Elf: the Flying One

See Chapter 66. The quality of this book is not very good, but I gave it five stars because it is more to my liking. Here are a few things I admire about him. The first is that the author knows very well what he wants to write about. He doesn't want everything, such as some gorgeous contest, mythical beasts, including Doctor Pokémon, including punishing evil and promoting good, and the protagonist Xiaozhi. He won't rely on this kind of thing. Secondly, I really like the configuration of the flying team. He may not be the most perfect flying team, but he is the purest flying team. The daily description and slow-paced development are very comfortable. Although life is slow-paced, evolution is fast-paced. Finally, the creation of these characters is similar to the original work. And they have growth, which I rarely see. Most authors are basically like that from beginning to end. Here are some points that I am not satisfied with. The first is the partial flow of water. The pace in the early stages was too fast, probably because everyone in the Kanto region was tired of watching it, so they skipped ahead without any surprises. I have just started reading about the Chengdu area. I wonder if the writing will be more refined later. The second is that some of the dialogues in the play make me feel very confused, because many dialogues do not write the names of the elves, but use their calls instead. It is often just a call paired with a sentence. When the protagonist's team increases, it will be very confusing. Also, the main line is not very clear. Are you going to become a Pokémon Master? Or should we build a flying team and become a free agent? This question continues to waver during the protagonist's journey. In the chapter I read, he recently proposed returning to his hometown to farm. This is the shortcoming of slow-paced flow novels. There is no sense of immersion. If you look at it from the perspective of a bystander, you will be exposed to the most complete information, but the sense of immersion in the characters will be less. That's all for now, more comments will be given after reading. After reading Chapter 247, I can almost complete my book review. To be honest, the subsequent plot was a bit disappointing and bland. First of all, the author is very greedy. He wants to include Kanto, Johto, Fengyuan, and other areas, and even some plots and events in the original work. However, I looked at the catalog and there are only more than 500 pictures, which means that many places can only be briefly mentioned. Secondly, because the author wants to write everything in, the plot is very bland, just like an experiment record written during an experiment. The date, place, characters, event names, approximate process, and results are all gone. In addition to the mediocre plot, I also have to question the growth of the protagonist. He has reached the level of a senior king, and can even threaten the kings of the older generation. As a result, the protagonist is still timid and dare not release his Pokémon in front of others. In the latest chapter I've seen, he's changed his mind, but hasn't made a change yet. What I hate the most is that he travels with Ash. I don't understand what's the benefit of this, because in the plots where the author travels with Xiaozhi, he assumes that the readers have seen the anime and know the original plot, so he doesn't write what the event is, directly refers to it, and then starts describing it from a third perspective. The author may be addicted to the beautiful situation he created when he was at a low level, and is unwilling to change. He has clearly become the champion of three regional competitions, and is clearly the result of the strength of the senior king. I was watching the plot, and I was still a young man who didn't know much about the world. He was obviously a Sky Warrior, and he had 4 mythical beasts in his hand. However, I didn't see the exciting fights or the power of the mythical beasts. So are you just using them as decorations? So I was very disappointed with the subsequent plot. I think the author's setting of collecting the mythical beasts is very rigorous and not obtrusive, but he did not include the mythical beasts in the plot, and turned it into a pet, or even an exhibit, for his own enjoyment. I deducted one star for the above reasons, and I probably won't read it anymore.

For later readers: The novel started slowly at the beginning, and the first 20 chapters were about making money and leveling up, so it was quite boring and a little off topic. I started writing better and better from now on. At least I got to chapter 150 and I thought it was pretty good. Unfortunately, the protagonist's strength improved too quickly, and Hoenn began to fail in the later stages. The Waveguide chapter became a background, and he finally came out to take care of Xiaozhi as a nanny. As you can imagine, it's going to be a mess.

It's pretty good-looking, fast-paced and fulfilling. It can also be seen that the author's writing style is relatively immature and he is not good at writing details. It may also be my misunderstanding... To sum it up, the author, please give me more updates.

It's pretty good, the only drawback is that the early stage is too fast. It's likely that many people won't be able to stand it.

So far, the protagonist has made an ice bird. The system only brightened up the game at the beginning, giving the protagonist twelve unnamed elf balls and an elf egg, as well as cultivation experience. After that, there is no systematic role. Overall, this book is very good and worth reading. It is not as boring as other system books, and there will not be many mythical beasts. Each elf has its own role, and some elf roles will not be forgotten like other elves. Overall, it is very good, very interesting, and worth reading.

Like a person without emotions, you can add a heroine, such as Mei Touko, Natsu Sirona

It's okay, it's too fast, and even though it's written about Pokémon, it still doesn't have a good relationship with Ash and the others. Generally speaking, if you like flying Pokémon, you can take a look. If you like to watch the main storyline of Ash and the others, it's not recommended.

The pace is indeed a bit fast, but it is much better than those hydrological ones. As for elves, my suggestion is that every attribute should be present in the early stage, as long as it can fly or float, it does not necessarily have to have the flying attribute. In the middle and later stages, we will cultivate three or two more quasi-gods. At most one mythical beast or something is enough, after all, I don't have much background and I don't have much money.

Qualifications and levels: Ordinary (0-20) - Elite (21-40) - Gym (41-60) - Heavenly King (61-80) - Champion (81-100) - Leader (Level 3 God) (101-110) - Level 2 God (111-120) - Level 1 God (121-130) - Creation God (150)

To me it looks better. I hope the heroines are Mei and Touko

She's only 10 years old, so she doesn't need to worry about the heroine first. . But write more about the interaction with the characters. There is no need to group CP, we can just do it ourselves☺️☺️ If there is no heroine, I feel it is lacking in flavor. But if the author writes an emotional drama, I think it's a bit inappropriate.

It's okay, at least there's no magic modification and everything is added.

Good but I think the pace is too fast Liu Shuiwen doesn't have much emotion, like a machine

How can I put it this way? I personally like to watch movies with female protagonists, preferably with some emotional drama. Others are fine.

Not bad, will the author accept that Lugia? What's the use of being silent and beating the Baby League all the time?

Born in Zhenxin Town, why not foster the elf with Dr. Oak?

Come on, author, I would like to ask if there is a female protagonist? Single heroine or multiple heroines? Answer when you see it

You can't raise a Scorpio King and a Charizard, otherwise they will be killed directly with ice and electricity [laughing and crying]

Is there a heroine or not? The author just has a fast pace. I hope it won't be too fast.

This book is really good, but I just want to ask if I can catch the flying green caterpillar, one of the 3 Hoenn 3 fools? [Thinking][Thinking][Please update]

Generally speaking, it's okay, but the protagonist doesn't like to play crushing games. Every time, he either narrowly wins, or just wins, or he doesn't win at all. Every time I go to the gym, I use the lower level ones in the team. Togekis (the presence is unknown after level 60) has not been used once.

It's beautiful and fast-paced. The only thing I have is that I can change the Pokémon's words into names. Every time I see a cry, I don't know who said it. It's very confusing.

I feel like the speed is a bit too fast. I'm not talking about Pokémon, I'm talking about some processes. I don't know, it looks pretty cool, but it's too fast. More than 50 pictures are the end.

I feel pretty good. I just want to be more direct when writing about Invincible. I think there are many system elves with high qualifications, but they always get stuck, and they can't even take a step forward.

Is there a female protagonist? Who is the heroine?

As long as you dare to write, I dare to read

Support after reading this

Not bad, the pace is fast enough

Just like a person playing a game and going through the plot. No emotion.

It was fine in the front, but the level of the elves increased too quickly, and there was some weakness in the back. It's too watery in the back.