Critical Hit Unboxing! Crit Fishing! Critical Attack to Survive!

Let me ask you if you want to see no heroine, multiple heroines, or single heroine The author is very obedient, and please be merciful. As for the poisonous points reported by everyone, they have been refined here. The protagonist is taking advantage of her, and the emotional scenes have been removed. You are welcome to provide other opinions.

How to put it, there is no big problem at the moment. As for the female protagonist, it is recommended to have a single female protagonist (according to the current trend, it can be written, after all, the talents and abilities are there and I always feel that the final inevitable development of all survival stories is the aggregation of groups rather than one person). If the world view is not grand enough, I suggest suppressing the speed.

It's a very good novel. I'd like to give you some support first. Even my friend's good drawings have been blacklisted. This shows that the protagonist's character is very real and he takes advantage of it. Although it's not the kind of character that the public needs, but if we are put in that position, I think I will do the same.

When you update ten times a day, I will return this star to you! [Sinister smile]

The author is very serious, the story is okay, and the writing in Tomato is okay. Some suggestions for the author: 1. Follow your own outline. Temporary changes may slow down your pace. For example, if there is a heroine issue, if you think you can write an emotional drama, write a heroine. Regardless of whether there is a male or female protagonist, readers will like it (as long as it is well written). Part of the reason for not liking the heroine is because the emotional drama is not well written, so this depends on your ability to control the plot. 2. The character of the protagonist must be unified. Whether he is good or evil, he must be able to establish a unified character. 3. The plot can be promoted completely according to the main line, and the main line tasks are regarded as the dungeons to be downloaded, and the islands can be built after downloading the dungeons. I wish the author's writing will get better and better (I will continue to read it)

I think the writing is okay, pretty good, you can read it

It's a very interesting survival book. How did I discover it? The plot setting is good and the world view is quite big. I hope there will be a female protagonist, but it can be developed slowly.

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The story and setting are both good and worth watching. There's nothing toxic about it, but somehow it doesn't make people want to watch it more. It's like ordering takeout. It's not delicious, but it's not terrible. I was just hungry and ordered something I didn't dislike.

The fishing in the title of the book is just for the early stage. In the middle stage, it is basically adventures on various outer islands. The pollution species and sequences show their unique abilities. The number of critical hits seems to be a bit cool in the early stage. In the middle stage, critical hits will only occur when "life and death crises" or rare items are sent.

It's super good-looking and super refreshing. The author's IQ is online. The EQ is online. The plot is rich. It's not invincible or brainless. You won't feel bored. I hope the author will keep reading. I really like it. It's really the first novel I'm following. I used to read the end or read very long ones, and then abandon them halfway through, but I really like this one so much.

At the moment, I feel pretty good, okay, not to say it's good, but there aren't many poisonous points, and the heroine should try not to do it or decide it later.

I thought it was pretty good at first~ I personally think that whether a novel is good or not depends on its content, not whether it has a female protagonist. Although everyone has their own preferences, if the characters are really well portrayed, then I think it's really not that important whether there is an emotional line or not, just because someone said Jane is a poisonous person, so the author changed it and said that the protagonist is using her to take advantage of relationships. On the contrary, I think this is more poisonous. The protagonist is not a silent, calm and powerful lone ranger, nor is he a thoughtful and resourceful tyrant. He is just a normal person. Even from a God's perspective, he is a bit stupid and selfish? Who is a normal person who is not selfish? One district has even formed an alliance now. If you say "using relationships", it doesn't make sense in terms of character. To be honest, it's a good thing to listen to advice, but after you change it, it doesn't make sense anymore... Everyone's habits are different. I always read the content directly, and rarely even read the comments. I occasionally complain, make a few jokes, and drive like a little black guy. This book was persuaded to withdraw from the book, so I gave it a 5-star review. I also wish the author better and better writing, and I wish everyone happiness... The mountains are high and the road is far away. Goodbye in the world.

As a bookworm for five years, although the novel is a novice, it has a good grasp of the plot and rhythm. It is not poisonous and has many refreshing points. It is a fairy tale. Personally, I think it's good-looking, I love watching it, but I just can't get enough of it [please update] Beautiful! Love watching! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Anyway, overall it's okay. Although it's not quite to my liking, it's still worth a look. The most important thing is that the author listens to advice. Waiting for your next book Oh, let me add that my five-star review is mainly for the author. Just for storytelling, Samsung is a bit more.

I think the overall structure is okay, but many of the details are not optimized well, and some often conflict with each other and often miss a lot of things. The author should make a memo or something to write down all the things that are useless later in the early stage. Instead of writing them in the front and then disappearing later, the overall writing is quite good. Generally speaking, the more you write, the weirder it gets.

Okay, okay, I just like watching this kind of person surviving in the wilderness Nowadays, if you don't write weird novels, you can't write them, right?

Personally, I think it's good to have a single female protagonist. It would be weird if there was no female protagonist in the comment section. In the end, the protagonist is living with Friday? I just feel that in the early stage, it develops well alone, and then the two of them help each other to set the tone of the relationship, and finally it becomes a natural thing. Isn't it lonely on an isolated island without a heroine? Living with pets? Of course, if you can evolve into a beast mother, don't think I didn't say it... If you have multiple female protagonists, you will become a stud, so a single female protagonist is best.

It's quite good to read with more than 400 chapters. It's a good read, but it's not completely enjoyable. There are no poisonous points, so you can eat it with confidence. It's just that I discovered it too early and didn't see enough. The only problem is that it's a bit confusing to set up. Many things are gone after being written down. If a prop is not used for more than 2 days, it is basically forgotten.

