After Transforming into a School Beauty, She Snatched Her Girlfriend Back

This heroine's character makes me feel very connected (very similar to my character), and she doesn't have the coquettishness and weakness that other protagonists in transformation novels have, which is very nice.

The content is quite interesting and rare, but in terms of relationship, since I have decided on Lily, I will go with Lily. I won't need to change my marriage or marry myself later. I don't care about anything else.

"There are trees in the mountains, but the trees have branches, and my heart is happy for you, but you don't know it." In his previous life, Lin Zhi lost all his relationships as Lin Zhi, going around and around, losing and regaining; The moonlight that Lin Zhi had embraced him without knowing anything in this life was fleeting and elusive. "I like Xia Ruyue. She is my lover, and she can only be my lover, not even Lin Zhi in this life. Since I owed her in my previous life, I can only repay her in this life. I will be her lifelong Zhizhi." —— Lin Zhizhi "I seem to have lost something important to me." ——Lin Zhi Lin Zhizhi lost Lin Zhi, and Lin Zhi lost Xia Ruyue.

The plot is quite novel, although the plot is a bit weird, but overall it seems to be surprisingly good, with not many poisonous points, and the writing is quite fluent. I found it a bit exciting. I look forward to the follow-up emotional drama between Zhi Zhi and Ru Yue [please update]

How to put it this way, I personally don't really like articles about other people's girlfriends. If it's the girlfriend before rebirth, that's okay, but the "original body" is still there and they have a good relationship, which I don't like very much. What I don't understand a bit is why you have to hang yourself from a tree and have a foot in other people's relationships. Now that the misunderstanding in the previous life has been resolved, everything is fine, and they are not wrong and love each other very much, then let the troubles of the previous life go with the wind, and "I" will have a better choice. Summary: Putting aside my opinions on the relationship between rebirth and previous lives, this novel is actually quite well written. The character creation did not collapse with the plot, the IQ was always online, and the villain and the people around him were not blindly brainless. Well, that's it, this is an evaluation based on the number of chapters the author has updated so far.

I just spent some time reviewing it from beginning to end. First, I corrected some typos in order to give the readers behind me a better reading experience. By the way, I took a look at the comments left by the treasurers. How can I put it, I am very touched. Most of the comments are pertinent, which shows that my writing is still readable. There are also complaints. I also seriously reflect on it. There are indeed flaws in some places. I can modify it a little bit, but there are some places that affect my whole body, so I have not changed it. But whether it's good or bad, being able to leave a comment means that someone is seriously reading the book I wrote, and that's enough, 🙏 I will try my best to continue the story, just wait...

In fact, from the moment the protagonist is reborn, she is Lin Zhizhi instead of Lin Zhi. Everyone in this world is unique and has value for existence. As for stealing his girlfriend from his previous life, I can only say that everyone has the right to fight for love at all costs. Although Lin Zhizhi used some tricks, Lin Zhi himself could not control his cheating. In Xia Ruyue's words, she saw Lin Zhi clearly in this life in advance. In this life, Lin Zhizhi and Xia Ruyue are going in both directions. Overall, the plot is well written. I hope the author will work hard and don't use any knives in the later plots. It's sweet and good! (Don't go into the past life, the branches of the forest are the branches of the forest)

Support. But there are some places that I think can be improved. 1. Ren Linzhi and Xia Ruyue had a good time, but they were beaten by Zhizhi stick. It felt a bit 🐮. I think that Lin Zhi in this world can be made to be less loyal to his feelings, but this contradicts the previous situation where Xia Ruyue worked for Lin Zhizhi, which puts the cart before the horse. (It can be seen from the back that Lin Zhi is a bit of a scumbag, but just looking at the front is easy to make people run away. Refer to the movie Hello World, the male protagonist and the female protagonist are together, but the male protagonist from outside the world robs the female protagonist. I feel very similar, mainly because the previous processing is not very good, but I will get by) 2. Lin Zhizhi may be offended by Lin Zhi's appearance of one thing but behind the scenes. After all, they are both Lin Zhi, so it would be too unethical to trick the other person. [Thinking] 3. You can intersperse more daily life as appropriate. It seems a bit boring if there are too many commercial and suspense stories. I have been suffering from low blood sugar recently. Give me something sweet. (Looking at the plot that has been updated so far, it seems that it is not very good.) 4. I feel that the system is too invincible. I can weaken it and let the protagonist have more experience. These are purely personal opinions and do not represent those of all readers. Of course, I don't have the keyboard in my hands, so it's up to you to write how you want. [You taste carefully]

What the protagonist does is normal. There is a system in place. If the girl is given to the original owner as some people say, wouldn't it be 🐢?

