Zombies Across the City: Awakening to Powers Before the Apocalypse

The author can first change the first one into an introduction. To summarize. For now, the protagonist is indeed a slow-burner novel. But I still made the same mistakes that most novices make when sitting. The author uses the perspective of the protagonist as an example, but many descriptions are not clearly explained. At the same time, in terms of writing classes, the author has read a lot of books and knows a little bit about everything, but is not very good at it. This results in a lot of expression descriptions, action descriptions, and scene descriptions that are at the level of a novice. It doesn't give people a sense of immediate vision, which is a big loss. Let me talk about another common problem in apocalyptic literature, that is, the author's introduction is too wordy. It could be simpler. At the same time, the introduction does not contain the exact information that readers are looking for - is there a female protagonist? In addition, the author writes a type that is more realistic, so the difficulty for beginners is greatly increased. The author can first try to read some famous books and create some scene descriptions and horror atmosphere. At the same time, the language is a bit wordy. Many of the descriptions of expressions are very embarrassing. In addition, based on the actual scene, there are some lengthy and irrelevant descriptions. Let's talk about the title. Many titles don't mention the center. Try to control this range. Try to control it within two to four words. If the writing is good, try to contain the essence. For example, in the few chapters I have read recently, you can just say "monster" without adding any adjectives. This seems a bit strange. After all, who doesn't know the subject you are writing about, so that's probably the problem. Just try to set up the protagonist's character as well as possible. The characters of other supporting characters should be as realistic as possible. That's all my advice, it's not too good, but it's not too bad either.

I give you five stars. The protagonist is written like a real person and the plot is pretty good. I recommend watching it so far.