Hp's Orange Fragrance Overflows

Like the previous review, I still think it is a very good HP fanfic. I have read too many stories about Hermione, and I prefer original × original. This time it is a pro-generation, and the character creation is better. The plot is also quite good, but there is a slight lack of charm in the protagonist. I don't feel the charm of the protagonist. Well... Especially for Ollie, the character creation is a bit dull. Basically, it is Ollie. It did some things, but it didn't particularly show what kind of person Ollie is. The protagonist is pretty good. Maybe the author is not very good at emotional dramas. The relationship between the protagonist and Ollie is too bland, and basically jumps directly to the relationship. The plot is okay. After all, the plots of the parent generation and the three little ones are different. The three little ones just need to follow the plot. However, the plot progress is actually well controlled, but the description is a bit dull. Overall, this is a very good HP fanfic.

It's good-looking, brand new, but it's too short. I have to go back and watch Arigue's Baby again and again.

Full marks for being shameless [laughing evilly]

It feels weird in some places, like I missed it, but didn't I? It's so annoying. When are we going to take revenge on the foursome (I've read more than sixty chapters), isn't it said that we have to think of a way that even Dumbledore can't be partial to?

I haven't commented yet. I thought I had finished my review long ago, so I'm re-doing it this time. The author's writing style is still online, the plot is smooth and smooth without any delay, and the characters are still vivid. Anyone who has read the author's previous book should be able to understand it. It is set in the family generation, with two heroines and a genius protagonist, which makes people feel comfortable watching it. The update speed is guaranteed, and the plot can be expected. The regret of the previous book is that the ending is too hasty. It should be better this time. In short, it is a very good HP fanfic. It is worth reading if you like this kind of fanfic.

Awesome. Although the protagonist is Hufflepuff, it looks at the factional entanglement between Dumbledore and Voldemort from another perspective. The most important thing is the parent generation! It's really novel. What I read basically started directly from the children's generation, and most of them were from Gryffindor. The author is really ingenious in writing from this perspective!

It's pretty good, but it doesn't bother Narcissa and Amber very much.

It's good-looking, really good-looking, and the character design is very good. Well, sometimes the protagonist's personality makes me think that she and Sirius are worthy of being twins, or that they are worthy of being Black.

The writing is really good, delicate and smooth. There is no awkward plot. Everyone's reaction is reasonable and there is no embarrassing situation. It is also quite excellent among the HP articles I have seen recently.

The author's second HP dual heroine book is really well written, but the progress is relatively fast later on, but I still like this book very much. I can feel that the atmosphere is stronger than the previous book, and there is a balance between seriousness and relaxation (maybe the parent generation is more dangerous). I hope that the next book will be even better. [Adoration][Adoration]

It looks good. I can't say anything else except that it looks good.

It's good and good-looking, the protagonist has a cute personality, and the heroine is complementary to the plot. It doesn't stick to the original and is very interesting.

Good-looking, love to watch, like to watch

Overall it's okay, but it's a bit frustrating that the foursome didn't receive any serious punishment from beginning to end.

Very interesting, looking forward to the next episode

It's very interesting and I like the content, but can the author write more? It's not enough [crying][crying][crying]

Come on, come on, come on [send heart]

It ended so quickly, I really couldn't get enough [crying]

I think it's pretty good, mainly because it can't be exactly the same as the original ones. After all, a new character has appeared, and I think it's pretty good to write it this way. (When you see some Harry Potter stories where it's written that after the 11th birthday but no admission notice was received, the squib was determined to be a system, and then used money to upgrade the magic, and then he used the money to buy the notice of admission from the person next door who planned to go to school in another country)

It's good-looking, but it's a little short. Come on, author.

Not bad. Well written is good.

It's nice to read. It's borrowed from the author's other books [Read carefully]

It's great. It's the first full-length hp movie that I didn't jump to read. The writing is very good, the plot doesn't drag on, and the characters are vivid. I recommend it.

Looks great, highly recommended!

Can we do some extras?

I haven't seen enough. It's so beautiful [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Very nice, great content

A pretty good two-female story

The content is very nice.

It's beautiful. My wife wrote it very well.