The Witch's Book, But I'm a Man!

The progress of the second game of Dark Plate has balanced a lot of things compared to the previous one. Shopkeeper Ji is still a pawnbroker, but Goldfinger has changed from a system to "Anomaly" (I quite agree that it would be better without a system) Equipment levels and some complexities have been removed Four of the main characters are said to be retained, including the season finale The strength of various organizations such as the Pawnbrokers Association has been greatly strengthened, even to some outrageous levels. Also, the dark section will soon become the dark section that old book friends are familiar with.

Hey hey hey, black-hearted boss? No, it's the alcoholic shopkeeper Ji and his pawn of the Four Seasons. (●●)

I'm Rainer! New book, new world, at least I think it should be considered a new world () It feels like I have entered Made in Paradise. A brand new plot is written within the framework of the original world view and some of the original characters. Although it lacks a sense of connection with other books in the old world, it is a completely new experience when reading it, with a different sense of exploration [laughing]. It is also relatively new to replace the ordinary system with anomalies and missions, so far it is good! (I wrote a reply to a follow-up review two days ago and found it out today. I laughed so hard.) The first volume is finished. Compared to the first volume, which was a bit casual and interesting, this one has a clearer world view and a clearer plot line. It also seems to have a lot of foreshadowing that is intended to be revealed later. Now I am even more looking forward to the second volume [laughing]

The story is still going on, with familiar faces slowly appearing one after another, and the love and hatred of the past still being played out again. Characters from readers play their own hymns in the dark world. The black world slowly unveils its own veil. A familiar and strange story shows you his completely different epic.

Advantages: Very touching, interesting, and full. Disadvantages: The way of writing needs to be slightly changed. Character descriptions and environment descriptions are a bit lacking. Simply put, the writing level is not enough and it is impossible to write certain things clearly. Overall, it's quite good. It's written in a unique personal style. Although there are some similar techniques in the early stage, it becomes a personal path later on. Suggestion: The weird style is very heavy, but it does not bring too much depression. You can consider starting with a deep analysis of the principles behind the weirdness to give readers a new experience, etc., Such as: the principles of each alchemical experiment, the source and background of alchemical materials, etc., Etc., Which can greatly improve the richness of the content. It will be a lot of fun to watch, come on, author

The look and feel is pretty good, it is indeed much clearer than the previous one.

I was worried because I posted it early, because I heard that if you don't have enough reading time, it won't count. The author has a good grasp of the emotions and souls of the characters, the conception is exquisite, and the plot is reasonable. The book is very good, because the plot is very rich, so the current amount of updates is enough to follow it. Looking forward to the follow-up.

It's really good. The author is as funny as ever. Do you like this style and multiple female protagonists? [What] I hope the author will continue to be inspired, come on! ! ~~O(∩_∩)O~~

The control over the rhythm of the plot is so awesome, I feel more comfortable reading this book than in S.

Unparalleled imagination, unconventional plot, just the right amount of weirdness, and a little bit of ■■. Hmm~Perfect!