Dream of Red Mansions: Jia Huan Wants to Stand Up

What did the author think when writing Dream of Red Mansions in Dream of Red Mansions?

There are two major pitfalls in writing male pornographic novels: one is not to accept gold hairpins (which does not mean that you must accept them all), and the other is to create an original female protagonist. You've all taken advantage of it [covering face], just like writing an eight-legged essay without breaking the title, no matter how good the writing is, it's useless. But aside from this, the writing is really good and beautiful! I hope the author will continue to work hard. Come on!

Why must the heroine of Red Mansion be Lin Daiyu? I think the writing is quite good. The author's writing skills are very solid. There are no idioms and sentences from illiterate authors. It's very comfortable to watch. The pace is just a little slow. However, I still write according to my own outline and don't let bad reviews affect my mood. Everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables. Only RMB can be liked by everyone.

Except for some minor details, it's overall good. It's a lot more fun, the pace is fast, the logic is clear, and the plot is coherent. Just send me my first five-star and collection. Come on, author!

Who is the heroine? Is it Lin Daiyu? Is this original with the heroine? Not long ago, Lin Daiyu was about to propose marriage to some prince [angry]

Can the author write fifty chapters in one day? I'm so tired waiting for one chapter every day.

It must be given a five-star rating, otherwise how could I be the only one tasting this poison?

Not bad. I've read all the chapters. Come on

The writing style of the whole Tomato is the most consistent with the original work, the logic is clear and reasonable, and the characters are well created. The protagonist is too omnipotent and knows everything. This is still a problem, but compared to the system novel, I don't know how much better it is. The protagonist does not deliberately favor Daiyu or Baochai. This is really good. Everything changes slowly and there is no feeling of being nosy.

I like this book very much, so I give it five stars⭐The author needs to update more. (*^_^*)

I've read a lot of Red Mansions fan fiction, and this one ranks among the top.

When I saw Chapter 157, I was suddenly poisoned ~ Goodbye! ~No~ I'll never see you again~

Well written, good luck to the author

Well written, keep it up

The plot is reasonable and close to life!

It's okay, but the main character is short. We can add some content about what the main character does, interspersed with writing.

The little frozen cat in this book is well written, the characters are very three-dimensional, and the storyline is also good. Good luck, author.

The writing is smooth and close to the original style, which is rare

Very exciting, very novel creation, definitely the best among the Red Mansions

Not bad, well written

Keep up the good work, author

Good article writing

Very good, thank you to the author!

Very interesting, you can watch it

Not bad but not enough

Very good, the more you look at it, the better it looks

The content is well written

Good-looking, good-looking, super good-looking

Good, good, good, good

Nice work, I'll check it out later