I Am Dreaming of Immortality in the World of Immortality

Tomato masterpiece. Save everyone some trouble (the possible poisoning point for some book friends is that the pace is slow and the protagonist is a little immature when he first enters the world of immortality. The advantage is that the writing is smooth, the writing is good, and most of the content is logical)

I really can't bear that the book I've been following only has a score of seven. Although not a blessing. Enough to keep me watching. It can't be only seven points! I can finish this book. It will never be lower than 8.5 Points.

I have read several chapters. The writing is very comfortable and the plot is smooth. It is not a system-friendly novel. Golden Finger is also very interesting.

I saw Chapter 53, Mortal Flow, and liked it very much. I didn't encounter any bad points. The writing is smooth, the plot is compact, and the narrative is fascinating. At this moment, I couldn't help but slap my thigh: Good book, good book! What a great book! ! Five stars is the limit of a review, not the limit of this book.

5 Stars praise to show encouragement. I almost saw him forming elixirs, and almost gave up after the blood elixirs. To put it simply, in the early stage, the writing was a little less interesting, especially the emotional aspects of the female characters were not very good, and even a bit redundant. It seemed that the protagonist was a bit indecisive, not suitable for cultivating immortals anyway, too concerned about love and love, and even a scumbag. The middle period is very well written and very consistent with my feeling of cultivating immortality. Cultivation of immortals does not stop, there is only fighting and killing, and there are still vicissitudes of life. In the later period, especially recently, basically what I see now is that it has slowly become dull. . . Overall, come on 💪 author, it's worth reading on Tomato.

Looking at it all the way, although it is not perfect, it is still unconventional and the author's gradual progress can be seen. There are no big formulas, no dirty words and bad jokes. It just depicts a protagonist who aspires to the high road but still maintains a sense of friendship, and a world of cultivators who are intrigued but not so intrigued. Don't worry about those mindless trolls, you will know what the author's level is as long as you read it carefully.

This is one of the few novels that I have followed. It fits my fantasy of cultivating immortals and makes me feel the same way. There are not too many cliche plots. The progression is calm and relaxed. The overall writing style is steady and capable. There are not too many gorgeous words, but it makes people put it down.

This book is suitable for people with some experience. You need to calm down and feel deeply the more you read it. The protagonist is one of a million normal people in college. I am not overly commenting. I have been reading novels for more than ten years and this is a rare masterpiece. Nowadays, there are fewer and fewer good tomato novels. I don't know why everyone likes to read them now. It is a kind of refreshing writing, but it is a steady content like this. Excellent novels are rarely read. Somehow, if one day, the author has to reduce or even give up writing novels due to life reasons, I hope the author can read my words. I hope you don't stop updating. You can update a chapter in a few days or a week. I can wait for it. Don't stop updating.

I have read twenty chapters so far, and this is more than 90% of Tomato books. There are no modern quantifiers in it, such as seconds, minutes, hours, meters, square meters, kilometers and so on. (A quarter of an hour is acceptable, a quarter is better) Besides, the plot is very good and not conventional. Come on, author, one book can make you a god [Like]

There are some poisonous points, but some poisonous points make the character more real. After all, the protagonist is neither a "well-informed" time traveler nor a "well-informed" male protagonist. How can a little person from a humble background play a flawless and harmonious movement from the beginning? A few discordant noises can make the characters come alive on the page! Although I will also curse a few words in poisonous situations, I can also feel the author's sincerity and sincerity in creating imperfect characters. In the current environment where cheats and cheating are prevalent, it takes courage to make such a decision as an imperfect protagonist. This book is well done!

This is my first time tipping on Tomato, just to encourage the author. This is a book with no flaws. The author is actually very good at describing emotions, conflicts, sadness and grief. It would be better if it were more delicate and touching. When upgrading, the inner monologue must be reduced. Talking about how you are doing, how many parameters you have upgraded, where to go jungle next, etc. This is very terrible and will make people lose the desire to read. Later, when I see similar descriptions, I will jump away and fast forward a few chapters. You need to have this kind of experience of upgrading, and don't dare to go too far, otherwise it will definitely dissuade many readers and have to find another way to advance the story. In my true judgment, I should give it around 8.5, But I still gave it full marks and 88 for the completion of the encouragement. It is light on courtesy but heavy on affection. I hope you will do better. Come on. The fragrance of plum blossoms comes from the bitter cold, and everything in the world is like this. The road is long, and we have to search up and down.

Save money, it was quite interesting before the baby was born, but after the baby was born, it was like a puppet on the road, free from worries, all the good relationships were gone, and the plot was not that interesting, but the front part was still very interesting, and it took me more than ten hours to finish it.

