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Hello, author! First of all, please don't be nervous. I'm not here to urge you to update, because I believe that I will be able to see his ending in my lifetime. Please write carefully, it doesn't matter how long you write, as long as you don't give up or become irritable - nothing is a problem. I will wait with your loyal readers. I admire your writing style very much, which is both humorous and profound. To put it bluntly, if you are included in the article, you will be a senior actor. Interpreter, I am the audience who appreciates the film. Your performance has reached a state of enchantment, just like Jian Han's state of watching "The Fifteen Days of Leohard". One more episode means one less episode. I want to watch it but can't let it go. This contradictory and complicated mood drives me crazy. I am just a bored idler who clicked on this novel aimlessly without the intention of finishing it, but you successfully made me finish reading it. Now, I can only be filled with emotion. Only leaving a message in the comments can stabilize my mood at this moment. With a lucky mentality, I hope you can read it. Come on, author! I look forward to every "next chapter" of yours, your dear readers.

Only four stars, and I haven't been contracted by my daughter yet... Without a hundred or two, father and daughter can no longer recognize each other, so leave it at that, abandon it.

To be honest, there are problems with the details, but the subject matter and the book are still relatively good. The plot of this book is still a bit slow, but the angle of the book is relatively novel. My evaluation is that it is a good book with a sense of fragmentation, which can pass the time [Chigua] It's becoming more and more watery, and it's getting more and more collapsed toward the back. It looks so uncomfortable. [Laughing awkwardly]

The subject matter is fine, but the title of the book should be changed.

It's well written, please update it quickly. Don't worry about what others say, just write it yourself. According to your idea, I really like to watch this kind of thing, not the kind that is too fast-paced. Although the fast-paced one looks very enjoyable, but after a long time, I will feel tired of watching it and don't want to read it. It's more interesting if you take it slowly.

Author, how could you do this? The Guinness record is for typing 807 letters per minute. Calculating that each Chinese character requires six letters on average, you can type about 134 words per minute. Since you are not a holder, we will calculate it as 100 words per minute. According to WHO standards, a person's healthy sleep time is eight hours, and you spend about two hours eating every day, and another 20 minutes going to the toilet. So, 40 minutes to wash up, one hour to exercise, two hours to get inspired, and another hour of dazed fishing, you should have nine hours to type, Linyi typed 435,780 words, according to 2000 words per chapter, there should be 36 chapters, but you only put so much content every day, what's going on? To be honest, is it a deduction? Even the donkeys in the production team dare not take such a rest, the author quickly got up to type!

Okay, protective cool article🔥🔥🔥 The subject matter and title are very good, but the protagonist has too little interaction with his daughter in the early stage. It feels like he is just a sucker wearing his daughter's skin. The male protagonist is promoted🍵🍵🍵 The male protagonist mainly relies on physical exercise and killing to accumulate energy. In the early stage, he relies entirely on recklessness and lacks wisdom✨✨✨ Standard altruism means having good three views, being affectionate and righteous, and worthy of the friends around you🕳️🕳️🕳️🚪🚪🚪 It is very interesting as a cool article, if you look closely, it will be very cool🌾🌾🌾 There is a system cheat, there is no cp after death and becoming a heroic spirit💐💐 Regarding the nature of a daughter's slave, the most interesting part of the whole text is the interaction with the daughter, the rest is a bit boring🍃🍃🍃

The writing is very good. Come and read it.

The plot is good, but I want to watch the daughter

Very good I know that you have not been very happy recently. You have suffered a little grievance and often feel stressed. But no matter what, you must love yourself more. You are already good enough and sensible enough. Don't always blame yourself. Taking good care of your body and being happy is the most important thing. Suddenly I don't want to chase anymore

Anyway, I like it very much. Good luck to the author [sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's actually pretty good in every aspect, something new readers should pay attention to! Don't deny other people's works because they don't suit your taste, as this will cause the author to lose new readers (affecting the rating) Don't read novels with a critical attitude, as this will make yourself uncomfortable. Just quit if you don't like it, no need to leave a bad review, thank you 1. The main plot line is on the protagonist's side, and the father and daughter get to know each other within a hundred chapters. Second, the pace seems to be fast, but because the author removes the daily routine of no big things, it is the result Third, most of the bad reviews come from the deviation between the expected plot and the novel, which does not mean that the novel is bad. Fourth, the author works very hard, writing 6 to 9 chapters every day, 2000+ per chapter, and occasionally 3000+

It feels very interesting hahaha. The writing style is also interesting. I have never seen a plot story from the perspective of a heroic spirit. It is a relatively new theme and I don't see any poisonous points. Big boost for the author! Update soon! Not enough! 👀

I'll give it five stars. There are very few such subjects, and the names are somewhat consistent. In fact, it can be written into two books, one about my daughter, and one about myself. Now there is a book about myself and not taking care of my daughter.