The subject matter is not new, but it is very attentive. I will not say much about how attentive it is. Just look at the frequency of paragraph comments - dedicated, and it is not new, which does not mean that it has no characteristics. On the contrary, there are many innovations. In fact, it is not difficult to find as long as you are careful - the author really takes the revision opinions as opinions. Although it took me 6-8 hours to read it in one afternoon, I did not skip a chapter. My frequency is almost 3 minutes for a chapter, but I can still Noting these can only show that the author is really serious. I have always emphasized that the author is careful not to say that it is not good to cover up the content. I have always believed that whether a novel is good or not can only represent my personal opinion. My own feelings after reading it are the real ones. My evaluation is a slow-paced semi-casual novel. Although the author gives the protagonist a large task line, this is my review. A very thoughtful novel and author! [OK]

The author mainly asks for advice, has a good attitude, and gives 5-star praise.

Five stars for encouragement. By the way, I have finished reading the latest chapter. I would like to ask if this book has a single heroine?

It feels good. For those who think the protagonist is too selfish, I think it's normal. Entering a new world, everything is strange. The protagonist can't guarantee his own safety until now. Moreover, I think the character developed by this subject and environment can be preserved. Just keep a little bit of innocence. As for other people, they can do whatever they want (at least until they can protect themselves), and when the protagonist develops to a certain level, he has already guessed that "someone" is playing this "game" by raising gu. It would be a lie to say that he is not angry. The resulting paranoia and selfishness are understandable. And his care for people who have been with him for a long time in the same district, especially his fellow villager Uncle Wu, also proves that in this environment, he still retains a little bit of innocence. Overall it's okay, I hope the author is great and keep up the good work!

Yes, it can be renamed: Start with an island, and all equipment depends on fishing. I feel that more people will see it. Now I was persuaded to give up this name at the beginning.

Fishing Flow is a ceiling-length novel, a stress-relieving tool, super long and long-lasting, and full of thrills. However, the routines are old, the combat power is weak, and the characters are mediocre. It is suitable for mindless reading, but not for serious parties. Suitable for people: People who like island survival, fishing, explosive equipment, system critical attacks, slow farming + hegemony, those who pursue brainless decompression, and long reading ✅ Advantages Set precise points to enjoy: everyone travels across the island, fishing = all resources; the protagonist monopolizes the epic evolution critical hit talent, fishing, opening treasure chests, and forging are all critical hits, explosive materials explode the level, and the feedback is extremely fast. The rhythm is smooth and the game is super long: Survive on a deserted island in the early stage → build an island and farm → explore the sea → conquer ten thousand islands → fight against the evil gods. There are 1,300+ chapters and no delays in upgrading; there are constant natural disasters, monsters and sea crises, and the whole process is high-energy and not boring. "Fishing Guy" has a strong sense of atmosphere: the sense of anticipation and randomness of fishing are made into the core gameplay, and every throw is like opening a blind box; the chat channel is full of life, resource transactions, and human games, and the group portraits are vivid and full of immersion. The world view becomes bigger and bigger as it is written: from desert island to ten thousand islands, from the ocean to the universe, from mortals to the main gods, the later stage is full; Cthulhu, the evil god of wind, natural disasters, and the supreme sequence, killing monsters and upgrading + revealing the secrets of the world go hand in hand. Who.

It's pretty good. It looks okay, but I don't know what the quality is like later.

From reading the book, you can tell that the author's writing style is okay, but not that good, but this type of book is indeed attractive, and the most important thing is that the author listens to his advice. Then I saw that everyone was also arguing in the comment area about whether or not there should be a female protagonist. It depends on the kind of protagonist the author plans to write. If it is the kind of protagonist who wants to save the world, I think it can have a female protagonist. But if it is a self-interested protagonist like the Great Love Immortal, it can be without a female protagonist. I haven't watched much of it, and I personally feel that the protagonist is self-interested. And everyone, please don't criticize the author. After all, we are novices. If it were you or me, I might not be able to persevere. Personally, I recommend a novel without a female protagonist, because the subject of love lines is really difficult to write. From the author's description of Jane, it can be seen that it is a bit stiff. Of course, it is purely personal preference and suggestion (don't criticize if you don't like it)

I have read Chapter 122 so far. To be honest, I enjoyed reading it. I ignored some minor points. It is really good. At least it is a qualified novel. As for the problem of the heroine that many people talk about, at least I see that now, the protagonist and her are doing some normal exchanges of interests. They exchange food for stalactites every day, crit boxes for improvement blueprints, etc. I don't know why some people think that the protagonist is a dog licker. At least everything the protagonist does now is normal, and everything he does is profitable or does not affect himself.

I barely give it four stars. I'd say it's good-looking, but I can't talk about it. I'd say it's not good-looking, but it's actually okay. It's a bit tasteless, and it's a pity to abandon it. [Thinking] I've read Chapter 300, and one thing I really want to complain about is that the parents are still alive. I don't know how much help the parents gave to the protagonist later, but my feeling now is The protagonist's parents are a little embarrassed in this setting, but I just can't understand how they survived. After all, fellow countryman Lao Wu still has some skills and knows some wild techniques. The other Blue Star people who survived were either very ruthless, talented, or desperate in the subsequent disasters. Based on the list, if we look at the survival rates of the first and second disasters, how could the protagonist's parents survive until the protagonist finds them [thinking] and they are not in the same area. The middle and large districts of the community are not there. I don't know if the southeast district is there. If not, then I will be more I can't understand it [Thinking] Anyway, in my opinion, it's not a good story. Overall, it's very bland. If you don't like it, you don't abuse the protagonist. It's easy to push it aside or ignore it. Sometimes I feel that it doesn't matter if there is a protagonist or not, or I don't even feel that Mu Shen is the protagonist [Thinking]

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