Rebirth*******

From the previous article on Rebirth, I know that this book has a special angle. Especially seeing the shaping of the Xia family's mother and daughter, Xia Jiu's red pupils setting can be used as a specific advancement in the work or as an introduction to the development of fantasy\superpowers. And Xia Ruolan, the "mother", has an out-of-the-box and lively "big sister" image that directly breaks through the usual impression of the protagonist's parents being serious and conservative in the rebirth novel. Different from other rebirth novels for children, with Xia Ruolan as the foundation, the male protagonist has the possibility to accumulate wealth earlier and faster, and even develop emotions faster, without necessarily following the narrative logic of conventional rebirth novels. (I personally hope that the Crystal Palace can be built before high school in the timeline of the article, and that it can be tougher in the showdown with parents other than Xia) [Understood] From the narrative point of view, I don't know if it is the author's personal experience, but in short, my expectations are high. [Love][Like]

The writing style is good, I hope it won't be limited to single, double, and triple. Join when you should join, and be a fierce Shura field. [Adoration] No, I still hate bro. There will be more storylines about bro in the future, which is boring.

Judging from the author's current writing style, if the author does not mess around, the quality of this book will definitely not be low. The entire story line is relatively clear, and the content is rich in connotations. It reflects and satirizes reality to a certain extent. Overall, it is a good work. But! But! I want to emphasize one point. If possible, the author should try to make as few typos as possible. Please. This is a story about an "angel" ("angel" refers to the protagonist) who redeems and protects others. It is also a story about the protagonist's self-rescue. It is also a work worthy of thinking and reflection (no one can make mistakes without being a sage, so use this as a mirror to reflect yourself). It is true that there are a thousand readers and a thousand Hamlets, not to mention that the author also has to eat. The current book score is not very good, and there are some negative reviews. I don't know what the author will think, but I will always support you! (But we are students, we have no financial strength and can only generate electricity for love (┯_┯)) I support you, the author! There will be times when the wind blows and the waves break, so hang up your sails and sail across the sea!

It's really good-looking, but the way the behavior and age are written feels like they're separated. It's obviously a 5 or 6-year-old kid in the first grade of elementary school, but it's written like a junior high school student or even a high school student. One thing is good. After reading so many rebirth stories, there are finally smart people who can see the strong separation between the protagonist's behavior and age [face covering] Another point, what I like most is that the heroine of the yandere novel is finally not written in the way of "redemption from a childhood meeting", "childhood promise", "childhood sweetheart's promise to get married", where the heroine expresses her feelings for the hero. This kind of subject matter written since childhood really attracts me.

Very good book. If it can be written with characteristics within the original framework without being toxic, it will be better than too many 🍅 books. The character design is also good and quite interesting. The pace of the plot is a little slow, and it's still five or six years old after more than a hundred chapters. Although the plot arrangement is okay, it still makes people a little anxious.

It's very good to read, much better than many novels. Although there are some flaws in some places, the book is also very good. I hope the author's book will become a big hit. Also, one update a day is not enough to read.

It's great. I love watching it. Author, when is the plot of junior high school or high school? I want to see the sweet life in the future, preferably in the school of Xia Jiu and Cheng Qingmeng. When can I see their yandere side? I want to see Shura Field, and then the protagonist is ruthlessly repairing her teeth [laughing evilly]. At that time, the elder sister can taste the big cabbage of the protagonist, and she wants to see the archangel bully the little angel.

It's a good reading experience, and there's nothing toxic about it so far.

It's a very good book. In my opinion, it's not poisonous, and the plot is also very good~o('▽')o

I think the good thing about this book is that he depicts the characters very well. Through a series of fragmented plots, the characters presented to us are very vivid, and the plot is very in-depth. It can definitely be called a fine book.

