Star Iron************

Hateful! Not the first five-star Let's talk about it more seriously. The writing is good and can be used in daily life. Unlike the author's previous book, the update speed is okay. Regarding the plot, I am more curious about Xianzhou's attitude towards Qile, and I want to ask the big guys in the book circle to contribute. I want to kowtow! ! !

It is indeed possible, but the single-player line is too long, which makes the original character a bit marginalized. The most obvious thing is that Xing Gang appears with only a few words. After all, it is a fanfic, so you should have more contact with the original character (the above are purely personal thoughts and suggestions)

Author, you said you can eat CP as you like, but so far I have only seen Kafka, so I might as well settle on it [laughter]

Thank you, I became a shrimp bow. I can't afford to give you five stars if I give you a little more points.

It's so beautiful, come on, author

I came to visit the grave, it's been several days (TAT)

The author's first five-star rating

Give me a five-star rating

Such a beautiful book, why doesn't it have many reviews?

Very interesting, good luck to the author

Really beautiful

Very nice, highly recommended

Very beautiful, I watched it for a long time

Well, it's quite interesting, that's all

It's so fun, I always care about the author's mental state.

Okay, it's a very good novel, it made my face burst into laughter [sneered smile] [sneaky smile] [sneaky smile]

It must be five stars. It has been a long time since I have seen a Mijia game that is so good. I must be full of it! The author should try to describe more local tasks or small daily life with the characters, so that the number of chapters can be added so that the article does not develop too fast and can wait for the version update.