It's Obviously a Fireball Spell, so Why Does It Turn into a Meteorite?

Worldview construction It belongs to a more earthly world, with no intrigues, sound laws, and cameras everywhere. Basically, no particularly serious incidents will happen in the city. Plot aspect It's rather relaxed, pseudo-invincible, and suitable for daily viewing. The writing is also okay. As for the subject matter, I won't go into details here, as there is an introduction.

It's a very classic male channel genius flow. I like the setting very much, but as expected, most of the protagonists are surrounded by women, and they are quite similar (basically they are cold-faced, silent and strong). The other men who appear are basically marginalized. Of course, they are all common problems among male channels. Keep up the good work.

It's difficult. It took me 90 chapters to write a dungeon (the dungeon is too long). The important thing is that the protagonist's strength hasn't changed much after the dungeon came out (it's about realm, except for the new magic he learned). The characterization is okay. I recommend skipping through chapters 71 to 167 (one dungeon).

I'm looking forward to the author's synopsis. I hope the plot of the synopsis can be lighter. I was stabbed in the second game and raped in the second game. I don't want to read heavy online articles anymore.

Should it be a Western Fantasy Academy novel? Then it has a bit of a gleeful setting, the world view is quite good, and there are many jokes about the author, which made me laugh while watching it. It can be said that the second disease of Nisi Huanfeng is very realistic. Some of the descriptions are particularly graphic. It feels like watching anime hahaha

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

Except for having an affair when it is not necessary, it is actually very good. The setting and plot are both worth watching. In fact, it has a strength of 9 points or more

How to put it this way, the overall sense of immersion is not strong, and the story has a clear sense of fragmentation. There is no explanation when switching from one scene to another, which makes it very confusing. However, it is still a very good book worth reading. The author will do a lot to update and don't let this book end.

It's pretty cool, at least the first volume is like that. When I read it at first, I didn't feel it. When the first volume ended, I subconsciously felt like I had finished reading Harry Potter (after entering the Lost City in the second half of the first volume). The same low-level magician defeated the world's top, the same special protagonist, and the same sealed BOSS. So much so that when I wrote a review after reading it, I still felt like I still had something to say. I think the cheating bracelet was destroyed. I think it was a good deal. The beginning and end of the climax sequence are well explained, and it won't suddenly turn into a cool story and affect the viewing experience. But I have an idea: As a city in the sky, the previous energy problem of the Vanishing City was provided by the sealed Rihui. Can the Vanishing City restored by time magic still have so much energy to maintain? Abis stayed in the Vanishing City. With the divine core she obtained in the first volume and her teacher's research, could she design a plot for the first volume? Like Harry Potter Quidditch

What I can say about this book is that it gave me a very new feeling, the escape of the protagonist, the direction of the plot, well, I actually don't know how to describe it, but this book is actually quite good-looking. As for the shortcomings, I personally feel that the development of the plot and the improvement of the strength are a bit too fast, and there is no knife. Maybe I am used to being knifed. I am also an omnivore, and I can read it even if I haven't read the original work, but my taste is very picky, and I prefer to add it to the bookshelf after reading it. If I can add it to the bookshelf, it is considered well-written, and this is my first review, and it is written very seriously. In short, this book is okay, I give it five stars.

Although it is still being serialized, it is generally a relatively good-looking Western fantasy and magic novel. Pure Western fantasy novels can be said to be much rarer than other genres, but I personally like this type of novels. I'm not sure why it's not rated 8, but I can talk about what I like about it. 1. The design of combat power is relatively reasonable. Gold fingers basically have reasonable explanations and sources, and the improvement is not an unfounded improvement. The main point of the protagonist is basically that he was born into the Holy Land due to his spiritual power (there are also foreshadowings for the reason), and other strong points are based on this. It is not a brainless start, and it is relatively well received. 2. Most of the supporting characters are also very clever. They are not just tools to highlight the protagonist. Each character also has his own thoughts and hobbies. Even Lang Ning, who is so middle-aged, has his own dignity and pride. I like this kind of description where each character has his own soul. 3. The baggage set up in the article is also very interesting, which makes the overall atmosphere of the article very light, and the sensational points are also very touching, and the rhythm is relatively good. 4. Although it is time travel, An Xia is very humane. He will feel sad and sympathetic for strangers, unlike some books that do not treat locals as human beings. Protagonists who are righteous, smart, powerful and have potential never go out of style. The shortcoming is that it is unfinished. The main reason is that it was very interesting at the beginning, and it was very flexible to solve the exam problems, and then I had to wait for the update. I hope my wife will update 30 times a day.

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The previous article is very good, but the middle academic conference article is uncomfortable. I made a plate of dumplings for a bottle of vinegar [awkward laugh] I really don't understand. Is the sanctuary here filled with dead people? Has a holy realm been passed away? No one noticed the problem? It's been a few days and the sanctuary hasn't come back yet. Is the dean a dead person? How many days in advance have you reported? People are almost dead and haven't arrived yet. How can a master and a bunch of little Karami who haven't even reached level 3 go to deal with a god? I mentioned earlier that the magic net was hung more and more, but the problem has not been discovered after so long? Don't tell me that if there are many people here, they can be resurrected, so experience, I want to say that everyone has to experience it. Without Nancy, the protagonist group would have died countless times [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]. All the mages in the world are like dead people. [Awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh], the same is true for the Sanctuary. I said I would be back in two days, but it turned out that I haven't seen the shadow for several days.