Not bad, I quite like it There are also people who work in philosophy. They are also good at updating and are very diligent. The authors I followed earlier are so many times better than I know. They used to have three chapters. You can update six chapters with one chapter. It's amazing. I hope I can continue to work hard and not let down my expectations [smirk][smile][snicker][smirk]

It is recommended that after making a contract with your daughter, she can summon the heroic spirit directly and 100% perfectly because of her bloodline. (Because there has been no contract before) 60% is required for both high and low levels The author listened to the advice very much. After improving his strength in the early stage, he then made a contract to make his daughter invincible. The father and daughter haven't met yet, which is very exciting.

If there wasn't a chapter where Teacher Qianyue advises the protagonist's daughter, I think the score might be higher. Just know it clearly and make it clear. There were a lot of comments before that chapter. After that chapter, there were obviously fewer people. Overall, it's quite interesting. As long as it doesn't end badly, this book can probably be written at least a million words long.

This book is very good and interesting. I hope the author can follow it soon and add up the number. Although I saw that today it was six pictures a day, I hope there are more. When will he be able to sign a contract with his daughter?

The book is a good book, the author is a good author, the plot is a good plot, and the protagonist is a good protagonist. It's just that I came here because of the names. I thought they were father and daughter. They overlapped so much. When they met, I felt that I could count them on three or four hands. I felt that they spent so little time together. Except for the finale, they basically spent the rest of their time doing their own things. There are not as many descriptions of one person as there are of father and daughter together. Booooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo... Ways ways...

It's a book worth reading. As a middle-aged man in his 40s, I would most like to read a book about an old father protecting his cubs.

I feel that this book is the gradual realization of digital units. Sooner or later, I will have to read 1 Gurgor. It will be fun to read this as a cool article. However, the personal panel skills are too weak. I hope they can be changed. The combat aspect is a bit confusing. I always feel that I can't beat the sudden attack. I can defeat it, no, I should have been able to defeat it, but the gravity field is too supermodel, but the pleasure is quite pure. The most impressive part is the part where the gravity field is used to harvest the star clan, which made me crazy [please update] In short, it is a good and refreshing novel

It's a very enjoyable story, and each plot is not too long. The basic logic is very simple - the protagonist is invincible in a duel, and if he dies in a duel, he will be upgraded. After the upgrade, he can get a bunch of people in the same realm in seconds, and he can upgrade many levels in seconds. The pace is fast and the protagonist upgrades quickly (I generally don't care about the numerical values) My daughter's line is also pretty good. My dad is cheating, and so is my daughter. The progress is very fast, and as long as there are no infinite nesting dolls, the end should be great when it is over.

The subject matter is very good, and the writing is OK, but I haven't finished reading the contracted daughter yet, which makes me feel a little rushed.

It looks good, but when will you contract your daughter?

The writing is quite good, but it's a little late for the father and daughter to meet each other. Also, I haven't read other novels in a few days and updated a few chapters or more than a dozen chapters. I haven't read this novel in a few days. Goodfellas has seventy-two chapters and I updated it at least three or four times a day. It's amazing.

This book is quite enjoyable. The protagonist climbs up step by step and finally becomes a god. After becoming a god, he doesn't have the same lofty feeling as before. Instead, he is playing with his family and is very down-to-earth. All in all, it is very good.

Enemy Intelligence: **** Our Intelligence: **** There are two worlds in this book. The author first recommends playing with iron to become stronger, and does not do wrong things. Character: ***** Plot: ****

Let me give you five stars first to encourage the author. The subject matter may be a bit slow but the progress is a bit slow.

I feel that giving five stars is a bit high. In the later stage, the combat power is a little bit low, so I just jump in and kill at will. In addition, in the later stage of this article, the highlight of this article, which I like to see, is almost replaced by certain fields, so the value of the iron is not obvious. Everything else is fine. I think it is quite enjoyable to read, both from the perspective of the father and the daughter.

Not bad, it will definitely be interesting, you can take a look ✨ ("\(●-●) \ / 0\ \ ( )" \__T__/