What do you think of “Ji Yun, Teyvat's most mysterious alchemist merchant”?
Albedo: “Although we're pursuing different paths, his ingenious ideas often inspire me.”
Keqing: “Ji Yun? Who's that? I don't know him. What statue of the Lord of Geo? I have no idea what you're talking about.”
Ningguang: “He's an ideal business partner.”
Klee: “Brother Ji Yun is a good person. Look, big sis, he even upgraded Klee's Jumpy Dumpty into a Jumpy Cluster Dumpty. Here it is!”
Charlotte stared stiffly through her Kamera at little Klee, who held up the Jumpy Cluster Dumpty with both hands. Cracks gradually spread across it, and pure white light began seeping from the splits. She couldn't help thinking of the long-circulating tale of the “Little Girl in Red” in Mondstadt.
Roused by the ceaseless explosions, the people of Mondstadt stared blankly through their windows at the countless little suns in the sky. Their dazzling light illuminated the entire city as bright as day. They gazed at the scorching brilliance, then lowered their heads and fell into thought…
I hope the author can see it. Although I gave it 5 stars, my expectation for the work is 4 stars, because I have read the first 20 chapters so far. The story and settings are very interesting, but the author has not entered Mondstadt in chapter 20. The settings added in it and some of the author's own opinions To explain, it will seem very complicated, and many explanations are unnecessary, which will make it difficult for me to read and a waste of time. I hope there will be fewer chapters in the future. Of course, I haven't read it since I was 20 years old [laughing], but the plot settings are very good, and I hope I can keep writing.
It is an outstanding Genshin Impact fan among Tomatoes. It is creative and thoughtful, and reasonably describes the relationship between Genshin Impact and Teyvat. However, it is mixed with some other things, making it seem impure. To me, it is like chili oil sprinkled in the bottom of a clear soup pot. Although readers' comments in the plot will affect reading thinking, although Tomato's is basically like this The main reason why I give four stars is my personal reasons When one worldview is different, things from other worldviews are mixed in apologize
Very good, come on
Your novel is not suitable for the platform Tomato. It is more suitable for some simple and fast-paced works. The writing is pretty good, but if you want to change to some big platforms, such as a certain point, you still need to keep working hard.
Not bad, good potential [OK]
I prefer this kind of novel with theories and reasoning, compared to other novels that only have protagonists, and their strength does not consider the consequences. If you prefer reading with these theories, I still highly recommend reading it. If you don't like it, it's a different matter.
The author's novel is well written. This is a practical evaluation. First, it is close to reality. Whether it is the comparison between the background of the game and reality, or the behavior of the protagonist, the author handles it well. Second, as a twelve-plus game, the author wrote eighteen plus. This does not mean yellow, but refers to psychological thinking. Readers who like this aspect can give it a try, while readers who want to relax can take a detour. This book is not very suitable for you. The dog's head saves one's life. This comment only represents my personal thoughts and is not intended to start a fight.
Reader: Gua! The author's moves are so powerful, we love you!
It looks good, and the quality is considered good among Tomato's Genshin Impact novels! At least among the Genshin Impact novels I have read, the quality is considered to be above average!
Author, is this book of infinite type. I saw from Chapter 33 that there is space and gravity technology, and I can conclude that the protagonist can develop civilization-level technology by himself. At the same time, the author puts a lot of pressure on the protagonist. You can think about it, if the protagonist has enough energy, can he realize the science and technology of the Necron in Warhammer?