To be honest, I think the writing style is quite good, but what attracted me to it was the funny and relaxed style at the beginning. I felt that later on when the main plot entered and the big events came, I felt it was a bit boring because I had seen too many of them before.

It's quite funny and interesting, but not exciting enough. It feels like it's a bit forced to lower the protagonist's combat power. He always thinks of learning magic when something happens or is about to happen. He has too few skills, and it feels a bit messy, but overall it's a good-looking, happy book.

Everything is good, the story style is outstanding, and the flaws are not hidden. The only flaw after reading the second volume is that Nancy did not legitimately become the heroine [crying] A bond of hundreds of thousands of years [crying] Obviously the relationship line is perfect, can we just get married on the spot [crying] Regarding this point, the character design actually has a great influence. I hope that I can send out sweets on a daily basis in the future, and I will be very satisfied.

This is my first time to review a book. I can only say that this book is very attractive and makes people keep reading. It satisfies all the ideas of a bookworm. The characters are very delicate and the plot is very smooth.

The first copy is too long and I can't tell who the heroine is. I hope it's Melva. The heroine has been changed, and Melva's role has become less and less. The cover of the book should be Melva, but the first copy is suddenly changed to Nancy. The copy is too long and slows down the pace. The combat power has improved dramatically since entering Nancy's magic. The combat power is a bit unbalanced. The first 60 chapters are about Melva, with small interactions and ambiguities, and campus life is relaxed and happy. When I was writing the first copy, I suddenly wrote Nancy's emotional line. I thought it was going to be about Melva being jealous, and there was a scene with Melva's aunt. I thought it would promote the relationship between the younger generations, but in the end it was almost all Nancy. I didn't accept the heroine change, and the rest was a bit bland.

Nice. But every time something unexpected happens. It is better to write about the protagonist team working together to solve the problem. I think one short review put it well. There is a feeling of being omnipotent but powerless. But you can feel that the author's outline is very clear. Looking further, we have already seen the sixth Si Chen.

This book is super beautiful and a treasure book. If you like western fantasy youth, invincible, ignorant campus adventures, funny and relaxing books, come and read it. This rating is entirely due to the pause in updating for a period of time. Now it has resumed updating. It is a rare good book.

After reading the first two chapters, it's good. The growth record is like this. The character creation is very good. Nancy is impressive and the logic is normal. It is very good. The author will also reflect on it. There is no big problem in sticking to this book. Come on.

This book is great for newbies who are new to the world of online literature, but for an old bookworm like me, it's like eating rice every day. It's good, but it doesn't make me feel that indescribable sense of amazement.

Regarding the difficulty of remembering names unique to Western fantasy, you can try to give the characters a unique title or nickname, which is 2-3 words, so that readers can have a unique memory. For example, Melva can be called Miss by classmates, and Ronning can be called Prince. This can solve the problem of difficult to remember names. At the same time, because of the uniqueness of the nickname, it can also deepen the shaping of the character.

It was very tiring to read, and I feel that a lot of paragraphs need to be polished. In this light-hearted and refreshing article, I have to spend a lot of brain energy to process the information obtained from the text. It is probably more tiring than when I played Naruto and Kizaru. [Research] I have read more than a hundred chapters so far, and the author seems to have temporarily stopped updating... I hope it will be better in the future, and I will give you 4⭐ encouragement points

In fact, the writing is good, but the most important world view of the different world was not completely established in the first volume. The system was unclear, so the second volume was a bit confusing. The advantage is that you can see that the author is really thinking about fleshing out the characters. The supporting characters also have their own subplots, which really makes the characters come alive. However, if the update efficiency is not enough, it will make people feel sluggish, so it has polarized reviews. Overall, a great book with potential

The writing is very good, the plot setting, story line advancement and character creation are all top-notch, but the disadvantage is that every time the plot describes the battle scene, the writing will be very complicated. I want to write every battle well, but those detailed descriptions will be very tiring and uncomfortable to watch. The other parts are very well written, but the battle plot will not be very comfortable. Come on, the author, I hope the results will get better and better. In addition, the development of magic is also very slow. Others have many moves, and the protagonist always only has a few tricks, which seems to affect the perception. Although the author has fewer skills, it is easier to write, but it is still uncomfortable to look at if there are too few. After all, there should be quite a lot of simple magic, and always insisting on those inherent small skills is quite a sacrifice.

It looks good. Well, except for the main character's thoughts in the character description, which are a bit... Naive?, Everything else is okay. It's just that when you read it, you will find it a bit poisonous, but after you get over it, you will find that it is actually okay. Overall, the pace is quite good and it is not boring to read.

Funny, magical, western fantasy, emotional, good-looking (｡･ω･｡)

Nice! ! Very nice! ! It's also a bit funny goose goose goose

It is considered a high-end novel in Tomato, and similar novels published elsewhere are not bad or even medium-to-high-end. The logic is clear and the plot is clear. The beginning is also good. It is recommended to update as soon as possible.