Naruto: I Am the Orthodox Immortal of the Human Race

The author is so amazing that he can write cool articles so plainly [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

It's full of jade and clean, and it's quite faithful to the original work, so there's not much of a problem. As for the heroine, I think I should choose Ino, forget Hinata, otherwise what will happen to Naruto? It's even more impossible for Tsunade, because Tsunade is too old.

All I can say is that the writing style in this early stage is very good, very detailed and true. Whether it is my actions, feelings, or thoughts, it is very detailed, worries, and worries. This is time travel, isn't it? The previous writing is very good, but there is some personal heroism. However, fans of anime such as Naruto are inevitably like this. In the later stage, the combat power collapses, and the protagonist takes everything on himself. This kind of writing is taken for granted, and the sense of reality is very limited. Secondly, the emotional line is also very important. It can also increase the sense of reality and life. It feels that it needs to be paid attention to. After traveling through this kind of world, can various female characters be let go? In the end, I have to take the initiative, refuse, and take no responsibility. I have a feudal background, and my strength speaks for itself. There is nothing wrong with having a harem. It's still a limitation of fan fiction. The world is a bit too simple and beautiful. We can't just have villains like Danzo Kuro Zetsu. The ugliness of human nature is everywhere. We can write about the peace created by the heavy code in troubled times, but we have to make the world a better place. Whether it's the productivity of the ninja world or the ruling class, there are many things that can be written about. Although the protagonist's growth process is traceable, it is somewhat smooth and lacks psychological conflicts and entanglements. If you want to say that the protagonist is dedicated to cultivation, he must have a goal and motivation to pursue it. In the later period, the protagonist has both strength and power, and there are too many things to do. Don't you want to promote changes in the ninja world? It can only be said that the early writing gave people very high expectations. After the first time, I found that there are still some shortcomings. Whether it is self-preservation or other things, strength is very important, but you can't just indulge in strength. The breath of life can make readers feel real. The depiction of group portraits can also enhance readers' viewing experience, and the vividness of other people's images can also increase the sense of reality. Excellent fan fiction is not only about writing, but plot and rhythm are also very important. You must play jokes and pretend to interact with readers... Write boldly.

It is quite interesting to bring the real-life inner alchemy technique to the ninja world, transplant the Sharingan with the body of a thousand hands, and travel between the past and present through the dragon veins, embarking on another path.

The writing is very good and the plot is reasonable. You must stick to it.

As long as it's not a harem, it's a good book!

It's well written, it's not just about conspiracy and calculation, it's about bitterness and hatred.

It looks good and has its own characteristics. It doesn't have any bad points now. I like it very much.

It's pretty good, I don't understand why it only has a 6.6 Rating

It's still pretty good so far, but the emotional scenes aren't handled well. In fact, the emotional scenes could be arranged less.

Okay, no system

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Not bad, quite rigorous

There is no poisonous point yet. Come on. Three chapters were updated today and it finally started to speed up. Come on, I'll give you a little gift.

Can be seen, but average. You need to lose your head. According to the Tomato score, around 8 points should be more appropriate.

It's pretty good. I accidentally saw the latest chapter [Please update] [Please update]. It's been a long time since I met an interested Naruto fan on Tomato. The protagonist's personality is quite likable. He is neither brainless nor a virgin. He should be contented but decisive when he should be strong. There is no system. The protagonist combines Taoist practice to find a way to become stronger. He becomes stronger step by step. It is very good. Let's look forward to the day when the protagonist creates his own sage mode and becomes an invincible ninja world.

The author's writing is full of details, and it doesn't look boring. It's quite good.

The writing is quite good, why is the score so low?

Okay, ok, ok

! You can take a look! Good

Excellent article, worth reading

Good. Mix health and be healthy

You can see that the bag is not poisonous

Not bad, I recommend checking it out.

Good looking, clear logical thinking

So beautiful, recommended

It's good to watch. I'd love to see more [laughs]

Not bad, very beautiful

Not bad, pretty good

Does the heroine have Ino?