I Ate the Shadow Fruit and Created a Dark Dimension

I am an author, so I shamelessly want to give a five-star review to the book I wrote. Many people are complaining about the killing part. In fact, I just wanted to write it that way to reflect the growth of the character's personality. In other words, it is a node of human nature, but it was not written well and the feeling was not written. Since this is the first book, of course there are many shortcomings, but anyway, I will give it five stars. [Shy] If you see any bad points, you can directly tag me. The author mainly wants to listen to advice, try to fix everything that can be changed, and can be arranged.

Not bad, I really like Hermione's novel with a single heroine

The writing is good. Other books with a single heroine, Hermione, are slow in pace, but this one is more crisp and clear. I hope to write about the reform of the magical world in the later period and the integration of the world of ordinary people. A little bit of fifty or sixty chapters is enough, but there are many other similar games with one ending. There are also some meaningless cars that are unnecessary to write about and can easily arouse resentment. Don't mess up the whole story, there are still people who will watch it, come on!

It's well written, just don't forcefully weaken it! Stop forcibly weakening it! Stop forcibly weakening it! Stop forcibly weakening it! ! ! ! ! !

This book is wonderfully written and the author has put great care into it. I don't make random comments because I don't want to disturb your train of thought. Don't ask yourself about the road ahead without knowing it. Watch until the clouds open and the moon shines brightly.

Is there anything about this book that doesn't deserve five stars? ! [Adoration][Adoration]

It's very good. I don't know why there aren't enough people to rate it. Everyone should read more of this good book.

Author, your writing is very, very beautiful, you must stick to it! ! !

This novel is very well written👌🏻, highly recommended

The content is novel and okay.

The Snape part is very affectionate, as long as affection is enough

The farther back you go, the better it looks.

Yes, but I suggest you write more about daily life with Hermione [Love] [Like]

Very well written

Voldemort's Shadow

It's not bad. It's not bad.

Come on, I'll be at work during the Dragon Boat Festival, I'll be the first to give you some reminders [laughing]

I find it quite interesting. Maybe it's because there aren't many people rating it, so the score isn't very high.

Great Hogwarts fanfic

Very good! Come on! I hope the author will work harder and have this quality in the future.

Very good, very good Harry Potter fanfic

Very nice, at least I think.

Lun towel feather fan Lun towel

A very wonderful book

It's pretty good, I recommend it.

Overall it's pretty good

Not bad, but the writing of the Triwizard Hegemony is not hegemonic enough.

It's pretty good. It would be better if it had a little sugar, but it feels a bit secondary [what] Why is it gone?

Looks good, don't worry too much about the rating

To be honest, I really think it looks good