Across Two Worlds, I Cultivate Immortality with Steady Resolve

The writing is good, unlike other novels where you just go find a woman if you have the ability. Brother, if you have this time, be careful and develop yourself.

It's okay, except for the self-blame part, which is a bit annoying, but otherwise it's okay. What a fucking slap in the face. I said it was okay at the beginning, but then came a "genius" price, cost = sales, and ordinary alchemists lose money when they don't make money? [Anger]

I have just finished reading Chapter 40. The protagonist behaves steadily. I hope the author will keep it up and give him a five-star review to encourage him.

There are some minor flaws, but the flaws are not concealed. The setting is very grand. As a bookworm of 30+ years, I can keep up with the latest chapters. It is a rare invincible immortal cultivation novel, but it is a bit watery, which is a common problem in Internet literature [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Sun Wukong waited for Tang Seng for 500 years, Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng waited for Xie Lian for 800 years, Feng Qingxue Baili Tusu has waited for 900 years, Nightshade has waited for Long Yang for 1,000 years, Bai Niangzi has waited for Xu Xian for 1,000 years, Yi Xiaochuan has waited for Yu Shu for 2,000 years, Su Jiuer has waited for Feng Xi for 3,000 years, Xiyao has waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, and Zixuan has waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives. And I have been waiting for your update. On a certain day, a certain day, a certain month, a woman was lying weakly on the bed, her face could not hide the paleness. There was a slight smile on his lips. Her outstretched hand trembled slightly, and tears shone in the corners of her eyes. The hoarse voice murmured: "Don't forget to update

I went to the world of immortality for about a year, and it has only been a month or two since I came back to Lyran. But I stayed on Lyran for a year, and it has only been a month since I returned to the world of immortality. What's the situation? Moreover, the aura of the world of immortality is richer, but according to your target combat power, the upgrade of Lyran is too fast. It feels like it has surpassed that of the world of immortality.

I have read the latest chapter. There are no big flaws. It's just that there are fewer chapters about Lyraen and the space is not used very well. The other aspects are quite good. The protagonist's personality and methods of doing things. Also, this book has no female protagonist so far. Haha, I was still looking forward to it being a harem [thoughts]

Good reviews, support for not having a female protagonist, pursuing the road wholeheartedly, huge content world, not impatient and slowly upgrading, golden finger is fun, including immortality, blessing and understanding, looking forward to the use of the next miracle point, not aggrieved, not impatient, the protagonist's character is natural. I really feel that the protagonist is free and easy and not bound to himself. Whether it is 3,000 chapters or 5,000 chapters, I will keep chasing it. I hope the author can write a long novel and continue to maintain the rhythm. I wholeheartedly support no heroine. If there is a heroine, I will report it directly. It is a waste of time.

It looks pretty good so far, but the miracle point is pressed too hard. The pressure is too heavy. It's already 75 chapters and I'm still in the Qi training period. If I write like this and become an immortal, I don't need 1,000 chapters.

It would be perfect to write 3 more female protagonists, help them enter the space with miracles, the protagonist is immortal, they are immortal, one female forms the formation, one practices the weapon, and the other uses the elixir and grows the medicine. The space can retain their experience in elixir training, weapon training, and array formation, and they can learn their achievements with just a thought, and they don't have to live alone. If nothing happens, take her back to the earth for a walk.