Seventy: the Whole Family Is Unlucky, Eating the Melons and Tearing up the Script

It looks good, especially the character design of grandma is very well done. He respects his daughter-in-law, knows that it is his fault that his son is not at home, and has a stand for treating everyone equally without double standards. The whole book stood up because of my grandma, which made me feel that the atmosphere in the whole family is very good.

The writing is very good, and it ranks among the best I have ever read in Tomato. It writes about trivial matters about family life, but it is not boring at all, but very interesting. The shortcoming is that the author forgets the previous settings as he writes. In the first few chapters, villagers with wives and children suddenly become singles, which is extremely The author of "The Neighbor's Twin Daughters" has completely forgotten about these two people. There is also a problem with the character of the heroine's mother, but I don't think this is a big problem. What is more intolerable is that a lot of gold was found in their bookcase, and the heroine's mother actually chose to hand it over. This makes me heart-scratching and uncomfortable. Can the author sort it out? I have posted it in such a mess that no one can understand it. It is obvious that so many people have given feedback and it has not been corrected. What kind of trouble is this?

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. It's so good looking. There is no meal replacement on the whole internet. It has some minor shortcomings but you can watch it! Oh my god, the protagonist has become her mother [vomit]

It looks good. Anyway, it looks good so far. It makes people want to continue watching.

In fact, I thought it was pretty good-looking, but the mother of the child had such a naughty personality and was soft-spoken. She was bullied, but the other person would forgive her after apologizing. I felt aggrieved and couldn't stand it. The author actually wrote it well, and I still recommend it.

It's a cross-over, the plot is a cross-over

It's too short. I've finished it. So far, it's quite interesting. The changes in the family after hearing the heroine's voice are quite good. It's a bit of a refreshing novel, but it's too short. Please read more.

It can be read on, but there are quite a few fluffy little problems that make me want to give up on the article, but I don't feel like it. I want to give up on the article after a few chapters, and then suddenly I feel that there is a plot that I want to watch, and I can't get up to it. The most important thing is, are there too many people who are reborn, like cockroaches [eating melon] In the chapters I've read so far, there are only two people reborn, but those two people have too many plots. It feels like just two people acting in several scenes. The first one to be reborn was okay, she wasn't likable at first, it felt like she couldn't go anywhere, and the plot dragged on for many chapters, but she finally woke up, and now she feels like there's something wrong with her, but it's developing in a good direction. But I really don't understand the second rebirth. Although she was reborn from a timeline where the heroine has changed the future, I still don't understand why she has to be a vicious rebirth? In order to write about the prowess and future achievements of the heroine's family from her envy, jealousy and hatred? [Smile]

Looks good, tied in one go. When I read the heartfelt articles before, I felt that this golden finger was too powerful and always relied on the voice of the heart to predict the future. But this article is different. The whole story is not centered around the voice of the heart. As a little baby, the heroine's voice only promotes the development of certain plots, and the other characters are also very exciting. Although several reborns appeared, and they all came after men, which was a bit disgusting. But fortunately, there is the character of Da Niu. Although she is also reborn, she understands that she has to rely on herself. So overall, it is still a very good book. I hope it will not become cliché in the future.

It's so beautiful, I really like the cute little Miaomiao

The writing is pretty good and the logic is okay.

The characters are full-bodied and the dialogues are interesting, but common sense needs to be strengthened. As a native of Hainan, I would like to explain a few points. Coconut has no so-called maturity period. It is a plant that can bear fruit all year round. Moreover, green coconut has more coconut water and the coconut meat is smoother and more tender, making it suitable for all ages. Old coconut meat is harder and needs to be eaten by people with good teeth, and there will be less coconut water. However, coconut meat from different periods has different flavors. Coconut chicken hotpot has only become popular in the past ten years. At least I haven't eaten it when I was a child, but I have eaten coconut meat hotpot, which is creamy and fragrant. The correct way for Hainanese to open green mango, guava and other fruits is with chili salt, not chili noodles. Chili noodles were improved after more people from other provinces.

It's very interesting. An old lady in a family is like a treasure. The old lady of the protagonist's family is really very sensible and has successfully educated the children at home. She can also correctly view the warnings of the female patron Gu Miao and give warnings at critical moments to prevent the family from relying too much. The old lady is really the soul of the novel! ! ! Updates are slow, please try to update more! ! ! ! ! ! The plot is good, it makes people want to watch it, I like it! !

There are many excellent products, so be careful when entering the pit.

Overall, it's good. Although it may have flaws, it's normal, and the plot is smooth (although I felt a little watery when watching it). It's still good to watch. I think it's good. If you watch it without thinking, it won't feel weird (controversy about the baby in this article). It's still worth watching [Thinking] I think you can watch it

Super good (✪▽✪) The content is rich and exciting. The heroine's parents also have upright views, and the heroine's grandparents will not harm others because of personal interests. A very exciting plot, I look forward to the author's follow-up updates. Come on, I love it^ω^

It's quite nice... But why are you still wandering around the village... I want to be a novice village...

I strongly support authors to write the articles they want to write, and not to change their original roles at will because of other people's comments. Many roles have positives and negatives, but this can enrich a person's image, and the article is also very well written. Although there are many shortcomings, overall it is really good.

It's pretty good, but why is it so intermittent between the two chapters that I always feel like there's something missing?

Hiss, there is a rebirth in this rebirth. There are quite a lot of rebirths. Is there something wrong with this world? [Exploration]

There is always a strong sense of déjà vu, especially in the previous scene where the heroine, Long Fei's stillborn brother, travels through time and is read, and also in the subsequent plot, I always feel that I have read books with this routine before.

It should be a long book, right? After all, the little heroine is still a baby now

No Space No Golden Finger has a plot with distinctive characters, vivid stories, and delicate group portraits. It is a good story about military marriage in the era. Recommended

Many plots in the book are fascinating, as if watching a TV series. I hope the author will add more as soon as possible!

It's quite interesting, and sometimes the plot is quite funny. I suspect that Huang Cuixi is the real heroine! I haven't seen the part with the army yet. There are too many people reborn, which makes it a bit boring. Even if the plot requires more time-traveling, it would be better to travel through the past and present.

Why are people who have been reborn and time traveled and want to change their destiny? Is it that easy?

So far, they all look pretty good and worth recommending.

It's different from what I've seen before. The characters here are pretty well created, but the plot is really a bit slow. The heroine is still a few months old baby, so her role is really quite small.

It's super pretty, cheers up＾0＾~

School is about to start and I can't bear to part with this book [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]