A gentle uke raising a child alone VS a hot-tempered seme forced to raise his younger brother!
A young dessert-shop owner and a straight college student. One has adopted a well-behaved child; the other has a noisy elementary-school-age younger brother.
The story of two broken families finding salvation in each other.
Xiao Yao (uke): Student Ren Yue, you can clock out now.
Ren Yue (seme): Then I’ll clock out first and wait for you in your room~
Xiao Yao (uke): Ha, you don’t even know my door code!
Ren Yue (seme): But your well-behaved little one will come let me in~
The teacher wrote very well. From my point of view, I think this article has more potential [face covering] The emotions are also very delicate. I found a small detail in it. For example, there are a total of 6 people in the dormitory. Now only the dormitory leader and the sixth child are named, but the others are all named. Those with names have some relationship with the emotional disputes between the protagonist, the protagonist, and the protagonist. There are only a few supporting characters with names in the whole article, and those few are related to the protagonist Data, the protagonist Gong and Zhou Wenhan, especially the cold white-skinned boss. Seeing this, actually I still don't like Fang Le very much. In the early stage, when Fang Le hadn't confessed his love, I felt that Fang Le was like a cute, sweet, quiet little boy, but after he confessed, I found that he was not that kind of person. His feeling of being a little crazy is almost like crazy criticism. He's very good at hiding, especially when he said that if it weren't for him, he wouldn't have done anything to them. I felt like this person was a little bit annoying. Apart from the main character, the one I really liked was the aunt. I feel like my aunt is the kind of sharp-tongued person who seems to be soft-hearted towards the protagonist's father and younger brother. I don't know how to put it, I can't find an adjective, but that's the feeling. But I didn't realize until later that my aunt was a sharp-tongued person, and she was the only one who was good at fighting when she wasn't in trouble. She would come to her husband's house from time to time to help him. She also takes care of Gong's younger brother and cleans up his house. I really like her. Then there are the four ladies who often come to sit in the milk tea shop. The teacher wrote them very well and I like them very much. It feels very special. Well, how should I put it, it feels like he plays an atmosphere group in it [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]
Mutual redemption is not overly idealistic. The key is the author's great writing style. There are many paragraphs and plots in it that are well written and I like it. Each character has a full personality and the plot is not stretched. It is simply a treasure [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] Highly recommended! ! ! Highly recommended! ! ! Highly recommended! ! ! [Shy][shy][shy]
The writing style is very good, and many descriptions surprised me.
From the book, I saw the reality of society, the bad nature of people, and the small happiness among many dissatisfactions.
The people in the book are lifelike and vividly presented before my eyes. The gentle Xiao Yao, the interesting Ren Yue, the sensible Xing Xing, the kind but ignorant aunt, the enlightened and kind aunts, the pitiful and hateful Ren Guangyao who finally reformed... Are unforgettable.
Sometimes even a small supporting role is more memorable than the main character.
It's really nice, but it might feel a little blurry when you look at it.
I would like to make a beautiful wish here, and ask the beautiful, kind, lovely and energetic author to publish a book about Little Fatty.
I didn't skip a single page, I read it page by page, I saw every word [cool][cool][cool][cool][cool][cool]
Like hot milk tea in winter, warm [love][love][love]
The author greatly cheers, cheers, cheers [sends heart] [sends heart]
So touching, so beautiful! [Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post]
The writing is very good and full of life. The story seems to take place in real life. There are laughter and tears. Overall, it is sweet and very beautiful!
At first, I felt that the situation at home was very bad, but slowly, it is getting better! The story is not bad!
It looks good, it feels like daily life, there are not so many messy plots, it is very warm, I like it~(￣▽￣~)~
The teacher wrote very well. From my point of view, I think this article has more potential [face covering] The emotions are also very delicate. I found a small detail in it. For example, there are a total of 6 people in the dormitory. Now only the dormitory leader and the sixth child are named, but the others are all named. Those with names have some relationship with the emotional disputes between the protagonist, the protagonist, and the protagonist. There are only a few supporting characters with names in the whole article, and those few are related to the protagonist Data, the protagonist Gong and Zhou Wenhan, especially the cold white-skinned boss. Seeing this, actually I still don't like Fang Le very much. In the early stage, when Fang Le hadn't confessed his love, I felt that Fang Le was like a cute, sweet, quiet little boy, but after he confessed, I found that he was not that kind of person. His feeling of being a little crazy is almost like crazy criticism. He's very good at hiding, especially when he said that if it weren't for him, he wouldn't have done anything to them. I felt like this person was a little bit annoying. Apart from the main character, the one I really liked was the aunt. I feel like my aunt is the kind of sharp-tongued person who seems to be soft-hearted towards the protagonist's father and younger brother. I don't know how to put it, I can't find an adjective, but that's the feeling. But I didn't realize until later that my aunt was a sharp-tongued person, and she was the only one who was good at fighting when she wasn't in trouble. She would come to her husband's house from time to time to help him. She also takes care of Gong's younger brother and cleans up his house. I really like her. Then there are the four ladies who often come to sit in the milk tea shop. The teacher wrote them very well and I like them very much. It feels very special. Well, how should I put it, it feels like he plays an atmosphere group in it [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]
Mutual redemption is not overly idealistic. The key is the author's great writing style. There are many paragraphs and plots in it that are well written and I like it. Each character has a full personality and the plot is not stretched. It is simply a treasure [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] Highly recommended! ! ! Highly recommended! ! ! Highly recommended! ! ! [Shy][shy][shy]
The writing style is very good, and many descriptions surprised me. From the book, I saw the reality of society, the bad nature of people, and the small happiness among many dissatisfactions. The people in the book are lifelike and vividly presented before my eyes. The gentle Xiao Yao, the interesting Ren Yue, the sensible Xing Xing, the kind but ignorant aunt, the enlightened and kind aunts, the pitiful and hateful Ren Guangyao who finally reformed... Are unforgettable. Sometimes even a small supporting role is more memorable than the main character.
It's really nice, but it might feel a little blurry when you look at it. I would like to make a beautiful wish here, and ask the beautiful, kind, lovely and energetic author to publish a book about Little Fatty. I didn't skip a single page, I read it page by page, I saw every word [cool][cool][cool][cool][cool][cool]
Like hot milk tea in winter, warm [love][love][love] The author greatly cheers, cheers, cheers [sends heart] [sends heart]
So touching, so beautiful! [Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post]
The writing is very good and full of life. The story seems to take place in real life. There are laughter and tears. Overall, it is sweet and very beautiful!
At first, I felt that the situation at home was very bad, but slowly, it is getting better! The story is not bad!
It looks good, it feels like daily life, there are not so many messy plots, it is very warm, I like it~(￣▽￣~)~
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