Disciple************

Okay, let's talk about the setting. Currently, there are Master Chu, Master Su and a little senior sister. The senior sister is written as a passing passerby but it is quite suitable in this book📖. I think Master Chu's attitude towards the male protagonist is like a special toy, a male favorite, and the book is indeed written like this. It cannot be said to be a yandere because she has her own clear purpose. The male protagonist is just a part of achieving this purpose. Master Su was met by the male protagonist after he escaped. It is normal for an accident to occur after the classic plot. Then the male protagonist was found and brought back. Then her situation became uncomfortable. She was pregnant with the child and could not be beaten or robbed. She was extremely sad. But there is a problem: 🧐🧐Master Chu's strength is not low, why can't he see that the hero has lost Yuanyang😗

It's awesome, but the development of Su's emotional line is unclear. Chu's feelings are all used, a bit off topic, not yandere enough. Generally acceptable, good luck to the author!

What the author writes in large letters is simply divine, and I like it very much.

Doesn't this book deserve 5 stars? Very beautiful

Two masters, one yandere and the other arrogant, the only thing they have in common is that they are extremely defensive. But the male protagonist is really fierce, and he gets into the soul with one shot. If Master Chu knew about this, hey, hey. I want to see the Shura field become a river of blood. It would be better to split the male protagonist in half, the yandere master takes the body, and the tsundere master takes the soul. ——What are the positions of the Demon Lord and the Empress in the back? The male protagonist's harem or the tool? If it's the former, it would be okay to describe it more. But if it's the latter, I suggest you don't give too many roles. Otherwise, people didn't expect it, but in the end, you were left ambiguous, and in the end, you just ignored it and didn't ask, which would easily lower the impression of the audience. ——The current plot is that Master Su has a child of the male protagonist, and the relationship between the two of them was basically tacitly understood when they were in the Shui Ling Sect. The two-year oath is proof of this. Master Chu completely destroyed the male protagonist's feelings for her. Although they did not have to fight each other because of the thirteen years of living together, this deceptive behavior cannot be forgiven in any case. ——Master Su initially only wanted to avenge his master, but after having children, his mentality gradually shifted to the male protagonist, which means that it is the most likely situation to start a family. That's not to say that he will never avenge his master again, but if he has to sacrifice his children and the male protagonist for this, I personally think that Master Su will most likely choose to give up. ——Master Chu is now repentant, but the big mistake has been made. In the coming period, the biggest and only focus is to find every possible way to find the male protagonist, and at the same time do everything possible to make up for the huge debt this incident has caused to the male protagonist. ——But having said so much, the biggest problem before the two masters is how to face the possessed male protagonist. I personally believe that they will not care about it for emotional reasons, but if the male protagonist's possessed identity is exposed. Even the uncles of Master Chu and Master Su who are in the stage of becoming gods will face a lot of pressure from public opinion. After all, it's impossible to really kill everyone, otherwise it's better to become a demon together

Please don't cut me in half, please [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

After watching it for more than 20 days, it's still relatively good so far. I still can't figure out Chen Yan's attitude towards Chu [OK]

Very good setting and good writing style Author, you won't finish it or stop updating it, right?

Dad, update quickly [cry][cry][cry][petrified]

Not bad, really well written. I hope I can receive them all in the end [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Give me more, it's really nice [laughs evilly]

I'm looking forward to [learning] when I'm a master of reverse reasoning.

Yes, I suggest you spend more time on the two masters. They are very well written [Love]

I don't really like multiple heroines, but the writing is good

I think it's okay, but the protagonist's personality changes a little too quickly, and in the world of cultivation, it's either you or me who dies, which is still good. I feel like it's very well written.

The writing is good, and there are no brainless villains. After reading thousands of hours of novels, it is rare to be able to finish it. The novels written by big guys are complex, and the novels that are fresh and refreshing are fast food. Only by reading the author's novels can I maintain my life like this.

It's very nice [blowing kiss], the follow-up is attractive, and the final update is quick! [Anger]

It looks good, I hope it has a good ending

Su Geng, can't sleep at night

I'm a loser and I like to watch

Speed, love to watch, that's all. .

Potential stocks will look good in the future

Good health, love health, but not good enough. The donkeys in the production team dare not rest for so long. The author will update soon😭😭😭

It's okay, I change my taste occasionally

Beautiful, novel subject matter

It can also look good

Well written, good luck to the author✊

Good good very good

Give me a five-star review to encourage you.

Look at it as a half-lucky child. It's unpleasant but not aggrieved. At least it doesn't have that kind of despair.