
The Untamed: What If Meng Yao Had a Childhood Sweetheart?
魔道:假如孟瑶有个小青梅
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 472k Words
- Updated
- 10mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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I like it very much!!! I came across a lot of fanfics where the protagonist group is the main character, and finally I have Ayao who is written in big letters as our black sesame stuffing. When I read the original work, I had a deep impression of the character Jin Guangyao. He is really pathetic, pitiful, and hateful! I have very complicated feelings about him, and I once imagined that if there was someone who could always firmly choose him and accompany him from the beginning, would he have a different ending. This novel is really well written, the writing is great, the characters are not OOC, the most important thing is that the plot is smooth and the characters are full-bodied. Support support support! 😘😘😘 Come on, more, more, more, more!
The novel is really good to read. I feel that the entire storyline of Jin Guangyao has been clarified, which makes me feel that it is very interesting. It expands and extends some of the plots that were mentioned in the original novel. For example, the part where Jin Guangyao saves Lan Wangji's brother is very interesting and interesting. The original heroine is also very interesting. , The portrayal is very good, with flesh and blood, such as the plot of selling my jade pendant, which allows me to see my feelings for the male protagonist from some plots. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is very well created, and the gradual warming does not happen overnight.
It's very interesting, I think the two characters are well drawn. Under the pressure gradually from behind, the original heroine did not lose her good nature, but increasingly found her own methods to deal with and save people.
It's very good-looking. I think Meng Yao is not OOC. The heroine has the shyness of someone she likes. Anyway, they are very objective.
Ah Li is a little bitter gourd who has been abused. She is not more desperate, only the most desperate. Every time she is one step away from happiness, running from the wolf pit to the tiger's den, and being forced to love her like her mother 😢 Fortunately, the author has always said that he will fight against abuse, but it is really too painful, no blessings are enjoyed, no suffering is left.
Super pretty!!! I feel that the plot is generally good, and the characterization is also good! I feel like it's a theme I've never seen in demonic fan fiction! The cp is also very good, but the back part is a little bit cruel, but the cruelty is also good-looking! Looking forward to the plot between Meng Yao and Tang Li!!!
I feel that the author is very good at writing. He has a perfect grasp of Meng Yao's character. He describes the emotional changes and character changes of the male protagonist very delicately, including the emotional changes towards the female protagonist. I really like it 🥰🥰🥰🥰 Please update!!!!!!!
It's very interesting. Although it's the first time I've read this couple, it's the best fanfic I've ever read. It's full of flesh and blood.
I love love love love so much!! Super pretty!! I cried when I read it, I felt it was well written!! My little sister is so cute (づ ̄3 ̄)づ╭❤~! The male protagonist also feels that he has changed for the female protagonist, but he is still the world-destroying villain!! I love this kind of setting. The xp in the center is greatly increased and it is more updated. Personally, I don't feel that there is any OOC, but it still fits the original image very well!
Looks good! But I heard that five stars doesn't seem to be included in the rating, right? If not, please remind me! It's really good-looking, and the character creation is the best I've ever seen in a fanfic. You can feel the author's care for each person, and they must have been polished. The writing is also good and very immersive.