[Quick Travel] a Passerby Becomes a Heartthrob

Mianmian is very cute, but I think the writing is not very good. Many men will do whatever it takes to get Mianmian, without considering Mianmian's feelings, and the ending of the small world is too careless. However, the above is purely a personal opinion, and different experiences of XP will be different. The author's writing is still very good from an objective point of view. (Don't be rude, it's your fault. Don't tell me to stop reading if you can't stand it. I just want to avoid lightning for people who may not want to read it later. I don't mean to give low marks maliciously, and I don't say that the author's writing is not good. I want to bully me. Please read it all for me. I have a bad temper. Feel free to scold me, but don't force me to scold you.)

In the third paragraph of the first chapter, someone asked Shuang Jie, didn't the author reply to Du Jie? Why can Lu Jiangheng in the second world kiss me and be treasured if he is not clean? Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhing I don't accept it! ! ! [Angry][angry][angry][angry]

It's pretty good-looking, I just want to know if it's sliced ​​or np [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

This heartthrob article is okay. Although the writing style is average, it is relatively easy to read. It is just a fun article to read. The main thing is to relax after reading it. However, in general, such a setting of prosperous beauty will not become a passer-by. You can start the film and add a beauty hidden buff. It will be much easier to write later, so it is easy to see whether you are interested in sex. Fortunately, this is a non-CP article. People who truly love love are looking at the soul.

After seeing the second Little World, I couldn't help but comment! It's really super delicious! ! Our protagonist wants to be pampered by everyone and loved by everyone as beautiful as a fairy! I was really happy eating at Shura Field. . . . . The protagonist simply came here to catch the white cat. . . I'm so cute. . . I'm afraid I thought it was a game if I was eaten! ! And it can be seen that the author is a novice, but his writing skills have really improved very quickly. I really like the second small world, it is not embarrassing at all, the plots are connected, and the characters are all my favorite! ! 😋😋😋 I recommend that if you want to read it, you can start with the second small world, because the first small world is not very impressive to me, and the author's writing style is indeed relatively unfamiliar! ! Everyone still has to look at it later. . . . It feels like there is nothing to clear out! If I have to say it, there is a male protagonist in the second small world, which is half-hearted (?), Because I haven't seen it yet. Our protagonist had Bai Yueguang (?) Before, but we still have to follow our own opinions! Because the author didn't give a detailed overview of what happened between them, he just briefly touched on it, so it's not considered unclean to me. The most important thing is that you fell in love with our protagonist baby at the first sight! 😋😋😋Mom, let me eat, eat, eat. . . The author is awesome and the heartthrob protagonist, Grandma, is all right to Klass. . . . . 😋😋😋The final author should not stop updating!

I think it's pretty One caveat; I mainly watch Heartthrob Basically, it's love at first sight, it's love at first sight. If you can't accept it, why don't you watch it? I think it's pretty good.

Oh my god, I love it so much. It's my favorite article on Tomato right now. I didn't expect it to be so in line with my taste. I hope it's free of CP, but I love it so much. I would love it even if I had CP. It's really good-looking. I can't say anything else except that I love it and it's good-looking. What a heartthrob. I like it. The male protagonist also knows that he is a heartthrob. I love him so much.

It is suitable for consumption during the transitional period. It is popular among people. It is controlled and can be entered. It can be watched as a non-CP. I feel that I don't know who exactly I am with. There is a boyfriend in the side if line. It is very comfortable to watch. It does not need to be consumed with brain. It is recommended. It can be read as many short stories, because there is not much description outside the small world, and there is no line outside the small world at the end. It is relatively hasty [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss]

The protagonist has a dull feeling like a doll. When he jumps to the magic stick, he seems to be activated all of a sudden. He jumps out and becomes popular.

[Quick Time Travel] Passerby A became a heartthrob | Like the two worlds of the Little Blind Man and Beta, Shou belongs to the white and black kind, but this latter characteristic disappeared, and it became an immersive quick time travel, and Shou's own personality cannot be reflected.

What a great book

It's pretty, but it's all be. I can't bear it anymore [face covering]

My nickname is Star⭐️ Hope you can reply to me~

I like this setting very much! But some plot holes are quite big, and the writing also has a lot of room for improvement. Some small things don't need to be fully described in a few strokes, and you don't need to answer all the dialogues between characters! (There are too many "ok" and "oh" in some chapters) You can nod with actions or change the scene directly. Come on, I'll be optimistic about you [Blowing Kiss] The plot is going to poke me

This is really beautiful [admiration] [admiration]

Ahhhh! ! I love this book so much! ! Why isn't it popular? ? I have seen this type of products and they are all about 90% to 80%! ! It's obviously so well written! I am a local dog and I love watching this kind of heartthrob type! ! Ahhhh, I like it so much! !

It's a dessert-level article. Each world is relatively short and the content is a bit bland, but it's really captivating. Everyone falls in love with the protagonist almost at first sight. The most impressive one is the world of the God Stick. The settings in other worlds are interesting to talk about, but the writing is not so attractive, so it took me a long time to finish reading such a fast-paced article.

How can I put it, it's really charming, there are so many in each plane, it's really majestic, it's beautiful, it's big, more updates, it's beautiful, I recommend it [please update] [please update] Mianmian is also very cute and charming, this kind of baby is my favorite, and she's beautiful [Adore][Adore] It's so beautiful, especially the bate one, the combination of sweetness and abuse, I like it

It's nice to watch, but the world of Bo is, well... Not very good.

For those of you who don't know whether you want to read it or not, I think you can read the last volume about the man and his wife first. Almost every small world is so rushed, especially the last volume, so you can read the last volume first to test the waters. It's only six chapters anyway, so it's not a waste of time. I have a bit of obsessive-compulsive disorder, and I feel uncomfortable even if I don't finish it halfway through [palms my face] Five stars to the author, thank you for your hard work!

It's pretty good, but Mianmian is too innocent and the article is a bit bland [crying]

This book is very good, I recommend everyone to read it

Mianmian is really cute❤️❤️

You can change the amount of words, such as changing his face to dark for a moment to gloomy

This is suitable for watching when you are not thinking.

Okay, that's it

I like it so much, I like it so much [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [admiration] [admiration] [admiration] [admiration]

The heartthrob looks so cool [Adoration]

It looks great, please give it a thumbs up to the author

Yossi, so pretty