HP a Lost Baud

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In fact, I didn't have much expectations at the beginning. After all, the angle of description was relatively biased, there were only a few chapters, and the introduction was not complete. However, I still read on patiently, and I was surprised to find that the facts were much different from what I imagined—a forgotten daughter of the Potter family was the protagonist. Expanding on the main plot, at least the first part pushes the plot forward in a form similar to memories. The writing style is okay and the content is novel. This makes this book that has not yet grown up catch people's eyes in the same fan fiction and makes people interested in the subsequent plots. However, the update frequency is not stable and the length is too short. I hope it will grow up, I think it will be a good book

The author is waiting for your update. This book will stand out among all HP novels. Never stop updating

Overall, it's very good. It's a different route from other HP fans. I'm really looking forward to the follow-up development. Please be sure to check out the ending [please give me more updates]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Ah, ah, ah ah, ah ah, ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah ah He ordered the food, took a bite with a ferocious look, and then crawled back into the dark pit with a graceful expression.) After getting mad, he got to the point. I'm done reading. This is because I can't find the large size now. So use the trumpet to comment. I think this book can be said to be the pinnacle of HP novels with two heroines. Very well written. Have your own style. The self-narrative is very immersive. The emotional line is also very exciting? Extreme pull? I don't know how to describe it? But the author wrote it really well. The author is also very careful. The subject matter is very novel. The imagination is great and the writing is fluent. There are many amazing sentences. This is the author's first novel. Really surprised me. Generally speaking, novels written by novice authors are not this good. So the author is a copy of the opening article? The heroine's emotional lines, friendship lines, and family lines are all very clear. Especially the emotional line. It's very real and makes people feel immersed. And it's easy to move people. The heroine's personal image is also well created. It's a Slytherin character. Be ambitious. Crazy and reckless. The character development of the other heroine is also perfect. She is very similar to the heroine and is equally crazy. There are also many supporting characters that are clearly written. There are also a lot of foreshadowings. Already filled in a few. I hope the author will not dig holes and not fill them. The only drawback is that updates are a bit slow. Occasionally there will be interruptions, but the author is really busy. All in all, this novel amazed me. I hope the author will make greater progress in the future. Also, please, please don't stop updating. I hope the author will start a new novel/fanfic after finishing this book. (I really don't understand why there are so few viewers?) The author is awesome. Great author! [Laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's really novel and stands out. It's different from other HP fans. I really love the character of the heroine, and the one added before each chapter is so interesting. I am very much looking forward to the development in the future. I hope the author will be more diligent in updating it [Adoration]

Sharp! The character of the heroine makes people like it very much. The removal of Harry [laughs] is well written and makes people look forward to it.

The structure is clear, the logic is complete, and the suspense design attracts readers' interest... So when will it be updated (ang(dog)

The article is good, the plot is good, and the logic is clear. If you like the character at the beginning of each chapter, it feels very immersive. The protagonist's character is also very likeable. I hope it won't be. I hope the author can update it more. Cheers! (´∀｀)♡

I feel like this article has a faint smell of death and a strong smell of knives.

Looking forward to future plots.

The author has great writing style and good ideas

Super beautiful!! Every word is suffocating, I hope you can be happy every day!

The only novel with two heroines that I can read and look forward to updating, it satisfies my tricky appetite. God knows how happy I am when I read this book. I love the author so much ~ Mmm ^3＾

This is the first time I strongly hope that the author will write a first-person novel every day! It's really beautiful! The author will update a lot! Woohoo! Don't make me kneel down and beg you!

The teacher wrote very well

Come on, author, your writing is very beautiful.

Hahahaha, author, when was your last update?

This heroine is so cool and her personality is to my liking🥳 Looking forward to updates 🥺

It looks good, but why isn't it updated? Hope it will be updated a lot!

It's really beautiful! No loss in investment

Very nice, I like it very much.

So pretty

I like this protagonist and hope not to be (*¯¯*)

Author, you finally updated! I've been waiting for you for a long time, thinking you wouldn't write anymore.

A very different HP novel, both artistic and crazy

It's pretty, but there are too few of it😢Has the update been discontinued? [Crying]

It's so beautiful. Please update it. [Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry]

Super beautiful, I like the way of expression very much [get it]

Author, your writing is really beautiful, keep it up [sending my heart][sending my heart]