Under One Person: Immortal Thief of Liuku

It's very interesting, but the rating seems low. It should be 8.8 Or higher. In my opinion, it's better than some 9-point movies. First of all, the logic is good and you can read it. There are no vulgar descriptions of pornographic feces and farts. The author does not use pornographic accents to create confrontations, nor does he argue with various All kinds of people engage in ambiguous and prostitution. The protagonist and everyone are normal people. The way they get along with each other is very comfortable, and then they fill in the holes. I think it is reasonable. I don't write about all the sexes for the sake of being evil. The most enjoyable part is to blow up my little life. It's really cool.

The protagonist's combat power is among the strongest among his peers, and the combination of innate lightning and lightning + Liuku Immortal Thief is also very interesting, I like it very much. It's not like some Under One Man fandom who always have a lot of superpowers that rival the Heavenly Master... It's just that it was written relatively early and was backstabbed a lot by the original (laughs). The relationship between the protagonist and Zhang Chulan seems to be unilaterally helping Zhang, but Zhang Chulan's character is indeed difficult to trust people, and it seems uncomfortable, but it is not to the point of being poisonous. The original plot that rises to the level of family and country feelings does not feel so natural, but it is done as well as possible. Overall, the look and feel is okay, but the score feels a little low.

The writing of this book is okay, but it is written a little early, so many plots are actually incompatible with the original work, and it is numb in the back. Apart from this, the other plots are enjoyable to watch. Although the final ending is very satisfactory, if you really study it closely with the original work, it is not that reasonable. If 36 thieves really did this for such a purpose mark, there wouldn't be so many sects chasing after them recklessly. If they were all blocked by the ban and couldn't tell the truth, Master Tian wouldn't have gotten the truth from Zhang Huaiyi. But the author did write with his own ideas. I feel that he wrote the fanfic very wonderfully. This is enough, so I am still willing to give him four stars.

Author, the plot and content are good, but this writing style reminds me a bit of the essay I wrote in junior high school. The Chinese teacher said it was just a running account. I don't mean to criticize you, but simply suggest that you improve your writing style. This novel will definitely be popular, so I will give it four stars first. Come on, baby

It's very good-looking, one of the best among the fanfics, and the changes are quite good. The protagonist is established, and he doesn't help Zhang Chulan without asking for any reward. Everything is paid for with money or promises to solve something. It's very well written. I've been reading some fanfics where he always participates in Zhang Chulan's plot. I don't know what Zhang Chulan gave him, so hard.

It's really awesome. It's not a pure Long Aotian Invincible style. The plot is very compact. The main reason is that the author really has two brushes in writing books. This book is considered to be top-notch among the fans under one person. It can be read first-hand.

It's quite good-looking, and it makes up for a lot of one person's regrets. One person's famous scenes are not missed, and it doesn't purely focus on the main plot, but it feels a bit fast. The Chen Duo chapter is over after about a hundred chapters. It seems that the progress will soon reach March 1st. Have you thought about what to do if the main plot is exceeded? (Curious)

The writing is very natural and does not feel like a running account! It's a really good article!

The plot felt very good. Then I didn't read much of this one, but I felt that the plot was very good. Then I didn't read much of this one. I also explained it sideways. My doubt about the comic I read was whether any big boss knew about the Jiashen Rebellion. Why is this comic still finished? Can any boss explain to me why the company didn't eradicate Quan Xing when the Heavenly Master went down to kill Quan Xing but was stopped by others? Because the brand new ones I saw in the anime are no different from lunatics. Don't they know that this group of people will cause significant harm to society? Why don't companies eradicate it completely? (◇)

After taking a look at it, it feels really good. There is a setting that the Immortal Thief of Liuku swallows the spiritual energy of the world and strengthens himself. He eats people just to eat his innate energy. After all, isn't there a person who went to a barren place and stayed there for a long time? He has no food to eat, but the longer he lives, the stronger he becomes.

