The White Jade Capital in the Heavens Is No Match for Three Thousand Miles of the Mortal World

I have read Chapter 52, and it seems to be very good so far. The male and female protagonists are not broken, the plot logic is smooth, and there are no poisonous points. I have read a lot of this kind of novel. The environment in which the male and female protagonists grew up determines the difference in their personalities and how they behave. The female protagonist is a child who grew up in love, and her parents taught her She is well-raised, understands shame and etiquette, is compassionate but sees clearly the form and is not blind to the Madonna. The heroine is weak but not pretentious when she enters a strange environment. When she sees the appearance of the hero, she does not drool like some girls in heat. I like the heroine very much and I hope she will keep it up in the future. The male protagonist is also good, with a very distinctive personality, extremely lacking in love, and selfish. People who have been in the dark for a long time will be burned when they suddenly encounter the light. But once they get used to it and experience the beauty, they can never go back to the darkness. So he puts on a false mask, approaches the female protagonist, and gets lost in the sweet lies, but the fake is fake after all. I look forward to the plot after the male protagonist loses his horse😘. This kind of novel has two endings. One is that the male protagonist changes for love, learns to reflect, slowly becomes better under the influence of the female protagonist, completely escapes from the darkness, grows together with the female protagonist, understands each other, and truly lives in the sun from now on. The other is that the male protagonist is willing to sink into the darkness, but drags the female protagonist into the quagmire, like the scumbag man in traditional abuse novels, no matter what he does What an outrageous mistake, anyway, I don't reflect on it, but I blame it on the heroine, using violent and cruel methods to force the heroine to surrender. Over time, the heroine becomes servile and chooses to compromise, or she can't bear it and chooses to die to gain freedom (this is relatively rare), but I prefer the first one. I hope that in the end it is the hero who changes, rather than the heroine who has no choice but to compromise.

The male protagonist is really heinous to people other than the female protagonist. The female protagonist is really kind and beautiful. I want to know what the female protagonist will do when she knows the true identity of the male protagonist. I think be is the best ending between them.

It's good-looking. To people other than the female protagonist, the male protagonist is really bad. He's just like the villain dungeon boss that the righteous protagonist will fight in the fairy tales. I don't know when Yi Xiang will discover his true identity. I look forward to it^ ^. The author's writing style is not jerky at all. I like it very much~ (I rarely write reviews because I don't know what to write... But your writing is really good. I want you to know that someone is reading it. Come on^ ^

It's good to watch, but the male protagonist is so vicious that I feel like it. I love the female protagonist so much. Her family has really raised her well and has the core socialist values. It's a pity that she has traveled to such a place. I'm very curious about what the author will do in the future. For now, it definitely deserves a five-star rating. The characters are well drawn and the cat lady is so cute. The most important thing is that there is no female rivalry!!! I love this so much 😘😘😘

The male protagonist is the type of dark villain male protagonist. He is selfish, has no humanity, and has an absolute preference for the female protagonist (there is always a feeling that one person is willing to spend the rest of his life generously because of his preference). In order to make the female protagonist like him, he puts on another face in front of the female protagonist, but it is all because he truly falls in love with the female protagonist. Human beings have thousands of faces. Who can say that this side in front of the female protagonist is not true (but this side is only for the female protagonist) The heroine's character is also very cute, like a little sun, kind, but I don't know what will happen if I find out the hero's true nature in the future. If she can sort it out, it will be really great! If the female protagonist discovers the true nature of the male protagonist in the later stage, I would feel better if the performance is like falling in love and not regretting it for other reasons (because of the heroine's performance, I feel that although she looks a bit soft in plain sight, she is actually the kind of person who is firm and brave in her heart). For everyone They will be kind to all the beings they meet, but they will not mind raising weapons once they threaten themselves and the people they care about. (It is very similar to the heroine in an apocalyptic novel I read a long time ago in the early stage of peace. Although the heroine has changed a lot in the later period, her deepest essence has not changed, which is the feeling of becoming a big sun from a small sun) I feel that the heroine is still in the shaping stage (she is just like a newborn baby when she first enters the world of cultivation). The look and feel is very good right now 👍. People have thousands of faces, and people's opinions will change based on their experiences. Each character is uniquely created, so keep up the hard work💪 In fact, I also wanted to write a novel before, and the character design I thought was similar to this one (the only difference is that the male and female protagonists develop each other) but I didn't write it. I didn't expect to see this novel. It's really exciting! Don't stop it!

