Pokemon: Indestructible

I've finished reading it, and it's good. Would it be better if the protagonist's father also had a family?! It is recommended that the first point should not be too fast, otherwise you will not know how to write it later unless you are level 200 or above. The second point is that there are wins and losses. It is good for the protagonist to win the first championship. For example, in three-on-three, the first one wins, the second one draws, the third one loses, etc. Not only does the male protagonist become stronger, but all friends, enemies, and rivals also become stronger, otherwise How to compare? I don't know if the author has read any of Xiaozhi's Pokémon novels. One of them is kind of like Xiaozhi who traveled through time. He asked Xiaomao what he wanted to compare with you, and then it was level 40, 50, etc. The protagonist actually said that this was for newcomers. Isn't the protagonist a newcomer? Then he played the game and had levels 67, 80. Wait, but there are no other supporting characters, so for the time being, if the protagonist encounters the biting land shark and the violent salamander, the three members of the family are injured and the protagonist encounters them, and then the parents give them to the protagonist's father and the younger one. It is recommended to give them to the protagonist's father, the elf, the blood-winged flying dragon, the biting land shark, the two-axe battle dragon, the Hu Di, the night demon, the duck-billed salamander, the earth turtle, and Ni. Many Kings, Nidoqueen, Electric Monster, Fire Beast, Big Wolf Dog, Poison Skull, Sonic Dragon, Crystal Lantern, Vulcan Moth, Leave King, Tetus Sea Lion, Metagross, Bulbasaur, Nine Tails, Wind Speed Dog, Dream Girl Demon, Cresselia, Strange Power, Powerful Crocodile, Centipede King, Lotte Kappa, Overlord Flower, Amber Monster, Construction Master, Yanwu King, Snow The witch, the fire-breathing camel, the three-headed dragon, Pokkya, the snorkeling weasel, the fork-shaped bat, the Lady Cleansing, the Gotha duck, the child-protecting insect, the ancient pterosaur, the big chrysanthemum, the white sea lion, the owl, the giant-winged flying fish, the Dunjia, the king swallow, the super king, the roaring whale king, the ancient feather insect, the iron claw lobster, the ancient armor, the electric wolf spider, the blue cloud dragon, etc., To give my father a good reason. Because only when your parents and family are strong can you be safe and work hard to become stronger, because you are still weak now. From my personal opinion, this is good. I hope it will be written like this in the future and not to do too much. The most important thing is to write about women. For example, when the woman confessed, it was okay and the protagonist refused. For example, it was okay at the beginning, but what happened when I wrote about the woman? She didn't bring any clothes. Can you take me away if you wear something or have a sprained ankle? Or if you are a woman who is being bullied by others, the protagonist will see it and take care of it, etc., And the last point is that I don't like single attributes, such as water type, and then the lizard king, earth turtle, etc. Are no longer available. This should be written like this, saying that you will conquer the one you like, etc. I don't know once. Where did you see it? Who said it? If you use this fire to come out, and then someone comes out to defeat you, etc., Although it is not perfect, you have to keep some trump cards, otherwise everyone will know that you only have steel and rock lands. For example, it is easier. People think you only have fire elements, but it turns out that you also have water and grass elements, so there is no time to react, etc.

Direct five stars. Come on, Ollie!

It's well written. It's a Pokémon novel worth reading and worth buying 🙂

It feels okay, come on

It feels pretty good, come on!

So far, I can write it and watch it.

Awesome. I enjoyed watching it.

Will there be a giant blacksmith in the back?

Is it okay to give the protagonist a steel-armored crow 🤭