[Two male leads + urban fantasy + System missions / sweet romance + both devoted only to each other / outwardly a dangerous madman but soft-hearted inside An Yase top × outwardly carefree but secretly a dangerous madman Zhou Jin bottom]
An Yase lay in a cramped, airless little room, his stomach cramping again and again. It hurt so much. He’d never come back in his next life.
But fate loved playing tricks on him. In the blink of an eye, he was reborn!
Not only was An Yase reborn, he was inexplicably bound to some kind of makeover System.
"Host, if you don’t follow the makeover guide, you’ll be punished by being locked in the dark room!"
An Yase: …
After experiencing the dark-room punishment once, An Yase decided he never wanted to set foot in one again for as long as he lived.
Being unable to protect the person he wanted to protect was the helplessness of youth. So he spent the rest of his life seeking redemption!
An Yase: “Zhou Jin, I may be an ordinary person, but everything I’ve told you is true!”
Zhou Jin: “I’m plain-looking. I’m just afraid you’ll forget me!”
An Yase: “I’m ordinary, and you’re plain-looking. We’re made for each other!”
As long as even a little consciousness remains, you’ll cling to anything you can. Maybe that’s just human nature!, An Yase
You say you’ve never been anyone’s favorite? Then let me make you my favorite, my one exception!, Zhou Jin
Overall it's pretty good, and the previous short story is also pretty good. The plot is compact, reasonable and readable. If you work hard and improve your writing skills, I believe you can go to a higher level [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]
In the early stage, An Arthur was a person suffering from severe depression. He became extremely depressed due to his mother's abusive love and the death of his sister. Since meeting Zhou Jin, he has become more fond of laughing and willing to cook... Later, Zhou Jin was hunted down by his mother because of An Arthur, and the person who killed An Arthur was someone he personally trained. When he saw An Arthur's broken body, he was also broken... This section is really sad. Although there are only a few chapters, the tear level is so low that it still feels very sad 😢😢 Of course, An Arthur has his own system and will not die, but fortunately he is back, otherwise my Zhou Jin would be too miserable...
So pretty
The writing is particularly good, and the characters are very distinctive. I wish you all a happy New Year's Eve~ Goodbye, may the fireworks come and go, and be safe every year🥰