The writing is good, and it feels very immersive when I read it. I have read a lot of lily themes, but this is the first one I have written like this. I give you five stars to encourage you. I hope you will be steady and not write too much in the future [eating melon]

Unlike the title, which is not a cool article, it is more about emotional portrayal. Seeing the direction of the first half reminds me of the movie "Hello World". It feels different after that, and I can see the foreshadowing.

It's good-looking, the writing is smooth and the pace of the story is comfortable but not a running story.

"Wow! [Eating melon] [Laughing evilly] This kind of subject matter is really exciting, hey hey hey hey hey [laughing evilly], I am going to rape myself and steal my own girlfriend [laughing evilly]!"

It is really good-looking. From last night to now, I have been reading this book as long as I open the foreign persimmon. I think Lin Zhizhi is quite rational, and Sister Xia, I still like this kind of character who dares to love and dare to break up. I can only say that I like this book very much. Brother System also makes me like it very much. It feels like it has been a long time since I have seen such a system that is dedicated to the host. Therefore, I give it five stars and wish the author a great book success [Love]

I read more than 50 chapters in one go and it was great. The writing is great. Come on. [Laughing] [laughing]

It is really a book that makes people enjoy reading it. The plot has ups and downs, and people can't help but feel the feelings of each character in it. The characters appear vividly on the page. The protagonist has a system but still makes the story bias towards reality. I hope the author will continue to be inspired and polish a chapter that he is satisfied with and supported by readers!

So is this about greening yourself? ? It's so explosive [face covering] Hmm... I'm a bit obsessed... The more I watch it, the more I want to watch it. I'm really looking forward to the plot behind it [face covering]

Quite interesting. Big boost for the author...(σ′▽‵)′▽‵)σ The plot is quite new, and I think that Lin Zhi and Xia Ruyue had missed each other in their previous life... Without Lin Zhizhi, Lin Zhi and Xia Ruyue would not be alive... (I still like Xia Ruyue) It's really not worth it for Xia Ruyue in her previous life. She may be a little princess, but she still became a "knight" in her previous life, and Lin Zhi is just like wood. In this life, I would be really stricken to death if there is a Zhizhi who treats her like a princess. There's also the question of whether I'm awesome or not… I personally think it's okay, it's all up to me.

I finished reading it, and I finished reading it in one night. Let me tell you my feelings about this book. Say it looks good, emmm. Say it doesn't look good, emmmm. Looking at the back, to sum it up, there are only two words, "divine gold"

It's hard to review this book. Before chapter 100, there were occasional small poisons with some green elements. It was actually okay. After chapter 100, big poisons exploded every now and then. If it had been placed on other books, I would have run away. However, the ideas in this book are very novel. I recommend reading it. Overall, it is good.

The writing is okay, but it's self-disciplined. It doesn't matter if you don't look at it from the perspective of the protagonist. After all, it is the protagonist who is trying to take advantage of others. But this novel is viewed from the perspective of the protagonist, which makes people feel very self-disciplined. Except for this problem, everything else is quite normal. If you can accept it, you can watch it. The female protagonist is just taken advantage of by the original male protagonist and nothing else. I was torn between 3 points and 4 points, but I feel like I'd better give it 4 points.

Although there was a little conflict in the early stage, I like it. The emotional line is also more delicate and gradual. I hope the author can stick to it and don't stop updating.

Nice! The beginning is a bit strange, but the author's writing and plot are very good, and there is no watery part. Show them all to me! ! ! ! ! !

Dududu, my girlfriend didn't betray me. Get her back quickly.

I'm back to review it again. This book is the most profound one in my memory. I can't forget it in the past few years. The main reason is that the relationship progression and the dynamic changes in the social network in the identity relationship are really well written. Personal identity, emotions, such as the real conflict and friction when the two heroines meet their parents for the first time, I have never seen in other Baihe novels. I think this kind of realism is unique. Is the author still there? Author, I praise you.

This book is okay, except for my own words, I feel a little uncomfortable reading it, but it doesn't matter, that's it.

The middle period is more interesting. It's awkward to dig holes in the beginning, but it becomes a semi-commercial story later on. The ending is a bit too hasty. But it's not bad anyway

Nice. The number of words is very realistic. If you don't play with bad jokes, the word count won't be good, but it starts to be sweet a little late. (As a Qiong critic, I admire the spirit of the author who doesn't play with Qiong jokes.)

This book is very comfortable to read. I like this tired book very much. The characters and stories are very immersive, but it is too short and ends too quickly, which makes me feel reluctant to leave. The author can just write a prologue, come on [smile]

It's very good to watch, but some of the plots are a bit uncomfortable to watch.