What do you think of "Ji Yun, the most mysterious alchemist merchant in Teyvat"?
Abedo: "Although our directions are different, his fantastic ideas often inspire me."
Keqing: "Ji Yun? Who is that? I don't know it. What kind of emperor statue? I don't know what you are talking about."
Ning Guang: "He is an ideal business partner."
Keli: "Brother Ji Yun is a good person. Sister, you see, he also helped Keli improve the bouncing bomb into a bouncing cluster bomb, and that's it!"
With a stiff look on her face, Charlotte held the photo camera and watched as the bouncing cluster bomb held by Little Keli's hands gradually began to be filled with cracks, and white light began to escape from the cracks. She couldn't help but think of the long-standing rumor of the "little girl in red" in Mondstadt.
...
The people of Mondstadt, who were awakened by the continuous explosions, all looked at the countless little suns in the sky of Mondstadt through their windows with dull eyes. The dazzling light made the entire Mondstadt as bright as day. People looked at the blazing light with dull eyes and lowered their heads in deep thought...
Reader comments
I hope the author can see it. Although I gave it 5 stars, my expectation for the work is 4 stars, because I have read the first 20 chapters so far. The story and settings are very interesting, but the author has not entered Mondstadt in chapter 20. The settings added in it and some of the author's own opinions To explain, it will seem very complicated, and many explanations are unnecessary, which will make it difficult for me to read and a waste of time. I hope there will be fewer chapters in the future. Of course, I haven't read it since I was 20 years old [laughing], but the plot settings are very good, and I hope I can keep writing.
It is an outstanding Genshin Impact fan among Tomatoes. It is creative and thoughtful, and reasonably describes the relationship between Genshin Impact and Teyvat. However, it is mixed with some other things, making it seem impure. To me, it is like chili oil sprinkled in the bottom of a clear soup pot.
Although readers' comments in the plot will affect reading thinking, although Tomato's is basically like this
The main reason why I give four stars is my personal reasons
When one worldview is different, things from other worldviews are mixed in
apologize
Very good, come on
Your novel is not suitable for the platform Tomato. It is more suitable for some simple and fast-paced works. The writing is pretty good, but if you want to change to some big platforms, such as a certain point, you still need to keep working hard.
Not bad, good potential [OK]
Reader: Gua! The author's moves are so powerful, we love you!
I prefer this kind of novel with theories and reasoning, compared to other novels that only have protagonists, and their strength does not consider the consequences. If you prefer reading with these theories, I still highly recommend reading it. If you don't like it, it's a different matter.
It looks good, and the quality is considered good among Tomato's Genshin Impact novels! At least among the Genshin Impact novels I have read, the quality is considered to be above average!
The author's novel is well written. This is a practical evaluation.
First, it is close to reality. Whether it is the comparison between the background of the game and reality, or the behavior of the protagonist, the author handles it well.
Second, as a twelve-plus game, the author wrote eighteen plus. This does not mean yellow, but refers to psychological thinking. Readers who like this aspect can give it a try, while readers who want to relax can take a detour. This book is not very suitable for you.
The dog's head saves one's life. This comment only represents my personal thoughts and is not intended to start a fight.
Author, is this book of infinite type. I saw from Chapter 33 that there is space and gravity technology, and I can conclude that the protagonist can develop civilization-level technology by himself.
At the same time, the author puts a lot of pressure on the protagonist. You can think about it, if the protagonist has enough energy, can he realize the science and technology of the Necron in Warhammer?
Another person who likes to be sensible and detail-oriented. Next time I will focus on more understandable content. Otherwise, this book will easily become cold. Reading books is always fun for Tomato.
OK, did the protagonist still have any relatives before he traveled through time? Want to go back so much
It looks good and I like it, but the quantity is relatively small.
The setting is reasonable, so why doesn't the protagonist possess some training techniques?
What did you write? Under review!
There is nothing unreasonable at the moment and there is great potential [Thinking]
Come on
Eye-catching
Very good and objective
Don't rush to finish it, just in case you feel inspired to continue. This book really has potential.
