suddenly I saw some familiar texts and history and politics... It felt like a dead memory suddenly attacked me. If you want to change your taste, let's take a look. It's good as a short article for OC(?)~ In addition, the author will write a few more short stories (´▽`)ノ♪. I look forward to writing new articles.

It can be regarded as a short sweet article. La loves Tangtang very much, but some of La's dialogues are very dramatic 😂

From a side perspective, this is a very patriotic book [Learned]

Interesting settings Very interesting! The character also likes

Although some of the logic is strange, overall it is a very cute book.

I think it would be more romantic to write about the theme of ancient Egypt. In the end, the heroine goes to Egypt to visit, and some plots and thousands of years of collision happen. Of course, the author's ending is also very beautiful.

I like it, it's a very special book, the first one I've read so far