An ideal without road signs
Still rippling in the wine glass
untouchable wounds
Maybe it's rusty and hot.
Life is worn away by the gloomy time
Then it became increasingly sharp
But it is uncontrollable sadness and despair
Reader comments
As someone who only reads Western fantasy, this book has a stronger flavor of Western fantasy than any other book I have read on Tomato so far.
After reading two chapters, I found that there is no evaluation yet, so I would like to offer one to encourage the author.
Why I like Western Fantasy is because the stories are often unconventional, making it impossible to guess whether the protagonist's character or the direction of the story. The DND-like world has multi-racial settings, mysterious fantasy colors and epic strokes.
It is rare that the author does not throw away various worldview settings at the beginning of the chapter, and the writing is relatively smooth. Let me continue my review after I finish reading the next chapters~
The introduction of the copywriting is very short, but it gives people a sense of mystery, metaphors for abstract psychological description, and hints at the direction of the story. I personally like this. But for other readers, they may not understand what they are talking about. I think I can write in more detail without abandoning this style of writing~
Finally, I feel that there may not be many real readers of Western Fantasy.
This is a very authentic Western fantasy novel. The pace at the beginning is relatively slow. The author describes a Western fantasy world of swords and magic in great detail. The author's writing style is also quite good, and the characters in the novel are all vivid. You can feel that they are all people with stories. It is a hundred times better than those Western fantasy novels that pretend to be more than others. However, the Western fantasy drama is an abyss, and it is normal to not know what is good.
As someone who only reads Western fantasy, this book has a stronger flavor of Western fantasy than any other book I have read on Tomato so far. After reading two chapters, I found that there is no evaluation yet, so I would like to offer one to encourage the author. Why I like Western Fantasy is because the stories are often unconventional, making it impossible to guess whether the protagonist's character or the direction of the story. The DND-like world has multi-racial settings, mysterious fantasy colors and epic strokes. It is rare that the author does not throw away various worldview settings at the beginning of the chapter, and the writing is relatively smooth. Let me continue my review after I finish reading the next chapters~ The introduction of the copywriting is very short, but it gives people a sense of mystery, metaphors for abstract psychological description, and hints at the direction of the story. I personally like this. But for other readers, they may not understand what they are talking about. I think I can write in more detail without abandoning this style of writing~ Finally, I feel that there may not be many real readers of Western Fantasy.
This is a very authentic Western fantasy novel. The pace at the beginning is relatively slow. The author describes a Western fantasy world of swords and magic in great detail. The author's writing style is also quite good, and the characters in the novel are all vivid. You can feel that they are all people with stories. It is a hundred times better than those Western fantasy novels that pretend to be more than others. However, the Western fantasy drama is an abyss, and it is normal to not know what is good.