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It's a rare real-person fan novel, not to mention 50%, 600%, 780%, I think it's at least as successful as a real person [Chigua]

Don't tell me that the writing is okay, it has the flavor of Fangyuan, especially the part about body modification and teeth knocking. Brothers who haven't had their teeth extracted may not know that the feeling is really refreshing.

What is the essence of the protagonist's esophagus? The law of the jungle and the pursuit of taste have been passed over. The special thing about the esophageal Gu Immortal is that it can eat esophageal marks and turn them into esophageal tract marks (which can be seen from various esophageal means). This is eating and digesting, just like the blood path Gu Immortal can improve his realm after killing. For this reason, two esophageal directions are proposed, namely food Gu and food supplement Gu. Concept of gourmet food: The value of food is very average, but processing it into gourmet food will make it easier to digest and give it meaning. Gourmet Gu: Refining alien Dao marks into esophagus Dao marks, including fairy materials. Turn six: one hundred to one, turn seven: ten to one. (Esophageal Gu Immortal blessing has better effect) Food supplement: This is supplement from food. Food itself is to maintain life and strengthen life. Food Supplement Gu: Enhances the foundation of the Blessed Land and speeds up the output of Immortal Yuan (I wanted to write about increasing the output of Immortal Yuan, but it collided with the Immortal Dew Gu)

Very well written. He is worthy of being the protagonist of "Big Love".

It's still okay, regardless of the life and death immortal aperture double ten body, the disaster and disaster power is reduced by half, the dao mark remains unchanged, and the strength is still strong. The original work clearly states that this can be done. Original text: If the immortal zombie body of the powerful true martial body is collected and used in the process of rebirth, the resulting immortal orifice will surpass the superior blessed land and become a special blessed land! After the immortal zombie is reborn, it will also transform into a powerful true martial body! ! . Other ten skills are also available. The first orifice is not needed, but the second orifice is. Original text: The rebirth method of the Immortal Aperture of Life and Death is also an excellent method to improve the qualifications of Gu Immortal! The original article also said that you can have double ten and perfect body. Is it okay to have a head start [eat melon] like this? Please, I want to see it. Think about it. . . Let's create another Ten Ultimate Body, just like the Pure Dream Seeking Reality Body, using the Dao Mark from the Outer Worlds plus the Tao Zhenzhen Zhenzhen Dalu Dao Master plus the Great Universe Body to borrow the method of the Immortal Aperture of Life and Death. The esophagus has never had a ten-point body, and I thought I might be able to make up for this gap [punch out]

I thought of a fun killing move: the weak eat the strong. Law Road, the esophageal killer move. Designate two parties to compare their paper strength, so that the one with strong paper strength can take all the luck of the weak. How's it going? Have you done anything?

If you have any opinions and suggestions about the plot, you can leave them here [please pay attention]

Although the protagonist is a member of the Ten Jue Body of the Law, the Law is possessed by Wuji, and I feel that he is not suitable for majoring in it. If you use combat, management, and auxiliary skills as a three-dimensional player, if you feel that there is no conflict with the master, and the prospects are good, you can choose the channel and the slave path. Channels are used in more scenarios in the Gu world, and can actually be extended to the fields of knowledge, information, and language. Words that carry power can derive talismans. The slave path in the Gu world is more about driving away beasts, but as the natural path of the dragon man, the next protagonist of God's Will, the slave path has great potential. If the slave path is expanded, Fate Gu and even destiny Gu can be regarded as slave path Gu. Domination of others is the essence of the slave path. Dominate others, dominate the world, and dominate the Dao Mark. It embodies the power of slave way better than simply driving away beasts.

In my eyes, a little Karami who read the original work of Daai Xianzun in Beiyuan, this book is pretty good.

It's okay, especially the plot after Feng Jinhuang comes out is really good. After reading a Gu Daoliu novel, I suddenly saw the feeling of falling in love.

It's very beautiful. It's so beautiful. Come on, author. I've finished reading it.

I respect the original work very much. I have read it several times at least. The setting does not violate the original work at all. It is very rigorous.

I, the Immortal Lord, am the Great Love Immortal! The Great Love Immortal Lord Gu Yue Fang Yuan first experienced the destruction of the Gu Yue clan and wanted to rebuild the Gu Yue clan, but was betrayed by his childhood sweetheart Bai Ningbing. Later, in Beiyuan, he met Ge Yao, a girl who dared to love and hate. He was moved by Ge Yao's true love and dare to love and hate, so he decided to take her on the adventure with him, but Ge Yao died. In his arms, in the Eighty-Eighth Corner Zhenyang Tower, Fang Yuan fell in love with Hei Loulan, who was disguised as a man. However, he was framed by Ma Hongyun, who was carrying the eighth-level Gu and was pushed to the Zhenyang Tower. He became the target of public criticism. He had no choice but to flee to the end of the world with Hei Loulan, but Hei Loulan was forcibly enslaved and turned into a slave by Ying Wuxie. He made great efforts to save Hei Loulan... All these things changed the Great Love Immortal. The boy who walked out of Qingmao Mountain became a man. He changed from being bent on revenge and rebuilding the Gu Yue clan to winning freedom for all people. Regardless of aliens or humans, he treated them equally. 1. Introduction to "The Legend of the Great Love Immortal" : Lord Immortal, I am a level 8 Gu Immortal from Heaven. I have long seen that Heaven's approach is not going well, so I have come to seek refuge with you today, Lord Immortal. I have a few treasures to offer to you. One of them is the shark bone sword made from the ribs of the saint girl of the shark race in the East China Sea. The second is the immortal shark soul lamp made from her soul. Her soul has been burned in this lamp for life after life, and her soul is scattered when the lamp is destroyed. The third one is a mermaid skin painting made from her skin, which depicts her rescuing a human race boy at the beach. How about it, Lord Immortal, this villain is quite sincere, right? [Laughs evilly]

The writing is great and I look forward to the author's support.

