Based on the Manga, I Was Invincible After Ten Draws in a Row at the Beginning! !

The writing is just okay. But the infinite number of female protagonists in comprehensive comics suits my taste. Can we write about the Elf's Sword Dance, the Dungeon Encounter, the Devil's High School, and the Blood-Devouring Attack in the follow-up? The online game drama "Hunter Shangri-La" opens up the world, accelerates the world, and shield girls with full defense also want to watch it. Average The plot part seems to have not been polished, just like the scene when Yui exits the scene. If she really regarded her as her daughter, she should not hesitate to use the bloodthirsty demon sword to fight her. If you can't beat it, you'll have to go back to the original plot, but if you can beat it, you still need to leave this world, so the result is similar, but it's not polished well. The second world is quite bad. Even the unpopular plot is quite rough. It may be because of my personal sense that I hate other gods. The theme of the entire second world has completely changed to acquiring girls and killing people. The plot is not interesting at all. I have been stocking up on lottery draws. I don't know what the use is.

It's okay, it's okay~ As for the harem, don't be timid [laughing] [laughing evilly]

After listening to it, it was okay. I killed Sugou Nobuyuki at the beginning, Kirito-chan transformed into Kiriko [laughing evilly], and I accepted Asuna as the female supporting character in the original story. Sometimes it was too original and I just skipped it and it didn't affect me. I'm about to finish Sword now, so don't forget my daughter Yui-chan.

It's okay, but now the second world feels boring. I still like the world of anime... I thought they were all about anime... I'll wait until the third world is updated and watch it [face covering]

Kirito is a woman? Sex change? Don't understand

How should I put it, has the author read the original work? In fact, Kibaou is really a good person, but his mouth is a bit like Duck King. This person is very considerate of the team and personal feelings. He cannot change Kibaou just because of Sword Art Online in 2015.

It's okay, I just feel a little nosy [eating melon]

When will I go to the second world? Will I take Kiriko and Asuna with me?

I feel pretty good, I hope I don't get sick in the future

Personally, I don't like it very much. I fall in love with it after seeing it, but it's okay if it's well written.

It's a pretty good time travel story, and it's one of my favorites with multiple female protagonists. The plot isn't very compact, but it's not too procrastinating either. I personally like it more. It's not very exciting, but it's not boring either.

It's rare to see Sword fandom, I look forward to the follow-up development ~ Hehe

The writing is okay, keep up the good work.

The protagonist who is "smart" (the shame of human-like IQ)

Which season should I write about for Sword and Sword [Thinking]

Not bad, pretty good-looking

There are very few Sword Art Online novels

Fortunately, some places are a bit awkward, but overall it's okay.

After reading a few chapters, the one that impressed me the most was Jiang Feng Jiang Feng Jiang Feng Jiang Feng Jiang Feng Jiang Feng

I don't feel the second world. The world of swords and swords is currently full of regrets.

It's still possible [Like] [Learned] Just control the rhythm and don't do anything showy [thinking] Then can you have some more [please update]

Well, it's super beautiful. It's almost as beautiful as the original.

I really don't want to poke it, it's just too short [Thinking]

Very easy to write. Come on, author!

It's really good

Beautiful, very beautiful

I like it, it suits my taste

It's okay. I personally feel it's okay.

I gave you Huahua. How about you update two more pages? [Grief]

How many girlfriends does this one have? How many heroines are there?