两界，永劫不灭的我稳重修仙

The writing is good, unlike other novels where you just go find a woman if you have the ability. Brother, if you have this time, be careful and develop yourself.

It's okay, except for the self-blame part, which is a bit annoying, but otherwise it's okay. What a fucking slap in the face. I said it was okay at the beginning, but then came a "genius" price, cost = sales, and ordinary alchemists lose money when they don't make money? [Anger]

I have just finished reading Chapter 40. The protagonist behaves steadily. I hope the author will keep it up and give him a five-star review to encourage him.

Luo Binghe waited for Shen Qingqiu for 5 years, Xue Yang waited for Xiao Xingchen for 8 years, Lan Wangji waited for Wei Wuxian for 13 years, Ye Hua waited for Bai Qian for 300 years, Sun Wukong waited for Tang Seng for 500 years, Yuwen Tuo waited for Ning Ke for 500 years, Huacheng waited for Xie Lian for 800 years, Feng Qingxue Baili Tusu has waited for 900 years, Nightshade has waited for Long Yang for 1,000 years, Bai Niangzi has waited for Xu Xian for 1,000 years, Yi Xiaochuan has waited for Yu Shu for 2,000 years, Su Jiuer has waited for Feng Xi for 3,000 years, Xiyao has waited for Feipeng for thousands of years, and Zixuan has waited for Changqing for three lives and three lives. And I have been waiting for your update. On a certain day, a certain day, a certain month, a woman was lying weakly on the bed, her face could not hide the paleness. There was a slight smile on his lips. Her outstretched hand trembled slightly, and tears shone in the corners of her eyes. The hoarse voice murmured: "Don't forget to update

There are some minor flaws, but the flaws are not concealed. The setting is very grand. As a bookworm of 30+ years, I can keep up with the latest chapters. It is a rare invincible immortal cultivation novel, but it is a bit watery, which is a common problem in Internet literature [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

I went to the world of immortality for about a year, and it has only been a month or two since I came back to Lyran. But I stayed on Lyran for a year, and it has only been a month since I returned to the world of immortality. What's the situation? Moreover, the aura of the world of immortality is richer, but according to your target combat power, the upgrade of Lyran is too fast. It feels like it has surpassed that of the world of immortality.

I have read the latest chapter. There are no big flaws. It's just that there are fewer chapters about Lyraen and the space is not used very well. The other aspects are quite good. The protagonist's personality and methods of doing things. Also, this book has no female protagonist so far. Haha, I was still looking forward to it being a harem [thoughts]

Good reviews, support for not having a female protagonist, pursuing the road wholeheartedly, huge content world, not impatient and slowly upgrading, golden finger is fun, including immortality, blessing and understanding, looking forward to the use of the next miracle point, not aggrieved, not impatient, the protagonist's character is natural. I really feel that the protagonist is free and easy and not bound to himself. Whether it is 3,000 chapters or 5,000 chapters, I will keep chasing it. I hope the author can write a long novel and continue to maintain the rhythm. I wholeheartedly support no heroine. If there is a heroine, I will report it directly. It is a waste of time.

It looks pretty good so far, but the miracle point is pressed too hard. The pressure is too heavy. It's already 75 chapters and I'm still in the Qi training period. If I write like this and become an immortal, I don't need 1,000 chapters.

It would be perfect to write 3 more female protagonists, help them enter the space with miracles, the protagonist is immortal, they are immortal, one female forms the formation, one practices the weapon, and the other uses the elixir and grows the medicine. The space can retain their experience in elixir training, weapon training, and array formation, and they can learn their achievements with just a thought, and they don't have to live alone. If nothing happens, take her back to the earth for a walk.

It's a pretty good book about cultivating immortals. The combination of the modern cool writing style and the past about cultivating immortals doesn't feel too invincible, but there are basically no big obstacles. It seems to be quite refreshing, and the step-by-step growth feels quite good. The combination of smooth sailing and being tired of being stubborn is quite good. It can be said that there is gold in the shit. Although there are some unavoidable points, it does not affect the reading. The story is well written, and it feels more refreshing to watch Han Paopao. There are still many big pitfalls, which is good. I hope I can write it to the end [eating melon]

It's so satisfying, but the only flaw is that there is no female protagonist.

The writing is very good, and I highly recommend it in all aspects. However, the protagonist uses too few plug-ins later. Although it is not needed in the plot, it will not disappear, and new plug-ins should also appear. In terms of time, it is about time, and overall it is very stable! Later, the plug-in pressure is too heavy, and the protagonist is afraid of this and that. When will it be over? It's okay to have a clone to do things. Also, the time ratio between the world of immortality and Lyran in the early stage is 100 times different from the time ratio in the later stage. I don't know why.

