Weird************

This book is a slow-burning type, and the plot will become more and more exciting later on! I promise! ! !

My best suggestion right now is to improve the reader's experience, because there are too many curse words in the later chapters that really affect the experience. However, the author's subject matter is indeed very novel, and it looks very exciting. The character's image, characteristics, appearance, habits, way of speaking, age, etc., I think the author did not describe this aspect well. I hope the author understands the truth, that is, how important it is to create a good character image. "A character who has an important turning point or foreshadowing for the plot." The character of Jiang Yong is pretty good now. He is a courageous and enthusiastic person, but the appearance and description of some characters are still not in place. Moreover, after entering the Shadow, it did not explain whether the Shadow has a team uniform or any special logo, how long the Shadow organization has been established, etc. I hope the author can fill in the gaps. There is still a lot of room for development in the novel, and I hope the author can make more improvements. By the way, if the author wants to change the novel into an anime or become really popular, it is recommended to change the previous plot, because the previous plot is obviously bloody and violent, and there is also a section where a woman begs for mercy. The part about being stabbed by "that" is a good opportunity for a hero to save a beauty, but it is a bit too casual to tell the reader that he was stabbed without any reversal [face covering] The author could obviously add some reversals and foreshadowing to make the novel a cool novel with some funny parts and some game parts. However, I also admire the hero's perseverance in the beginning that surpassed Mr. Bei, and the author's wonderful patriotic sequence. The "Use the big move to destroy the Sakura Country" is really a bit embarrassing [face covering] However, I still sincerely hope that the author can become popular🔥[Please update]

It's really good-looking. I didn't sleep all night and watched it all. I dare say it will definitely attract you more than pesticides and make you lose interest in fishing! !

I think it looks pretty good, I can support it [I learned it]

It's nice to watch. I'm from the village, Ghana.

It's very beautiful and has a unique style. I hope everyone will support it [eating melon]

Times Author Team, we like you, we like the author, update, three chapters, you are the most handsome, the best, the cutest, the most lovable ~ [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

Beautiful, super invincible and beautiful [smile][smile][admiration][admiration]

The front is pretty good, but the middle part is a bit... Forget it, just keep doing it [sending my heart]

In the later stage, it is best to use fewer knives, and update

It looks good. I would like to ask how the main character is behind the scenes [Chigua][Chigua]

I just felt that except for the few chapters when I first entered the human world, which were a bit bland, the rest were very exciting.

It's okay, but the ending is rushed and the pitfalls are not filled in properly.

It's a new type of book that you can read. I was one of the first people to buy it. However, I suggest the author refine the plot, because I feel that the sense of immersion can continue to be improved [Note]

I still don't think it's a good idea to get rid of all the weird. After all, weird is divided into good and bad. If you want to get rid of all the weird just because you want to protect your family and humanity, if you think about it from another angle, think about it from the perspective of weird. Others are pretty good😄

The beginning is very good, but it's a pity that there is no traffic and the theme is novel.

I came here to read this novel after reading the anime adaptation. It would be better if there were real people listening to the book.

There are not many novels that I can read on Tomato. In the past, I would only give 3.4 Stars and talk about the shortcomings. Now there are really no good books to read on Tomato.

Why are so few people reading such a beautiful book?

It feels really good. After practicing swordsmanship, the male protagonist is so handsome that I feel so handsome.

I feel it's okay, the subject matter is very good, but I hope it doesn't highlight the main character's character in the early stage, which is a bit nonsense, but I hope the author will work harder

Beautiful, very beautiful It's still pretty good, but it's terrible.

It started out fine, but I was a bit confused in some places.

It looked okay, but the ending was a bit uncomfortable.

The quality of this book is quite high, not much worse than many masterpieces. I don't know why so few people have read it. Is it because the updates are too slow or because I haven't invested money in it.

Updated five minutes ago [almost crying] I love you so much author [crying]

It's beautiful. After watching it for a while, my eyes lit up. Highly recommended.

The beginning is very novel and feels good. However, many factors such as the daily description of the protagonist's family, the improvement of one's own strength, and the development of interpersonal relationships (both in the real world and the strange world) must be unfolded. You have to grasp the connection of each link carefully. After reading it, I felt that the description and foreshadowing in the middle were a bit lengthy. The above is purely a personal opinion. It is up to the author to control his own pace, update steadily, and strive to become a great author as soon as possible.

No, why does his brother's book only have so many chapters? It's not enough. Why don't you add a few more chapters a day? 😡😡😡

The author must keep on updating it. It's very interesting. Don't stop updating it if it's not finished.