What can I say, this is really well written. However, in the early stages of the story, the overall flow is downhill. As a reader, it seems a bit depressing and uncomfortable, too frustrating and not satisfying enough. It's hard to stick with it, and some readers may have been directly persuaded to quit. But as I kept reading like this, in the ginseng section, I finally felt a little more comfortable and not so aggrieved. The male protagonist has a very good personality and is very charming, and the female protagonist is also very sunny and kind-hearted. After getting sick, she obviously no longer feels as innocent and lively as before. When I watched it before, I felt that I really wanted the male protagonist to recover quickly and then go to the world of immortals to kill people, because it was too frustrating, but now that I'm watching it, I think this kind of short story is not bad. (The ending of the story must not be about two people becoming mortals, otherwise I will vomit blood directly! Don't let the protagonist be unlucky, don't let the protagonist be wronged! 🤦) Keep up the good work, author! The writing is very good, but I feel that what is missing now is the shaping of the storyline and how to attract people, lay hooks, and create various exciting points. The author's story is not very exciting. Can it be said that it is not exciting at all? As for online articles, in fact, most people read novels to relax. This story is really a bit too frustrating, making people feel depressed and uncomfortable. (To put it harshly, if you make readers feel aggrieved, they will stop reading it. Abuse is the point of abuse. This is aggrieved) Give it more and feel better, really, otherwise it would be too uncomfortable to watch!!!! 🤦 I hope the author will not give up and keep writing like this. I haven't seen such a charming male protagonist for a long time, and she is also a sunny and gentle female protagonist. Keep up the good work and hope there will be a good ending! Be comfortable and become immortals together, or return to modern times together.

It's okay. I feel that the heroine is relatively pure to the hero, like a beam of light. The hero is the kind that is darker and gloomier. He is pretending in front of the heroine or before he achieves his goal. It's a bit like a kind of redemption.

I like it, the cat lady is cute, cute and cute!! And the male protagonist really shocked me, he was a complete bad guy, but he damned me, because he was really only nice to the female protagonist, wow, wow, wow!! This guy can still pretend to be innocent, so sexy! But what I'm more worried about now is whether the heroine will be able to break the defense when she learns the true identity of the bad guy, and then give the readers a big torture scene 😢, don't wow, don't wow, don't be too sad, just give a little bit of glass slag, and then make peace immediately after three chapters, hahahahahahahahaha. However, the female protagonist is a bit too kind, and sometimes she feels she ignores the male protagonist (sorry, I am a pure sugar addict who likes to watch love dramas when I have nothing to do). I hope that the female protagonist's character will become better in the future, and she will not be so easy to be soft to people (except for the male protagonist hehehehehehehe)

Overall it's quite interesting, the male protagonist is a real villain. I just hope that the male protagonist will not be whitewashed, regardless of whether the ending is he or be. What I hope to be moved by is the ending of the evil male protagonist: ①In the ending, the male protagonist continues to do evil, but likes the female protagonist, he will restrain himself in front of the female protagonist, will be hypocritical and pretentious, and pretend to be pitiful when he feels wronged. In version 1.0, The heroine never knew the true face of the hero, and she fell in love with him forever and agreed on the next life. This version is based on the fact that the heroine has always been a pretty girl. In version 2.0, The female protagonist knows the true face of the male protagonist, and then she becomes afraid. The male protagonist reveals his true face, makes no secret of his possession of the female protagonist, and threatens the female protagonist in various ways. The female protagonist resists in vain and finally loses to love and warmth and ends up with the evil male protagonist. This version is strong love. In version 3.0, The female protagonist understands the true face of the male protagonist, but in the end she decides to tolerate him because he is the only warmth she brings to this world. The female protagonist has seen the weak and the strong and the warmth and coldness of human nature in the world of immortality, and gradually moves closer to the male protagonist. However, she does not want to be a casual good person or a bad person, and can understand that the male protagonist is a villain and protect her shortcomings. The male protagonist is powerful and dotes on his wife, while the female protagonist protects her husband. Evenly matched, this kind of writing is generally difficult to grasp. Therefore, the heroine (strength, strength) is not mentioned above to protect her husband. ②Be, it should be that the female protagonist runs away after learning the true identity of the male protagonist, and then joins the good guys to deal with the male protagonist, protects the people of the world, and kills all evil spirits. In the end, the male protagonist destroys the world. After the female protagonist kills the male protagonist in tears, she gains the merits of this world, ascends, and returns to modern times. If the female protagonist loves the male protagonist more, she should kill the male protagonist, use her merits to make him reborn, and then cultivate the truth, goodness and beauty of the male protagonist, and finally the two of them will be together. No more making it up, that's it 😄

It's nice to watch, but the male protagonist is really quite bad because of his personal experience and the society is too dark. The female protagonist is really in line with the girl raised under the red flag raised by the socialist society. I think it may be be, but he doesn't feel appropriate.