It's quite good. The description of the relationship between the girl and the girl may not be too delicate, but as far as cultivating immortals is concerned, it is definitely a masterpiece, just as ordinary people expect: opportunity and hard work may be the only way out.

It's better than those mindless and cool articles, and it's generally logical [Chigua]. It doesn't seem to have any major bugs. The writing style may not be as good as those of particularly experienced authors, but it's pretty good and worth a read.

The characterizations are full of characters and the supporting roles are vividly depicted. In the chapter about meeting Zhao Ling'er, the characterization was pushed to its peak. The "hundred years too late" episode with Zhao Ling'er made me unforgettable for a long time. However, it was deleted, which is really a pity.

The writing is fluent, loose and varied, punching and forgetting, and kicking the immortal. At present, Chapter 214 has experienced the beginning, development, climax and ending, which means that one storyline has been written, and a new story chapter will follow. It will definitely work if the author is more stable. Considering that I have read 6,000 books, this book is not bad.

Overall, it's a good work, but too much description of the protagonist and female characters in the early stages affected the viewing experience.

I have read countless fantasy novels about cultivating immortals and also read many systems. In the past, I thought the first one was Yu, but because I read it quickly. Every time I add it to my bookshelf, I wait until it reaches more than 1,000 chapters before I read it, because I know I can't read it fast enough. I read the last one. There are more than 1,000 chapters. But raising books supports me. I didn't continue reading it and read it day and night, but this book is very interesting. Watch it at work, watch it after get off work, stay up late at night and watch it. Go to the toilet and watch. Hahaha, it looks good, it looks good. Now I have listed this as the first one. Show it to me. Show it to me.

@Night3zz is the best mortal flow I have seen in recent years. The protagonist is cautious, attentive, bold, and has deep blessings. The content of the article is layered and logical, and it is not a brainless article. The protagonist takes it step by step. The author's writing style is very good, which makes people feel comfortable reading [Like][Like][Like][Like] Must be five stars [like]

In Tomato, it's pretty good. After reading more than 400 chapters, the protagonist has varying degrees of ambiguity with four or five women, but the real heroine is not established. Kendo is said to be sentient kendo, but its performance is not outstanding. I personally like Zheng Qin and Zhao Ling'er better. It's a pity that one is dead and the other one probably has no results.

The language is concise and sophisticated, the quotations are well-marked, and the ending is not messed up without watering down. The group portraits are lifelike and the protagonist has a distinct personality. This is a rare and good online literary work contributed by an author who was working as a black slave in the impetuous fast food era.

To be honest, the rating is really low, maybe because there are too few recommendations. This is already a high-quality novel in the mortal stream. The protagonists are highly cultivated and powerful. I hope Xinci and Liu Yu are the most promising heroines. The other 2 or 3 should be confidante friends. Like Yuan Yao and Bingfeng from the mortal stream... This state is the best.

This book is quite good. I almost read it all the way to the end. Opportunities and resources are quite reasonable. However, in the end, I find that the women around the protagonist do not have a good ending. Whether it is Zheng Qin, Gongsun Ying or Ruyi and others in the beginning, the results are not good. Only Liu Yu and Zheng Qin can be considered natural. The others are really, ugh

To be honest, I think the writing is very thoughtful and I hope Tomato will recommend it more and provide more traffic. Give the author the confidence to continue writing so that he can present more and better stories to readers. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's okay, but it's a little bit annoying in the early stages. Basically, you can meet a female character when you go out. Turn left and you'll see another female character. Anyway, it's the kind of male protagonist in the early days. It will get better after half of the chapter, at least it will start to be normal. There is a lot of books to read, as long as you get through the little poison ahead.

I have finished this book now? It's a very good novel. Both the plot and the IQ of the protagonist are online, and the author has also added his own ideas to the setting of the realm, so that it is no longer the same.

The plot is coherent and reasonable, and covers a wide range of topics! Immortals, Buddhas and demons, cultivating immortals and various arts, magical powers, and various exercises are wonderfully presented! This is a very real novel about cultivating immortals, with sentiments and righteousness, leisure and relaxation, family feelings, and the sect's will to pass on. I have read dozens of novels about cultivating immortals on Tomato, and this one can be regarded as the best.

I like the slow-burning type, unlike others, where leapfrogging is like eating. Other people's geniuses who have been practicing for thousands of years are not as good as you who have been practicing for decades.

The structure is clear, the plot is reasonable, the writing is smooth, and it has a bit of modern flavor. Various nouns, terminology, elixirs, magical objects, and methods of cultivation can be scrutinized. A rare good book from Tomato. Come on, work hard, two updates a day is the most appropriate.

The author wrote it carefully, which is obviously different from those mindless articles. Recommended