Give me five stars first! Four updates a day is already a lot, but it is not enough to read. I want to stock up on articles, but I am afraid that the author will find the data difficult to escape, and there are no books to read. The bookshelf is full of updates and interruptions...

Although the male protagonist has a bit of a golden finger, the fact that he can find the source in a one-man world deserves a full score. And although the protagonist is already invincible among his peers, he still doesn't have the temperament of forcing a king to come to the world, which I like very much. Finally, I always thought that there was finally an author who didn't beat up the little devils, but you gave me a big blow. It made me laugh to death, okay?

The character design is very realistic. At least there are no scenes in other movies that specifically suppress Zhang Chulan's role as the protagonist. It also helped me make up for some regrets. The plot is well connected and I didn't see any major poisonous points. The author updates it four times a day, so I feel it's immersive.

I think the reason for the Jiashen Rebellion is the best among the many fan books I have read. The righteousness of family and country is what binds those proud men of heaven!

Come on, come on, author! There are too few novels under One Person, so I can only find one and read it. I hope I can become an old fan by then.

I read Chapter 88 in two days, and I like it~ (There are quite a lot of scenes, so I like it even more)

Really good-looking I have nothing to say. I don't have anything good to comment on. I can only say that the look and feel are similar to my experience watching Perfect World. They are both very good. So this is a good book. I haven't seen such a good book in a long time.

IQ, logic, link to link. The plot is very good, but not enough to make you want to watch it.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! ! ! Each character is portrayed perfectly! ! ! When the Heavenly Master tricked his disciples into planting a big tree, I burst out laughing, hahahahaha! Very well written! It feels like writing life! It feels like there is a picture in my mind! Love love love love! ! ! ! It would be better if 8 chapters (total 4 chapters) were updated in one day😆

I have only watched the first season of the anime, and the first two episodes of the second season. The fan fiction written by the author is okay. It basically restores the personality of the original characters, and the protagonist is not too generous. Overall, it is not bad, and I can understand it.

Surprisingly quite good! It's just not enough. If you have saved manuscripts, please post more!

Okay, even though I didn't watch half of it [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] I saved a bit too much, it's a bit like that, it's just too much and I don't want to watch it. You know, how can I put it? It's really good and beautiful😄

It was finished before I knew it, and I kept following it. I didn't read it just because the word count was short, so I could save more and read it once. We are not as good as all the bosses. We give rewards every day and contribute one update data every day. Occasionally fluttering free gifts are rewards for books that we like and can read. Come on, look forward to the next book.

It's a great article. The whole article is logically self-consistent. The only shortcoming is that it's a bit short, and the explanation of the sworn alliance between the thirty-six thieves is also very reasonable. After all, they are all the proud sons of the sect. How could they ignore the sect and join the sect? If it is for a larger situation, this can be explained clearly.

It looks good, the writing itself is very good, and the author's portrayal of the characters is very good. This book can be regarded as one of the best fanfics by one person.

It is really the best one-person novel I have seen in 🍅. The self-set plot is very interesting and logical. The ending fills in all the pitfalls and also sublimates it. Such a big secret and the perseverance to protect it are definitely not ordinary wishes. The protagonist's abilities are not invincible, there is no cp, no ambiguity, and the plot is not bad either. Perfect ending (spreading flowers)

Personally, I think this book is quite readable. For those who have actually read Under One Person, the restoration of the characters is pretty good. I also added some of my own ideas. You can see it.

This is the best one-person novel I have read so far. I think the reasoning behind the subsequent plot is quite reasonable. Anyway, I like it very much [blowing kiss] [note]

The writing is very good, and some unnecessary original plots are well handled. It is a masterpiece among the Under One Man fanfics. It does not pursue the Eight Magical Skills too much, the combat power is not broken, and the writing is also good [Like] [Like] [Like]

So far, it's pretty good. I just don't know if the author can write something completely his own after all the plots of the original work have been written down.