Collapse of Iron**********

As far as it goes, it's good to watch. There's nothing wrong with the plot of Firefly, and the foreshadowing of Shura Field is also good. I'm looking forward to what kind of mischief Hanabi will do in the future, but there are some problems with Hanabi. Hanabi's emotional line has no foreshadowing, so what she does so far makes me feel bad. If there is some emotional development, she will ruin the reputation of the protagonist. If the protagonist tolerates her, it will give me the feeling of "your uncle pampers her". Otherwise, it will make me feel disgusted with her. I personally like Hanabi, and I also know that she is a bitch or a character who puts her fun first, but the foreshadowing of the emotional line and the absence of it will bring different senses to the readers.

I want to see Liuying soon

It's pretty good-looking, but it always feels like it's missing a little bit of flavor.

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The protagonist is the Messenger of Joy, but currently I don't feel that there is any joy at all, but there are fireworks, so I give it four stars. To show encouragement

A cute head + a cute face + a sexy body = Wang Zha ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ Please pay a likeㅤ[laughing and crying] Copying parents' Yangshou + 100% head + cute face + sexy body = Wang Zha ㅤㅤㅤ ㅤㅤㅤ

It's nice to watch and more to come, but are you serious about this? [Shocked]

How come no one reads such a good book?

It feels very good-looking and interesting, but the author is too slow to update.

The character plot is well written, but it cannot be brought into the perspective of the protagonist at all, otherwise it will be uncomfortable and panic-stricken. Overall, it has great potential. Come on.

Apart from not being very happy, I think everything is pretty good.

The writing is quite good, but why is it so low?

It's a good read. I recommend 100,000 words a day.

Five-star reviews cannot be said to be good You are not an author. You write so well, but you are only 5:3

Very nice novel

Needless to say, it's still pretty good-looking.

It looks good, but why did you enter the dark room?

Good news: The book has finally been found [laughs] Bad news: Updates are discontinued [almost crying] [crying]

Beautiful, author Sang

When reading Chapter 72, you should play a song to save a heart from sadness. You will thank me [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

Needless to say, nice looking

Very sweet, indescribably sweet

No, it's wrong. It has that flavor.

It's good to read. The author will write more [smile][smile]

It looks good, I want to see rivers of blood [laughing evilly] At least I think it looks good. Those who ask how much one costs, be careful I will tear your mouth off. [Smile]

It's great, the author continues to be awesome

Beautiful ((*^∀^))😍 Come on! ! Work hard (#^.^#)💪🏻Update

Very interesting, good luck to the author

Very interesting plot and good plot

It's okay, it's really good