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The brief encounter seems to punish those who are serious Hee hee, give yourself a good review [smile] [OK]

The plot is good, but there are a lot of typos, and some sentences are a bit illogical and confusing, but the impact is not great. The main theme is just understandable. Also, the system and the protagonist really get along well, so just pamper him in the system [shy] It's a bit messy, and the plot starts to get too watery at the end, but I feel like the protagonist's psychology in the ending is pretty well written.

Well, how should I put it? Many descriptions of the scenery are very beautiful, but the plot is very messy and the characters are many and complex. Many parts require repeated viewing to understand. So far, I only remember the name of the protagonist, and I don't remember the other people at all... But I think I watched it very seriously. To sum up objectively, the writing can be given a high score, but the plot and character setting can only be given a mid-to-low score. To put it more simply, ice cubes with gorgeous appearance. It looks very beautiful, but when the sun shines on it, it will immediately turn into water and eventually disappear. This gorgeous exterior cannot protect and cover up your inner core. What this means is that perfect writing cannot help you fill in the gaps in your characters and plot. No matter how hard you try to cover it up, it will eventually become water and disappear. Four points is really the highest score I can give. I actually wanted to give it three stars at first, but after all, this is the first time for the author to write, so I can give you some encouragement. But I hope that in the next book, the relationship network of each character, each person's soul, as well as each important plot and countless situations in each chapter will be drafted and arranged in advance. Finally, based on these things, writing is added.

It may not be suitable for people like me who have high requirements. The main reason is that it is really difficult for me to understand the plot and it is too out of the ordinary. But I am relatively young, so I can understand it. Come on, this perseverance is already very valuable. If it was five or six years ago, I should try to understand it. Now I have read too many articles and my thoughts are different. So I'll wait until I grow up a bit, I believe you'll be better. See you next time. In fact, I really like the inspiration and some of your philosophical words. I also think the plot of this article is very novel, but it's really hard to read. Do you know the 26-key Pinyin? Typing is very fast. I probably practiced this in elementary school. There will be fewer typos and a lot of time will be saved. Ahem, I hope it will get better and better! And first in academics!

It's okay, it's quite ambiguous, the plot is pretty good, and there's not too much mess.

The first world is very plain and amazing. The passionate love of young people is so beautiful. Woohoo, I hope I will always be a fan of people without any CP. The single arrow is very beautiful. Like the first two worlds

Overall not bad

Not bad, I will continue to update it in the future. Come on, author! But it looks a bit hard for me, my brain is not full.

It's so wonderfully written in big letters [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart]!

Well, author, have you eaten toadstools? I may have eaten fungi, but I actually understood the plot.

The author should find time to overhaul it.

I really like the second world (ღ˘⌣˘ღ)

It's pretty good-looking, but there are a lot of typos. I hope the author will update it soon [Sending my heart]