Brother, please don't stop updating. I hope you will continue writing. The more the better. I would like to ask about Lv Dao. I don't seem to understand what this genre is used for? Is there any specific performance? I know everything else.

Very suitable for personal taste! I hope the author can update more. I hope the author can create a Gu that can sense time going back, similar to the function at the end of Interstellar when the male protagonist sees his previous self in a space and leaves clues. There is also the issue of the female protagonist. I definitely didn't want it at first, but after seeing it later, I felt that it would be good to let Xiao Phoenix be the single female protagonist (I hope the author will consider it more). I must consider it! I am a newbie who has just watched Aid for a short time (I just saw the battle between good and evil in Yitian Mountain). If there are any mistakes in what I said, please correct me.

From the current point of view, there is no poisonous point, and the protagonist feels the same powerlessness as Fang Yuan when he is a mortal. Keep it for now and watch later.

There are many outstanding places, such as the part where the protagonist eats a piece of Danghun Mountain, which impressed me deeply. Anyone who has read the original work knows the importance of Danghun Mountain to model workers. But the protagonist also needs Danghunshan very much. I didn't expect to be able to eat a small piece of Danghunshan. The only drawback is that there are some setting bugs, but they do not affect reading. Little Phoenix should be the heroine! I want to see love!

"Great Love Immortal" genuine version: His love is immortal, and by God's will, he was reborn for five hundred years with a mission, and was forced to say goodbye to his family in pain. Benevolence came out of the mountain, traveled to southern Xinjiang, inspired and influenced the world, punished evil and promoted good along the way, and shocked the world by refining immortal Gu in the blessed land of the Three Kings. He helped the world with compassion, eliminated the snow disaster in Beiyuan, put an end to the conspiracy of the Juyang Demon Lord, demolished the Eighty-eight-corner True Yang Tower, and turned into an immortal zombie. There is no regret! He loves the world well, travels across the five realms, makes friends with all the immortals, performs benevolence without leaving his true name, but fails to eliminate the ghost of the demon king, and seizes the supreme immortal body to reach nirvana. The grand plan of fraternity, lobbying all sides, uniting the forces of the world, resisting the oppression of heaven, breaking destiny, and letting the people of the world be free! Great love lasts forever, establishes a unified world, treats everyone equally, and finally becomes the Nine Revolutions. It sends the will of friends in Paradise to protect the two demons of the East China Sea, Dou Xingxu, and Ju Yang, just for the peace of the world.

I would like to give the author a suggestion: don't destroy the Fate Gu. If you replace the body of the Supreme Immortal, you will be a complete demon from outside the world. Those venerables will be resurrected, but they will not affect your becoming an immortal anyway. Moreover, when the time comes, you will be invincible among the sub-immortals after swallowing a few caves. There is no use of God's will to influence others, and they can't defeat you anyway. , When the time comes, there is no need to rush to become a master. When the time comes, you can refine the Heavenly Dao Dao Mark to refine the Fate Gu. The Fate Gu is a Heavenly Gu worm, which is absolutely fine. At that time, you can just decide on a fate. You can also refine the Tenth Turn Fate Gu. There is really no benefit at all in breaking the Fate Gu.

The Tenth Turn Forbidden Net Gu is well-deserved. Such a killing move is so powerful, what else can resist it!

Some parts are a bit redundant, but overall it's good [rolls eyes] This kind of subject matter is difficult to write about, so keep up the good work! Can the single female protagonist be a little phoenix? [Sinister smile]

The best Gu fanfic I have ever seen. The combat power does not collapse, there is no system or particularly outrageous plug-ins, it only relies on the original Ten Ultimate Body in the Gu world plus the demonic traces from outside the world. It's a pretty good fanfic. It's almost as logical and self-consistent as the original work. The main genre it develops is also an extremely rare genre.

I feel like I can go a unique way. It just doesn't feel iconic. For example, you can create a stronger killing move. In other words, a more comprehensive and iconic killing move. It can be developed after becoming a fairy, such as swallowing the sky and eating the earth, permanently losing its own fixed Dao marks, and decomposing the enemies within the range into Dao marks to devour. It is ineffective against stronger enemies or enemies with protective ultimate moves.

It looks really good. I have never seen someone majoring in esophagus and minoring in law. Both paths have core competencies and are not a hindrance. He also followed his own plot instead of following Fang Yuan closely. [Laugh]

When does the protagonist recite poetry? Only by reciting poetry can he be qualified to become a deity.

Is this one gone? The ten-turn pure net Gu is so terrifying.

The Net Gu is really terrifying, the Tang Family Immortal has committed a heinous crime [crying]

Lin Xianzun also fell, and Bu Ningzhuo followed in his footsteps😭 It is indeed a ten-turn killer move, so terrifying!

As expected, the Tenth Turn Net Gu is so terrifying.