This is a healing novel! The ups and downs of the plot are very attractive to me, especially the part where the plotter is finally solved by the little angel. Everyone has their own personality formed by the environment, and the arrangement is very good. The protagonist is very Asashi, which may be stupid in Japanese novels, but in China, the little angel is like a sun, warming everyone, illuminating the hearts of supporting characters, and changing the tragic fate of each character. I hope that each of us can encounter our own gentle sun in times of crisis and get through the difficulties [Love][Love][Love]

The writing was really good, but the plot at the beginning made me forget that this was a yandere novel. It wasn't until I saw Xia Ruolan that I remembered the name of the book. The writing is also good, but will Xia Ruolan accept it?

Not enough, big. Tell me, how many yanderes are there? Moreover, if it is so well written, how can you expect me to read it and read it into other books? (Writing something so real and so good is life-threatening) [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] The yandere has no obvious expression at the moment, but the writing is very good. It doesn't appear superficial but is actually the result. [Sinister smile]

This book is really good. I haven't seen such good-looking daily writing in a long time. Even though I can't calm down and read the plot carefully, I read it step by step. I hope the author can write better and better, and update it as soon as possible [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

It's good to watch, but some parts seem a bit too exciting for the protagonist's first-year career. Moreover, it also has to write 23456, the first, second and third grade of high school. I feel like I can write about daily life!

It's better, not too toxic, and the characters in it are also very good. It's quite warm, with the cute Qing Meng, the slightly yandere Jiu'er, and the quirky Sister Xia. Great cheers for the author!

The writing is very good, and the descriptions of people are very good, whether it is an old man or a child, it is just that there is a little relaxation in the relationship. Xia Ruolan's love aspect feels a bit too radical, and the male protagonist's advantage in future time travel is a bit underused.

It's a good read, a warm daily life. When I read it, I felt like I could feel the warm afternoon sun shining on my body, and the comfort of soaking in hot springs and drinking sparkling water, but it was not boring. I just felt that the protagonist was too pitiful in life (living is so tiring), and always thought about others. Maybe the author wanted to portray mutual redemption, but I didn't really feel that the protagonist was redeemed. Maybe I understood it wrong [send heart], but I still like it very much. I haven't found any poisonous points so far. It's worth reading [top post]

I love reading it, I love reading it so much. The more I read it, the more excited I am. I don't even want to waste my money. Fortunately, I am strong-willed and suppress the idea of ​​giving gifts. Brothers, praise me, especially the author. I almost gave you a gift @lazy person

It's very interesting, very warm, very healing. The writing is sympathetic and has a good atmosphere. There are not too many complicated plots. It's wonderful!

The character creation is relatively perfect, and the emotional lines are relatively thin. Even I, who has experienced the Mi family knife technique, was struck by the knife.

The beginning part is very beautiful, especially Huangzhuang. It can be seen that the author really put great care into it. As for the end, it seems a bit bland. Well, it can be said to be completely sweet. Some of it is a bit hard to read. I hate this kind of overly sweet one. I still prefer the kind that is sour, sweet and slightly bitter, but it is still good anyway. I wish the author will make it faster and faster.

This book is worth recommending. As an ordinary reborn person, the story told is very exciting. Although it is short and weak, it saves not only his own childhood but also the beauty of the world.

Worth thinking about, childish and warm, this book has few regrets. It fills the vacancies and undetectable desires in the readers' hearts. However, the language of this book is not fluent enough. While writing emotionally, don't forget about reasonable and smooth layout.

As I read it, it gave me the same feeling as when I was playing "Searching for Summer Treasures". The plot was unexpectedly brilliant, and the summary at the end of the page was also very artistic. It was a very touching book.

I love reading it. I hope the author can keep updating it and never stop updating it!

When you read it, you will unconsciously ignore that the protagonist is reborn. It is very warm. When listening to other books, I always feel inexplicably impetuous, but this book calms down after listening to it. It is very good.

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The writing is quite good, but there are some minor problems occasionally, such as when children cook, children are actually strong enough to pick up the pot. [Cover face] There is also some time difference when making cross-border phone calls. As for picking people up from relatives, that's fine. After all, novels have to have some room for fantasy.

I watched it all in one sitting. Especially Qi Sheng and Liu Dao's smooth handling of the plot. I love Sister Xia Ruolan so much. Also [smirk] We are still in the stage of childhood, so we will have to wait until later for being yandere.