Genshin Impact Arena: Summoning Neuvillette from the Start

Personally, I feel it's a bit nonsense. I feel that the supporting roles have more roles than the protagonist's. Also, the protagonist's awakening is a bit blurry. Maybe it's my personal reasons. Author, could you please stop writing so much?

To be honest, I don't like this book very much. The content is too cumbersome, and the supporting roles are more important than the protagonists. Moreover, some people read it based on the title, such as me, but I rarely see Villette. I suggest that some corrections be made.

There are too many supporting characters and too little main content. The foils are too much and it took me a long time to write but I couldn't get to the point. Let's practice my writing skills before coming back.

It feels a bit too wordy, for example, the awakening. Other novels start with the first chapter and finish the awakening in the second chapter. This chapter is in the eighth chapter, and the awakening is almost completed.

How come you are so good at water [laughs awkwardly]

The taste of pretentious writing about ancient cities is too strong

In fact, overall it's okay, but why is it not updated? I***************

The protagonist has a lot of flaws and is too grinding.

It feels like Gao Ming is talking about the miserable situation of others. The protagonist has no idea about the situation at all, and he can't use his skills at the beginning. I looked so speechless.

It was too watery. The awakening at the beginning lasted for ten chapters, and some of it was missing a lot. I was convinced.