Eternal**

The content is not bad, concise and clear, with basically no watermarks, and other aspects are also good. But did the author miss something? It's just that the description of taste is missing. In addition to being good-looking, the eighteen-year-old beauty should also have a scent on her body, right? The protagonist and the beautiful woman are so close that it is impossible for him not to smell the fragrance of the other girl. It is recommended to describe this scene as much as possible so that readers can feel as if they are actually there. Keep up the good work. [Laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

As a newbie, Bai is pretty good, his writing style is also pretty good, and the content is concise and clear. However, Tomato mainly contains interesting articles. Maybe it's because it's not that exciting in the early stages. I'm looking forward to the development of the plot in the future.

It feels pretty good, keep up the good work, just start writing and hold on.

Give myself a five-star review [almost crying] [almost crying]