A Longest Promise Fanfiction: When the Lanterns First Shine

This is a Sauvignon Blanc and Acacia Liu fanfic. The main CP is the original heroine + Master Xiang Liu. The heroine is Ji, the deceased king of Shennong, who was later adopted by Chishui Xiaoye. This article mainly has two novel aspects. The first Xuanxuan was assassinated and died. The second heroine led Shennong to successfully restore the country. It's not a unique setting, but it's also relatively rare. The language of this article is natural and fluent, and the narrative is clear. The plot is compact. Some plots of Yao Liu were grafted onto the heroine and appropriately rewritten. The core of the character extends online. The story is logically consistent. Basically, there is nothing wrong with it except for Shennong's restoration of the country. This place feels a little rushed. The author wrote two endings. The ending of the first text. The successful restoration of the country is like having an adult and a heroine. The second one is in the extra story. The heroine traveled back in time to the original work, and sacrificed her life to resurrect the amnesiac Master Xiang Liu. There is a feeling of being lost in a midnight dream. Overall, this is a good-level Sauvignon Blanc and Acacia Liu fanfic. Worth reading and recommended to everyone. Friendly reminder that this article will be ruined if the official version of the original work is removed. Please enter with caution.

After reading a lot of novels, I think this one is the most reasonable. It can not only fulfill Xiang Liu's righteousness, but also prevent him from having to die. It can even make him truly a general respected by the world. Moreover, he has a lover who loves him wholeheartedly and understands him and puts him first. He doesn't have to be abandoned by others, and he doesn't have to suffer and endure. He can walk side by side with his lover, and he can live in love and being loved. It's very good and complete. Moreover, the logic of the story is also very reasonable. There are no far-fetched causes and consequences, or any means of resurrection from the dead to complete the story. The identity of the heroine is really just right, a stroke of genius, which is wonderful. The story is briefly written in some parts, but the meaning is sufficient. The most important thing is Xiang Liu's happiness. Overall, it doesn't make people uncomfortable, and it is very comfortable to watch.

It's great to see Xiang Liu redeemed and able to be with the one he loves forever. Although Ah Nian and his brother fell in love a little bit inexplicably, it was considered a good thing. But it's a pity that the relationship between Jing and Xiaoyao couldn't be consummated and they broke up. Maybe the two scarred people were not suitable for each other in the first place. Neither of them was brave enough. Each of them was carrying something they couldn't give up. They were actually waiting for others to redeem themselves.

The extra episode tortured me, not the abuse of love. It is about the changes in the sea, the changes in things and people, and the feelings of separation between life and death.

Why not make a side story? Why not come out!!!

The idea is novel, not only the love between children, Xiangliu is worth having

Oh, it's very interesting, but I'm really worried that I will go down a similar path when I lose my memory and be reborn.

Generally good, but the details are a bit poor