Super pretty
Give me a good review first, otherwise the book will be gone if you keep it.
It's good to watch, but according to the plot development, there should be no heroine, but a little emotional drama has been added. It depends on how the author writes it later.
The characters' emotions are described delicately and the logic is reasonable.
It's good to watch. I love watching it. Except for the main character who always has a persecutory delusion, it's pretty good.
It is a top-notch book, and I hope the author will continue writing it. (๑و•̀Δ•́)و
I hope the author can see it. Although I gave it 5 stars, my expectation for the work is 4 stars, because I have read the first 20 chapters so far. The story and settings are very interesting, but the author has not entered Mondstadt in chapter 20. The settings added in it and some of the author's own opinions To explain, it will seem very complicated, and many explanations are unnecessary, which will make it difficult for me to read and a waste of time. I hope there will be fewer chapters in the future. Of course, I haven't read it since I was 20 years old [laughing], but the plot settings are very good, and I hope I can keep writing.
It is an outstanding Genshin Impact fan among Tomatoes. It is creative and thoughtful, and reasonably describes the relationship between Genshin Impact and Teyvat. However, it is mixed with some other things, making it seem impure. To me, it is like chili oil sprinkled in the bottom of a clear soup pot. Although readers' comments in the plot will affect reading thinking, although Tomato's is basically like this The main reason why I give four stars is my personal reasons When one worldview is different, things from other worldviews are mixed in apologize
Very good, come on
Your novel is not suitable for the platform Tomato. It is more suitable for some simple and fast-paced works. The writing is pretty good, but if you want to change to some big platforms, such as a certain point, you still need to keep working hard.
Not bad, good potential [OK]
Reader: Gua! The author's moves are so powerful, we love you!
I prefer this kind of novel with theories and reasoning, compared to other novels that only have protagonists, and their strength does not consider the consequences. If you prefer reading with these theories, I still highly recommend reading it. If you don't like it, it's a different matter.
It looks good, and the quality is considered good among Tomato's Genshin Impact novels! At least among the Genshin Impact novels I have read, the quality is considered to be above average!
The author's novel is well written. This is a practical evaluation. First, it is close to reality. Whether it is the comparison between the background of the game and reality, or the behavior of the protagonist, the author handles it well. Second, as a twelve-plus game, the author wrote eighteen plus. This does not mean yellow, but refers to psychological thinking. Readers who like this aspect can give it a try, while readers who want to relax can take a detour. This book is not very suitable for you. The dog's head saves one's life. This comment only represents my personal thoughts and is not intended to start a fight.
Author, is this book of infinite type. I saw from Chapter 33 that there is space and gravity technology, and I can conclude that the protagonist can develop civilization-level technology by himself. At the same time, the author puts a lot of pressure on the protagonist. You can think about it, if the protagonist has enough energy, can he realize the science and technology of the Necron in Warhammer?
Another person who likes to be sensible and detail-oriented. Next time I will focus on more understandable content. Otherwise, this book will easily become cold. Reading books is always fun for Tomato.
OK, did the protagonist still have any relatives before he traveled through time? Want to go back so much
It looks good and I like it, but the quantity is relatively small.
The setting is reasonable, so why doesn't the protagonist possess some training techniques?
What did you write? Under review!
There is nothing unreasonable at the moment and there is great potential [Thinking] Come on
Eye-catching
Very good and objective Don't rush to finish it, just in case you feel inspired to continue. This book really has potential.
Super pretty
Give me a good review first, otherwise the book will be gone if you keep it.
It's good to watch, but according to the plot development, there should be no heroine, but a little emotional drama has been added. It depends on how the author writes it later.
The characters' emotions are described delicately and the logic is reasonable.
It's good to watch. I love watching it. Except for the main character who always has a persecutory delusion, it's pretty good.
It is a top-notch book, and I hope the author will continue writing it. (๑و•̀Δ•́)و