The plot of the world of cultivating immortals and the plot of Lyra star are really the same. Wen Xiaomeng of Lyra star is the protagonist. It's all written around her

It's okay. If you just write more details about the fight (although it's basically a crushing battle), describe more about the effects of physical training, show it in the battle, and do more old 6, I feel it's basically very good [like][like][like]

This book is pretty good, a slow-paced and enjoyable read. The best thing about this book is that there are not so many stupid and bloody plots to target the protagonist. When the protagonist was growing up, there was no situation where people from all over the world would target him wherever he went. There is also the old plot where a small one is beaten and a big one comes, and an old one comes back again. Watching too many old plots really makes me feel plot fatigue. This book has very little written about this aspect, which is in line with my personal taste. Wait, wait, overall it looks pretty good to me personally. But there is one thing. The description of the world regions in this book is relatively vague. The places the protagonist has been to are too many and too complicated. As a reader, I am a little confused. I hope the author will have more time to draw a simple sketch of the world map of this book. [Exploration] Follow up for updates...

Could the author not write a female protagonist? I really like this no cp. Please! 🙏🙏🙏

Nine points before Star City, 5 points after

Five stars, absolutely five stars, no heroine, space, the world of immortality and the real world are mutually protagonists, system, absolute super genius, development in all aspects, always refreshing, not brainless, the author will always remember the time! ! ! Conscience! ! Nice! ! !

The five-star rating is because the author deserves it. There are no ambiguous and positive messy emotions. I feel comfortable listening to the book, not those emotional dramas. Therefore, the author writes very well. Good works are free from vulgar taste. I hope the author will continue to maintain his own style.

Why is the rating so low? The author of this book writes very well!

Jackie Chan Aotian's script is defined from the first chapter. It's quite enjoyable to watch, and I quite agree with the values ​​​​that the author has given to the protagonist. What I most agree with is that there are two worlds. One world is the top, where you can play the world as you like, and the other world is where you can still work hard to challenge and continue to upgrade. Even if you are stuck, you still have to work hard to upgrade. It gives people a sense of relaxation that I can rest when I want to, and work hard when I want to.

After watching it for so long, emmm, it is above average, and it is still very good. The description of some important plot plots is not enough. To make it more attractive, more hostile characters and psychological descriptions of minor characters can be added. It feels cool, always using some low-level spells. I also find it a bit cumbersome to compete against other people, as well as the situation on the other side of the earth. It's better to focus the description on the increase in the protagonist's magical powers. It looks cooler. Also, when the protagonist reaches enlightenment, he always falls into the sea of Tao accidentally, which is a bit poisonous. Overall it is very engaging to read, and I read a million words from the beginning during the winter vacation. Not bad, not bad

This novel is one of the best among the two world travel novels. I don't know why the rating is so low. At least a score of 9 or above is nothing more than a lack of writing about the original world. However, the way the protagonist of the novel is dealt with is correct. An immortal is destined to be lonely. How can he want both? The world view is also very grand. So far, If the author is not unfinished, he still has to write at least two or three thousand chapters. After all, there are some pitfalls in the front, and the realm is also super high. The protagonist is currently Mahayana, and the immortal has not yet arrived. There are some immortals and the like. I look forward to the author's good work, a novel about free prostitution. This quality is fine It's a pity. I followed the story for 1,400 chapters, but it turned out that the whole story is the protagonist's own soliloquy. It's too boring. The author still doesn't know what he wants to express. It's probably not interesting if it goes on like this. It's not as good as the previous trip between two worlds. The more I follow, the more boring it becomes. Come on, it's been abandoned.

Invincible is not brainless, nor is it too cumbersome. It is considered above average in Tomato. It is said that the protagonist is immortal. If his head is cut off, will the head grow out of the body, or the body grow out of the head, or simply get a new one? @The Bugs and Beans that Can Run

This is the real invincible flow, this is the cool article I want, how can I succeed in my career if I waste my time on falling in love every day? This is called not having a heroine. I usually hate a harem without a heroine. This book is very satisfying.

I read this book for five minutes. I personally think it is very good-looking. There is not a single exclamation mark, and there is no reading point in the whole book. Especially in the third page, there are only three exclamation points and 108 periods. If you like to read about the apocalypse, you can take a look.

Not bad, not bad. It's a post-apocalyptic fairy tale. I can't stand any of the traditional fairy tales. This one is not bad. It's not that Long Aotian doesn't have all kinds of slap-in-the-face plots, and he's not aggrieved. The main theme is a character who does whatever he wants.

I have also read a lot of immortality articles, and I think this one is very good. It doesn't have too many emotional entanglements and is focused on the great road. Many protagonists in immortality novels have a lot of time, but if they are not qualified enough, you just have to take your time! You also have to cause trouble everywhere, and if you make trouble, it will also affect the people around you. If you have a long life, you will be unlucky if you follow the protagonist. This book doesn't cause trouble for friends, and everyone who has a good relationship with the protagonist gets benefits, which feels very good.

I said, why are there not many people? It's all for a reason.