Original God: Starting from a Mortal to Practice Taoism

I suggest you refer to "Original God: Nine Systems of the Human Body, Infinite Possibilities" to learn how to cultivate immortals. The protagonist does not look like someone who is cultivating immortality, but rather like someone who is practicing internal martial arts in the world of martial arts.

In Liyue, it is the remnant of the devil and evil spirit; in Daoji, it is the spirit of evil spirit.

It can be seen that the author has a foundation in fairy tales, fantasy, etc., And writing about Liyue directly makes Liyue not constrained by the square frame of the screen, and becomes much fuller and more real. The Teyvat in the book is like the comparison between the Teyvat written by most common people and the immortal. The story written in the book seems to be full of violence, while the Teyvat here is orderly, logical and natural. It's really a rare story that has normal views, develops without rhythm and has its own ideas [crying]. To be honest, it's really hard to find fan fiction like this on Tomato [crying]

It's quite interesting. The author must have carefully examined the actual books on "cultivation". The training system is explored step by step. There are no poisonous points, it is just plain and simple. It is just that some parts highlight the characters as being very intelligent. There is no city and no strategy. The writing style is there. It is not particularly white. The writing style is good and it is comfortable to read.

It looks good, but it's a little lacking. Come on. It's as if Teyvat has been given a new dimension. It's worth watching as long as it keeps updating. After reading it, I felt like I had to grow my brain.

It's really awesome. When I read it for the first time, I found that the book was unusual. The protagonist was neither arrogant nor cold-blooded and dark. From then on, I was able to keep reading. The second is Ke Qing. Unlike other novels about flowing women, their characters are deeply rooted in the hearts of the people, but the rough description of their appearance makes me want to stop. Now Ke Qing is on an equal footing with the protagonist. Even though he has been the so-called master of the protagonist, there is no plot to "crash the master" because he only teaches one chapter, but writes the whole process in detail!

The protagonist's character is one I like, and the writing is also good. It blends the styles of Genshin Impact and Immortal Cultivation novels very well. The description of the characters is also very good, elegant and elegant, without strange greasy plots, it is very decent. It is rare to see such a refreshing original text. I don't know why there are fewer authors lately. However, as far as my own perception is concerned, the biggest problem with the Mondstadt chapter is that there is no Keqing or the Immortal Seven Stars. It lacks a lot of highlights, such as the love factor with Keqing, and the cool point of having a big backer with Gan Yu and the Seven Stars. Only the knight's feeling is better, I can't stand it anymore

When I read it, I felt like a martial arts novel wearing the skin of the original god [face covering]

Not bad, he is not a monk from outside the world, but a disciple of an immortal who has joined the world. There is no heroine yet, but Qingqing is more likely to be an ambiguous partner. Alas, love is necessary to practice Taoism? It doesn't suit me very well, maybe it's because of the fandom, fans.

It's okay, nothing bad about it. If you're short on books, you can give it a try.

The protagonist knows about the emperor's assassination and the previous plot (but does not know Zhongli's identity). The world description is close to reality (map, Mora purchasing power) Martial arts style (the protagonist is looking for immortality)

It's a bit short. I've read it almost three times.

After reading a few chapters, this is my ideal book. It turns out to be about the lives of ordinary people in the world. Although the protagonist can cultivate

Can the author update more? It's not enough. I've only updated chapter 14 after reading it for so long.

As long as it keeps updating and the plot doesn't get bogged down, it will definitely be a good food. Don't skip the plot, and keep the current plot from focusing on travelers. The blueprint of your novel is "A Mortal's Journey to Immortality." As long as you keep this core outline, the plot should be fine. Come on!

Not bad, but the combat power system is still not rigorous enough.

Everything comes together, the original god is activated [laughing evilly]

Good-looking, different

Yes, come on, author＾0＾~

Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you.

Very interesting novel

Okay, better than those who only know how to make jokes

Very good, the current setting is very attractive

It's so beautiful, I must keep going [crying]

The writing style and concept of this book are quite good. The writing style is real and natural, and the protagonist has a growth process. It is not like many novels that are invincible at the beginning or are full of useless dialogues.

It looks good, but it's a little lacking. Come on [eat melon]

Quite interesting

A rare good book

Very interesting and worth watching.

This is the Liyue I imagined